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Happy Birthday!
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I strongly believe the 'mighty push' has been David's love. They say love conquers all. Right? Beautiful, Gary. The description of the 'in between' was really impressive, almost poetic. A very nice piece.
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I liked how you described the upcoming storm, outside and inside. The dynamic will definitely change with the new arrivals, soooo 'Crossing lines' next?
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I'm glad we all agree that the doc was a creep and other colorful things, and now we're glad he is dead. It felt really good to write this actually. I understand your not trusting Andra yet, after everything that happened... So sorry for your nails. Thank you, Def!
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'...violently bites the hand held over his mouth. That way he can drink Diarmad’s blood, which would complete the mating. Why didn't I think of that? Too late now. Finally someone who appreciates the suspense. But reading about hanging from a cliff for a whole week made me feel bad. Almost. Thank you for your review, Peter!
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I didn't read the story this belongs to, but I got a good feeling about this family. It's how it should be, controlled trust.
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Okay I'm on the 'He is still alive' team. I couldn't read as fast as I would have liked. I might even have skipped some parts only to reach the end faster. Of course I read it a second time afterwards.
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I can't believe it! You can't do this to me! I'm sitting here all creeped out and that is the end?! I want a solution. Great job, Val. Wow.
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Great story, Drew! I like that Luke wants to fight for their friendship. But the end? Really? You're worse than me! lol
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Thank you for taking the time to read the whole story. 'I expect the precipitous mating was to give Diarmad the strength to protect himself and rescue Noel.' I love it when my readers speculate! It help me to become a better writer. I really appreciate your comment!
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Before something worse could happen, Noël found his powers. Nobody can know what would have happened if he hadn't, though. I don't think the Seraei have the abilities to track a phone. Thank you for your comment, Cannd! 'Can't think of a nicer end for him.' You and me both.
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Very traditional take. I somehow pictured men with beards singing this. Definitely singing though. Great carol.
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Poetry prompt 16 - Christmas carol
Aditus commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Poetry prompt 16 - Christmas carol
Yes, I'm running right beside you! Every year we want to start early but the things we have to do seem to become more and more. No time for contemplation or tranquility. Of course I had to read it loud again, but I was alone this time except fot the cats. May be next year...do you think that too? You captured December hectic and regrets very well. -
Somehow I felt they needed something meaningful for the last part of their story. I'm glad it worked out. 'What a wonderful story.' Thank you for that, Parker!
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The song just doesn't leave me alone. I couldn't let it end without hope. I always like my guys too much for an unhappy ending, lol. I'm sorry for making you cry, but I'm happy you liked it anyway. Thank you, Puppi!
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They had to be together! Obstacles had to be mastered. A difficult piece, so thank you for your help. You pointed at the parts that needed to be polished.
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Thank you, Reader! Those two didn't let me alone. Although, for Blackout I didn't know what to write and almost didn't make the deadline. I think it a good end for the series.
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Thank you for reading Clockwise! I'm glad you enjoyed the series. I couldn't let them be without hope. I like my guys too much for being this cruel.
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The story still comes back to me from time to time. I agree with other reviewers the ghost was an unexpected twist but what I liked most was that in the end they got back together again, even though they have been bad guys. They suffered enough. Great story!
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Aww, why not? I love when readers speculate. I really enjoyed writing the part were Noel found his powers. Thank you for your review, Lit!
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Thanks to Puppi I can't get this one out of my head!
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A sweet story in difficult times. Thanks for sharing.
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Either you suffer from migraine or you know someone who does. I know I once parked the car and didn't know where and when R. found it, it turned out I just dropped it more or less in the middle of the street. To have someone who drops everything to come and get you, again and again, that's love. Beautiful story, Renee.
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You think he still lives after getting his head smashed to pulp and being burned????? To the other thing ---- Glad you loved it!
