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mogwhy

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  1. mogwhy

    Chapter 65

    you know i love you, caz, but where is my pitchfork. i may have overlooked this story, but now i'm hooked and want more! <cheep, cheep>
  2. mogwhy

    People of a Life

    thanks reader. everyone has a story to tell. i listen to them all, because each has something for us to learn
  3. mogwhy

    Early Morning

    in these i can see the scene that the words i hear
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    Chapter 10 - Ian

    omg horrible thought: Anna is who Adam is trying to find!
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    Chapter 12

    wonderful chapter. happy tears that they got this far and happy that Marcus didn't drag it out too much
  6. the short answer i no.... but like @Valkyrie said; some chapter seem short even if the are 2000+ long, whereas some short ones drag. as long as the story is advancing length doesn't matter. there are a few stories that i've read that avg 6500+ per chapter. then the longest was over 17,000. others are under 900. i read them all, as long as the story is interesting
  7. hope you had a great birthday. sorry i missed it
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    Puddles and Friends

    i agree with you about ignoring others. Yes it would mean you love them. the problem is the word love. there is so many kinds of "love" but must are programmed to think of the romantic type. i could not stand by and watch a strange jump from the bridge. i that moment, i love him. never saw him again but i remember him and loved him, if only for a moment. thanks for reading and for the comments.
  9. ~~~writer vibes for caz~~~ i saw mr. sandman sulking around here. i'm gonna grab him and tie him done. wish me luck. nighty night all. take care and be well
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    The Seashell

    if I were a little girl, I'd be squeeeeing over this one. great descriptions. just a beautiful weaving of Greek mythology and a love story! i laughed. i cried. and was pleasantly surprised by the ending.
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  11. very interesting
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    Puddles and Friends

    thanks. i'm not sure how amazing it is, but its what is in my heart
  13. mogwhy

    Epilogue

    well considering this is only the second story of yours i've read....i don't recognize it.
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    Epilogue

    ohhh i hope this is the start of another story!
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    The Fruits of Faith

    loved it! shall i squeee like a little girl? i PM' you
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    Puddles and Friends

    i'd be honored! just sign my name
  17. mogwhy

    For tim

    the love shines. you can't cage the wind but, you can grab a sail and ride the wind. enjoy the ride. together you'll soar
  18. Wolfie, i actually manage to read a chapter w/o trauma surfacing. very nice chapter. in my life i've been lucky enough that almost the cops i've might have been nice, good cops.
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    Real

    i thank the universe that you are real and have graced my part of the universe.
  20. i and my family actually rode a passenger train. from Denver CO to Detroit MI. it was an adventure. the bathrooms were TINY.
  21. i have a friend who built and lived in a berm house. this about 15 years ago. it was so cool. even in the hot CO weather is was comfortable and a lot bright than i thought it would be. it startle me when the hubby came in and announced "i'm finished mowing the roof"
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    Go

    thanks. it's a daily thing for me
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    Go

    thanks caz
  24. so very true! love the line about the t-shirt
  25. mogwhy

    Go

    I have no where to go. So I will endure another slap. Another round of humiliation. One more stab in the back. Another crumb of hope, this time will be different. Crushed under the weight of silence. Return, I must, time and time again because I have no where to go.
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