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1. Sun drizzles light among the tree tops. White fluffy cloud float on blue skies. Breezy wind currents blow across my brow. Reclining on a grassy hill, allowing my body to feel. Long ago days of childish laughter. College days lost in lover’s arms. Today lovely memories and soft sighs. 2. Dance wildly with me and awaken my heart to the moments that become memories.. Flow lightly through the channels of my heart, and plant memories to relive. Tread soft
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i read this as so as you posted it and i liked it, but like with most things i read, i like to let them marinate and re-taste later. i find the subtleties then. the layers. the pain rings through this and connects.
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thanks aviana i speak my truth, i can't do it any less. all i can do is hold out my hand and offer myself, i just hope it is enough
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still giggling over this
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wow. i've read 3 love poems today (JIMHO) and all were different in flavor but all left me saying wow
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loved this chapter. just like i love all the others. can't wait (but i will) for where the story goes from here.
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ohhh sounds so good
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beautifully done. some goodbyes are more gut-wrenching than others, but all bring pain to some degree. maybe if we could see goodbyes not as endings, but the beginnings of new chapters in our book of life
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powerful. invokes memories for me
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i have found that some times just hanging around math geeks, a little knowledge rubs off,
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1. Still and all, why bother? Why continue to believe the words they speak? Why hope today will be better? Because if I don’t, I’m no better than them. I would rather be the one who is hurting, than to visit that pain on anyone else. Even if it cuts, like a dagger through the soul. I will not live with regrets. 2. As my life slips away, sometime on white water rapids. I have no regrets about the people I’ve met in my life. Some I remember with gre
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are people good or evil? humans, like tim said are flawed. it comes(at least to me) the choices we make. like tim, i've done things i can't atone for, but if i drown in the darkness, evil wins. i can't change my past i can only change my future. the fact thank i can recognize the bad i've done and agonize over it, makes me "good side". evil can't do that. that bad things that are done to me? i've had to forgive those who did it. not forget those things, nor ever trust those people but so i don't lose me in the darkness. again its a choice. i make it sound so easy--so far from easy, i fight everyday. most label me as "naive", "miss goody-two-shoes" and "don't get reality". then i tell them my past they either don't believe it(at 1st) or just stare at me, dumb founded.
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thank you def. i'm glad people are understanding what i'm trying to say
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thanks avianna. i think everyone get scared to just be
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thanks AC. i was self-editing so much, that i was losing me
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thanks. you make perfect sense, although i tend to go feet 1st(since birth) i decide awhile ago when i heard a line in a song about living lies. i didn't live a lie, more like i lived in boxes, and no one knew all my boxes. i stopped. that was eye-opening for sure
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1. The shadows in your eyes, Talk of pain, hurt, betrayal. Shadows haunt your movement. Mouth smiles, never reaching your eyes. So many fooled. You sing. You laugh. No one looks at the bars covering your heart. Are they there to keep you in? Or others out. 2. I used keep my thoughts, feelings and dreams imprisoned. If I let them out, people might not like me anymore, and me is all I have. Releasing the voice to what’s inside me, may lose me some people in
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tears man, just tears
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loving the dinner so far. can't wait for the rest. i can't even imagine what kind of spicy dessert you got planned
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i've read one of the three. i'm not ready to read Levko, but i know i will. your writing brings forth many emotions and i know this story, and i'm not there yet. After the Past, it to is in the list, but there is just so many hours in the day. Delicious is one of the funniest things i've read. tears running down my face funny, really. like i said, you write so well you can put the reader right there, in the place.
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read all 5. loved them all, caz. wouldn't mind hearing more stories from here
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i've enjoyed this series! i could read more about these characters. well done!
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its how you break the cycle
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