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I see you have a strong view of it, @Timothy M.. However, if you look here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oral_hygiene#Mouthwash there are benefits to using Mouthwash, which is supported by the American Dental Association. It's more than just "bad breath," but has other uses. Brushing + Mouthwash = removal of more plaque + prevention of tooth decay.

I'm curious as to why the word "mouthwash." The only times I've seen it used, was when a character used said item when brushing teeth. Unless, you're meaning someone using it in an erotic manner. Then... wtf! LOL.

Oh, heads up. The Spoiler Preview is about 5,500 words.

Quoting myself from my blog: I'm currently at ~7,500 Words and 2 chapters. The first chapter takes place on the Amtrak Auto Train from Sanford, FL to Lorton, VA. A sneak peak of Chapter 1 Let me know what you think! EDIT: Story is now posted as a regular project.

I do believe you enhanced the original version. Good job, and poor Bradley.

YouTube auto-populates, not sure about the rest.

This is a very beautifully written Valentine's day story. A very interesting take on how Cupids interact with other angels, and how they get compatible humans together.

This is the second Angel and Imp story by Timothy M. A must read, along with the other two in the trilogy of stories.

This is the First Angel and Imp story by Timothy M. The characters are beautiful, and well craft. A must read.

This is the third Angel and Imp story by Timothy M. The ingenuity and development of the characters from the start of the series has been beautiful. A must read.

This story was so well-written, had I not known it was a FanFic, I would have suspected it of being the start of a new series. The world and characters come alive. You feel for the struggle the main character has with his family. Excellent read.

Very well-written, and believable characters. Was a fun read. Some clunky dialogue, which is why I rated it 4 out of 5 stars.

I enjoyed the story and the characters. Very well done.

I'm having difficulties finding this one. The title alone seems interesting. I have one that is "In Process" but it's active. Next installment is with my editors.

A topic posted by a new user, but appears to be a long time reader, got me thinking. I've seen a lot of "In Progress" stories that have been sitting around untouched, and some of them are untouched for years. I have a couple in that category myself, that I am working on, slow going, but still working on them. So, how do we as writers stop this from happening? Stopping the long-term "In Progress" from happening.

I need a lot more practice with the first person narration. I tried to do a longish short story, and it turned out like crap. It shall be rewritten in the future. EDIT: Lots of I did this, I did that. I went over here. I stayed away. I shot the sheriff.

This is a great short story, which shows the interaction between Teacher and Student. It is part of an Anthology Series and is one of many great ones.

I loved the interaction between the characters. I kind of wish I had a class like Chris did.

A simple story of love during two different generations. One of the final letters got me good, and I teared up. Great read.

It was a great story, and I know how Mike felt walking around his Grandfather's place. I felt the same way. Though never found anything like Mike did. Excellent.

The birds are singing.... we need our favorite great Danes.

Like all the others before me, I love comments on my stories. Some, even give me a chance to expand on stuff or answer questions. I check periodically to see if I have any new ones when I haven't posted in a bit. Though, like Myr said, I have chapters that don't have comments, and I wonder if I just sucked really hard on that one. My issue for me, that I'm working on is, I don't always leave comments. Typically this is on Completed stories. I do a Review, but I don't post chapter comments. I'm actually torn on that. If it's completed, does the author want me to say, "Oh, I hope Joe doesn't die from this! Joe has that amulet of resurrection." and in the next chapter, he's dead, with no hope of coming back. Because it's already written, do chapter comments really help? Which is why I started doing the Reviews for completed stories, as they do help. Having said all that. I am working on leaving more comments.

Thanks, guys. I'll just twitch when I see it and deal with it. j/k Also, my google-fu didn't turn up the other thread about it. I suck...

Pardon me, if this is something that already exists, but I haven't been able to find it. Is there a possibility we can get a button that would delete our Notification History? I clicked on the history the other day and realized I'm about 100+ pages of notifications. I'm not sure what sort of impact it would have, but the ability to clear them would be nice. (OCD neat freak at times.)

Lovely. I enjoyed the visuals this gave off, of a couple working through problems together. One a strong rock of hope, the other being helped and embolden.