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As a hockey fan my whole life, it’s brutal on the ice. A true brotherhood exists in the sport though.
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J.R.R. Tolkien was known for creating languages for his books. He actually started creating languages as a child. He was so good at languages that he was considered for code breaking in WWII.
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A little brotherly love. Noah was quite welcoming. Sharing is caring.
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OMG! 🤐
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Ace’s stories aren’t always rainbows and unicorns. ⚠️
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This horrific tragedy has been on all day in US as well. It’s hard to reconcile a freak occurrence like this. Families, lives and dreams destroyed, or altered. Its understandable to have such a reaction. Hockey is engrained in Canada’s identity. Sending you hugs buddy. 🤗
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I’m so proud of Ryder for calling Teddy. His band mates really let him down. There’s more to life than sex, drugs, and booze. There’s nothing wrong with fun, but support your band brother. Happy that Mrs. Haner didn’t flip her lid too bad. They’ve grown as a family. They listen and think before communicating feelings. They don’t just react in the moment.
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Very well done tim. The emotion felt is quite palpable. I’m connecting quite a bit to April 2nd. Probably because I’ve been dealing with death recently. (I’m not afraid of dying, I’m afraid of being gone)... I so deeply feel this. Your words are beautiful and honest. xo
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Thank you for this article. As a blind individual, visualizing can sometimes be hard. This happens when I’m not given enough info. Descriptions make the world three dimensional. Character description give that character personality. Another great topic this Saturday morning Comsi. I look forward to them.
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Chapter 4 Time to Mend some fences
FormerMember4 commented on FSELL's story chapter in Chapter 4 Time to Mend some fences
I’m really enjoying the story.it never fails, you meet someone often at the worst time. Three months away is a long time. Especially when the new relationship has been more hookup and not actual dating. There’s one thing I’d like to point out, Jamie and Jaime are constantly being interchanged. Every chapter. Not a criticism... just making you aware. Look forward to more. -
I’m really liking the cast of characters so far. Love the auto shop locale. My Danny Sir has a shop. Little Ember is cute. Love a story with an Australian backdrop. Is it Friday yet?
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Rule #1 Always talk big decisions with partner. Rule #2 Don’t go to bed angry. My heart breaks for a child dealing with chemo. The vomiting, back giving out, bones that literally hurt. Like they’re being crushed from inside out. Then a Neulasta shot. I wouldn’t wish on anyone. Certainly not a child. Good chapter you guys.
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The best FU award for telling a principal (Your a sh*tty administrator and bully), goes to Ryder Sullivan. That was long overdo. I’m glad that Ryder corrected Oli though. There’s a time and place... as well as a way to handle things. Ryder has life lessons. Sometimes they mean a hell of a lot more than a school lesson.
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TC2 - Chapter 2: Meet the Grandparents
FormerMember4 commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 2: Meet the Grandparents
Great chapter A. I like that father and son are getting close. Yet, they are still trying to figure each other out. I’m a huge proponent of therapy. Even if I dread going myself. It works. I would be angry and on alert if son was attacked in protective custody with state. Can you say lawsuit DFS?? Looking forward to next chapter. -
Salidar is such a fool. Considering Max’s words way too late. He should have heeded the warning that he was in danger. Grimm was a slight disappointment in this chapter. With 800 years under his belt, he dropped the ball. Never should have conversed with the magi. He is a pacifist, but knew what was at stake. I hate Cliffies like this one. What’s in store for Salidar? How serious is the wound to Max? Will it be him, or Grimm to heal him? He has Fedain blood after all.
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Firstly, my smell is enhanced by blindness. So I understand the visual aspect. Yes, I’m greatly affected by partners scent. It’s home, soothing and reassuring. Just smelling him lowers stress and breathing. It is also what gets me really going when amorous.
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The Human, the Werewolf, and the Vampire
FormerMember4 commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in The Human, the Werewolf, and the Vampire
Oh Eli, so adorable. I love how our hungry little bottom passed out from pleasure. Quinlan is the horndog always ready to go and give pointers... MMMMM! Nolan is just so sweet and innocent. You just want to release that dirty boy waiting to be freed. -
This was a great chapter. Certainly seems to be a trap being set. I really like Phuong. She has that no nonsense straight to the point aura around her.
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A Beauty With Barriers
FormerMember4 commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in A Beauty With Barriers
Victor still makes my skin crawl. I don’t care how lovesick he is... I don’t trust him. The mates are safer together. I hope they start raising their defenses... I feel some bad mojo on the horizon. -
Anthology Flashback: Summer 2010 - Out of This World
FormerMember4 commented on Myr's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Is it Thursday already? My reading list is taunting me now... Are you ever going to finish these...hmm? 📚- 7 comments
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My observations last chapter were correct. The lines have been drawn in the house. Having his fathers support is exactly what Kevin needs. Mr. Williams is making sure that Kevin isn’t another statistic like Roger. Paul is just a disgusting human being. He doesn’t even question why others don’t agree with him. He is so going to self-destruct. I have a box of cracker jacks to enjoy while he does it. Theres such sadness in identical twins who don’t get along.
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BONUS CHAPTER: Green Eyed Monster
FormerMember4 commented on CassieQ's story chapter in BONUS CHAPTER: Green Eyed Monster
Thank you Cassie! You made my day. John was not a welcome distraction, but Mikeal found his inner tiger. A little possessiveness is sexy. ❤️❤️❤️ -
interview Ask an Author 2.0 - #6
FormerMember4 commented on Carlos Hazday's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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Nathan jealous, Alex clearly still interested, and an awkward moment when Tom was introduced to Naomi... This is getting ready to go all sorts of wrong. The funny thing is Don’s house being full of a whole lotta GAY.
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I loved this chapter... Us Jersey boys keep it REAl! Oli had every right to call out the fake sh*t. ✌️ I love the dance. My baby Oli is becoming a man. 😂
