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Another ill-conceived plan by Tasha you figured she would have learned something after the last time.The three are definitely overmatched by the Family their only hope is to have Peter,Grandfather and their allies get involved but how are they going to find out about it?
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Twins cool but a handful.If I know Brad and Tom I believe they are applying the bigotry that happened to them and in their own way they are making sure it's not going to happen to these two boys.
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My problem with the weed is you're starting to have a fair amount of people around while most will be cool there is more of a chance one idiot will ruin it for everybody
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Well I'm glad it was just a misunderstanding and Pat's not really an A**
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I didn't expect you for at least another day hope you're settled and it wasn't too exhausting. Fantastic a son in the house with Tony and Amalia as parents plus the perfect grandparents and three awesome uncles well four if you count Charlie right?That kid going to get a lot of love.
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Yes he is so it's obvious that he's going to need James to be the one to speak to Tasha about this encounter because he knows Hunter will be watching him.Hunter isn't totally evil he told Casper he doesn't like hurting kids but the people he works for do just that so maybe Hunter's conflicting emotions will come into play
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It looks like Hunter is going to be a significant adversary.So Hunter is going to be like hunting them hmm was using that name on purpose LOL. Is Peter's group aware of The Family?Or are they operating below the radar. I don't know it this was mentioned in previous chapters Tasha was thinking it was nice to see the little guy with a friend his own age.That sounds like Casper has been a loner at school I guess by choice because of his unique ability.
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I'm afraid to ask this because talking physics hurts my head.But if James got lighter and physically weaker while flying how was he able to carry Tasha? I like that James and Casper want to help Tasha but they would have to have one hell of a plan I don't know what. Peter won't be surprised to find out James can fly but James doesn't know that .Looking at it from James perspective if he told his Mom and Dad he could fly he maybe afraid they would think he's on drugs
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Update for you my friends
weinerdog commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Update for you my friends
There is nothing I can add to what everybody has already eloquently said except there is no doubt in my mind we will all be still hearing from you for some time .Praying for you God bless- 26 comments
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It's cool to see Amo being buddies with the boys as well as like brothers in some cases better than brothers but no sheep too much. Best of luck with your move
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When you mentioned all the pizza boxes etc. I thought to myself I didn't know Tasha lived with me.No I'm not really that bad.It was never said I don't think but age wise is Tasha around the same peer group as James and Casper?I ask because it would explain how she's living in that place.Is she old enough to sign a rental agreement to live there or is it an empty unused room she helped herself too?I guess we'll find out more details as we go along. And now for a dorky nerdy question can James fly high enough to be picked up on radar just something he should be considering as he gets familiar with his newly discovered ability.I loved Tasha comment "You copping a feel,You little perv?"
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Hawaii only the best from Tony.Is Amalia's English fluent enough to teach here if she wants of course she would have to get certified.What time period is this set in the Tony mentioned sending a telegram that got my attention.It also explains the overly negative reaction Brad and Tom got from their families although sadly there are still reactions like that present day
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That's what they could very well look like
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Wha..?🤔 I have to admit I haven't heard that description before.
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Sounded like a perfect wedding One thing I wasn't sure of Was Brad and Tom BOTH the best man or men.It was such an incredible gesture of Tony to allow Brad and Tom to exchange rings at the same time
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The ICE agent didn't want to go so far to Wisconsin so Gus can prove he's a citizen but they were willing to drive from Duluth based on a blowhard rent-a-cop say so🙄I hope he gets fired from the security company Well now that Gus told Rick that very harrowing experience he had as a child I could see a scenario where Gus notices something wrong about Rick say when Willy Kohler is around.Gus might ask what's wrong and maybe Rick can tell Gus his story.That's just a guess on my part
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So the boys put Amo up to ask Tony about goats.Gee that would really get my goat.Sorry for the worst pun ever.Don't ban me please
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I'm interested to see how James carrying Tasha while flying will work out.Minor prediction here I haven't read ahead on the story on the other site because if I do I might unintentionally give something away in these chapter comments.So my minor prediction is James with Tasha on his back will do the same thing at the building that he did out his bedroom window and for a moment it looks like they are going to fall until at the last moment before hitting ground they become airborne.OK take that with a grain of salt. I have to think that for Tasha to get her wound fixed James parents would have to find out everything. I like the exchange James and Casper had about the anime they were watching.Casper wanted the politics to make sense.Since when does politics make sense?
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If Amado wants to see America they are going to have to take him to places like New York etc. could be fun
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That is something you just can't make up. I bet CL and other authors will use that in future stories When you mentioned adopted family are Tony's Aunt Uncles and cousins Ok with the boys?Also does Tony's dad have family around?
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Perfect way to win over Brad,Tom and Charlie good food.When they bought the ingredients I was trying to figure out what she was going to make.Dandelion is a flower right?I had no idea it was edible.I have to admit first reaction it doesn't sound good to me but I would try it.What is it called?It's not called Dandelion salad is it?
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Nice suspense in this chapter the guys that write action movies got nothing on you.Casper and Tasha have to come up with a place for Tasha to hide unless she has an ability we don't know about yet.These people consider her a threat and they'll be searching for her.
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I get that Brad's Mom was grieving but her logic just boggles my mind.I would hope Tom's parents would look at that situation and try to do something with their son before it's too late but I'm not holding my breath.I'm proud of Tony's Mom and Dad also
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Tasha might be a bad ass but she's inexperienced when you plan something like this you got to do some recon on your foes.Im sure she'll find some way to escape but I hope this will be lesson learned.I'm guessing Casper and Tasha will eventually meet Peter and then game on.I'm wrong more than I'm right usually but I hope I'm right
