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Julie seems nice enough. She took them in, and is helping Connor get a job. Entry level may not even do a background check with the former employer. The encounter with the MIB, was not so bad, but was the warning about M or Greg or Nathan?? There are 3 hims currently in the house, we could just assume it’s M. And after being beaten with a baseball bat, who would not be suspicious. M’s comment about sentient AI makes you wonder if he’s encountered them before.
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Love the retreat and the reserve that the grands have set up for him and his friends. Interesting that there is no mention of him having children there…
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So, is this the same Man in Black, or a clone? Was it a dream or did M rescue him, just to have the MIB appear at their room? M is definitely getting into the sex. And Connor is releasing his past.
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I hope Uncle George sues the school and personally the principal for harming a minor! Best laid plans and all. Pete is protected from the media by his friends. Hopefully the injuries are not too bad and he heals up and can play ball. He’s an athletic young man so healing and PT should get him back in shape. Seems like this news story is upending the town. Hopefully brings about some attitude change about gay people in the area too, but you never know.
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Great chapter, loved the celebrations and the fact they found a gay friendly venue for them all to be able to dance. If the treasure hunt goes well, the boys could be all set financially for life.
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Great conclusion to this section of their story. With new identities, and the wealth from the keep, they are starting a new life, and seem really keen on each other. No more questions about their relationship status… looking forward to more adventures with them.
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Loved this story. Looking forward to further adventures with this new team. All kinds of possibilities. I definitely see how having others with powers to talk to relieves the stress of needing to hide that from loved ones.
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Excellent conclusion to the mysterious ritual. We have an explanation for who was the cause. And the minister is chastised. Hopefully Jamie’s new role with this special squad will be more to his liking, and he can learn more about his powers and how to control them. The minister was not going to willingly create another monster. I do see him as a potential threat to the country with his mind reading powers.
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To The Medical Center We Go
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in To The Medical Center We Go
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More interesting developments. Since Ken and the boys have not spoken yet they don’t know they are working on the same case…seems like the perps left the apartment in a hurry…
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The House at the End of the Road
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The House at the End of the Road
So Connor encounters something strange in the abandoned house, goes unconscious and is rescued by M. Then sees an Orb… unconscious again and wakes up back home. M must have some serious strength or can levitate things… then Connor hears M talking to someone, but there is no one there…. Very mysterious. Sunday with Hannah will be interesting, He needs to tell Hannah about his feelings, but is afraid.- 12 comments
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Good time getting high, and explaining to M why he was not wanting to kiss M. Lousy experience in school, being bullied by his father and people at school. Was Hannah around, then? Then getting the dog and making M happy. Waking up with M in bed was too much, and he gave in to the Kiss. But like we know from the first food. M does not know what to do, and he bit Connor’s tongue… Connor runs into the man in black who calls him by name. Then escapes into the swamp. Hopefully M is safe with Jack to protect him…
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This story is so touching. Looking forward to this revised version. It does seem to flow better. Great intro to the major characters.
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The soul stones may contain good people from the past it sounds like. And maybe they match the dragon eggs? Gordech can now communicate with them in a spoken language. That is very helpful. Great Cliffhanger with the dead walkers coming into the area they need to cleat the stuck gate mechanism…
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This was a difficult chapter. He was a killer, but not a torturer. I still have some hope that maybe Brohm is not dead…
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Interesting mystery caller who knew about Michael, and the mystery man again…. Hannah has some serious issues taking M away from Connor. Maybe Connor will be honest about his feelings for M now too, he’s on his way to save him.
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Connor is beginning to like having M around. The attention is disturbing him some because of some past experience. Is Hannah jealous, or possibly coming to understand Connor more?
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Great chapter, the suspense is palpable. They have the building plans, and there are 3 levels, so maybe they can go under this shield to access where the ritual is happening??
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New story to me. I love the beginning. A boy appears out of nowhere in a swamp. He has a Mother figure. Goddess, maybe. Nice he has no memory of who he is now, it seems like possibly Fae? Or angel, “Michael” definitely caused a reaction. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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Loved the games to subjugate the nobles around Birmingham.
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River seems to be able to physically take care of the stupid client, hopefully the threat is just intimidation, and won’t result in something bad. The smile and feelings for Kenji seem to be sneaking up on River. And now we have a date to look forward to.
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Now that the secret Thomas has been keeping from Zack is out, maybe the can address if. If he doesn’t run away again.
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Simon is getting a new teacher, even if he’s a necromancer and will not feed Yidian desire.
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Awesome chapter, checking out the neural interface connected to the other “bodies” going to the planet surface, space walk on the exterior.. Being vegan myself, the explanation and support for Ian not wanting to eat animals any longer was very nice to read.
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Glad the are going on a quick holiday. The flashback to the past is pretty traumatic, good on Keith for seeming to get over his harsh experience with his father.
