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They escaped the cave with the help of something luminescent. Now back in the daylight a Daemon appears. Hopefully like the rest, this is just a dream. Possibly a premonition of unfinished business with Helmsley. Good cliffhanger.
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They all fought together, and we got the first glimpse of a shadow slayer. And the huge potential gift of sand dragon? Does that mean that they could become sand dragons, then transform into their current form? Love how all of these stories are converging.
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It looked like they got completely lost in the cave system under the keep. This is fresh water so it has to lead somewhere. Maybe after some sleep they will be able to get the light going again.
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Chapter 7: The confrontation.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The confrontation.
So much emotion in this chapter. The the cliffhanger with the question at the end. Mateo needs to figure out who he really wants to be with. Henry also had some soul searching to do, he is the one who out Mateo in the gilded cage, then left him alone… -
Great chapter, both bodies discovered, and some possible clues from their background in High School. From the scene of the crime, blunt force trauma and both being shot, so possible ballistics reports too. I agree that something is off with the principal’s reactions…
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The Paranormal Hits Home
VBlew commented on lawfulneutralmage's story chapter in The Paranormal Hits Home
Great chapter, this portal into another dimension, that the minister knows to search for and to not to look into is frustrating to Jamie. They did excellent on defense. Doctor Who has lots of aliens… this seems more like a kill the alien game though. -
Intriguing flashback. Seems like Mark is a catalyst for good change. And he needs to come back from wherever he was sent before they got to the labyrinth.
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Very interesting chapter. They made it across the desert. Only to be snubbed by these snobbish magical “nobels”. Will be interesting to see what happens.
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Chapter 28: “Do not commit to anyone.”
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 28: “Do not commit to anyone.”
Interesting meeting, and a lasting peace, but that has its own challenges. Being aware of the intelligence around you, is a constant need. Stealth entry into an organization happens, especially like is happening in our own world today, bad actors with long therm plays… -
Great to see this continuing on with Ken and Joe together, the boys are now amateur detectives…
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Glad he recovered quickly from this attack, and has a good new friend to help him around.
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Quick case, seems open and shut over just 2 days. Glad to know this happened before he got with Joe.
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Epilogue: Normal Families?
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Epilogue: Normal Families?
Thanks for the great story, some language lessons, and a wonderful set of Characters. Looking forward to any sequel. -
Excellent start to this story.
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Devin is going to have to be careful with his stealth Superman transition in the future, he is being recognized for his heroic acts, which are good deeds, but could present a future issue. The Santa and elves hospital visit was a lot of joy for everyone.
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Great story within a story, and it sounds like history too. Looking forward to the rest. And the fact that they felt comfortable enough to share with the few members of the caravan when they came from and who they are. But after turning into dragons in front of them some explaining needed to be done.
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Another excellent chapter, this is world building at its best. The characters interacting and describing what’s what in their society. The warning was a good idea.
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I think this has something to do with Jacob’s parents and the locked door. Another awesome chapter.
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Great ending to this story. The murderer was caught. On to the next mystery.
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Tom has the makings of a boyfriend, who happens to be the brother of the killer…. Too many good people are being killed. He needs to get caught soon.
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Great chapter, it looks like Mark is coming back 🙂 Mom had something happen that she is no longer cursed.
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Bryan needed to hear and feel that he is worthy to be loved and have friends who will be there for him. James is a good friend.
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Lovely chapter getting to make new acquaintances. And Lyoth is healed.
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We do now have a possible lead that may not be a red herring… fingerprints matching would be a good thing. Do they have any other DNA from the other murders?
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Back to Jerry, A New Boss, and More Appeals
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Back to Jerry, A New Boss, and More Appeals
Great ending, they did a great job getting people out, and restitution.
