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The driving lessons are really coming along. The fair seemed like a lot of fun. Brooke seems to be the aggressor in their undefined relationship. Casey is still interested, and did apologize for his crude language, about Matt. Levi still wants to explore his feelings for Casey… hopefully he doesn’t get too hurt in the process,
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Chapter 25 - Awesome Adolescents
VBlew commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 25 - Awesome Adolescents
Seem like more mental healing for Nathan as he steps into action doing what is needed for their clinic. Seems like with Liam moving to Sydney, Nathan’s practice in Adelaide will be closing. The young ones are more healing than they know. This coming out lunch was very easy.- 19 comments
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Yes, finally. Glad Chad is recovering well. Robert needed the little push Alice gave him to go to a Chad’s and get cleaned up. Looking forward to the next book.
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This is interesting, way to make new friends. Seems like a lot of trauma has gone on in this community.
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Chapter 10 Deep Blue Feelings
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 10 Deep Blue Feelings
What a freaking dysfunctional relationship these two have. How opportunistic for these other two showing up. Where did they come from? how long have they been on the island? are they friendly? Hopefully all will be revealed. -
Part XXII. Freezing Point
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XXII. Freezing Point
What a battle. The Mechaman suit failed again. Robert finally realized what he needed to do but was late in getting to Flambe’s position and is now begging the man he loves to come back from being frozen. Nice cliffhanger. -
Interesting how in the middle of the story, Troy said he liked Morgan. So they got that cleared up. Troy must have felt really comfortable telling about what happened with his twin, maybe wanting to be in front of someone else saying something and Morgan disliking him for it. The steer horn seemed more like a steer came up and attacked Tyson, rather than he went over the cliff and got impaled on the horn with the fall. Either way, seems like good riddance.
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Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Seven - Ben's POV
Julian makes quesadillas on the stove, not in the microwave. He can cook better than Ben. Then is an observer during the movie. And willingly gives up his room to Sophie. How long can he go without charging? -
Chapter 15: The Writing on the Wall
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 15: The Writing on the Wall
Now we know the motivation for a lot of this, money laundering. Quite the business if structured like mentioned. Glad Darius is having a good conscience break, but if Merrick finds out, it will not be a good thing for him. -
Marks wall are hurting both of them. Stubborn arrogant brats. Hopefully they get into a situation where the actually talk to each other.
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Chapter 26 Boy Meets Future
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 26 Boy Meets Future
I knew Sam couldn’t stay away. The baby at the end was a surprise for the boys. Great ending. -
This is getting interesting. Feelings about these visitors and the dreams are becoming more vivid.
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Chapter Six - Julian's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Six - Julian's POV
There are feeling’s happening that Julian was not prepared for. Hopefully even though it wasn’t requested, he can also be a romantic partner. Ben really needs that, in addition to emotional support that he is not getting from his bio family. Rachel needs to seek out a sitting service instead of jus dumping her kids on Ben, expecting him to always be there. -
The perfect ending to this book. Looking forward to what they do with Krakatoa.
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Chapter 14: Thirty Pieces of Silver
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: Thirty Pieces of Silver
Maybe if he takes Peter’s advice, that will clean up part of his life. Anxious about what Merrick really wants Jason for… this whole real estate thing was a smokescreen… -
It’s getting thick. Noah is going to be a hero, but finding a bunch of buried bodies is not going to be fun. Did Jack give Damian the necklace?
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Glad you’re back, looking forward to this story continuing, fun banter on the way home from the airport.
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Chapter 3- The Mark's Call
VBlew commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 3- The Mark's Call
Cal is big on assumptions, Nos was being honest and was not believed. Orion is a problem, but at least Nos has told Luc and Sven about it. -
Part XXI. Where the Smoke Settles
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XXI. Where the Smoke Settles
Finally it seems they have a breakthrough. Hopefully they survive the battle tonight and can really work through their feelings after. -
As noted earlier, many different manufacturers had manual with the shifter on the column. I had a 39, and a 42 Studebaker like that. Not sure if they shipped them to Australia. Matt was correct learning on a Manual Transmission, you can drive anything. Still hesitant about Casey, but Levi certainly has feelings about him, that are not resolved.
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Fun how things for the Dresden festival are working out. Neil want to make it a proper vacation too. Funny thing about driving on the “wrong” side of the road. I’m American so my first trip to England and driving on the Left side of the road, with a manual transmission was quite something. Good thing my first few cars were manuals. It does take a focused effort. Then you get a handle of it. Had to go back and think about Neil not being able to drive a car. It’s about his license, not that he can’t, right.
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So is Mark still hating himself six months later? Seem like it. At least we know what started it now.
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Chapter Five - Ben's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Five - Ben's POV
We finally meet the slovenly Mason. Jillian was a perfect gentleman. Refusing to give up his seat, and attempting to help Mason, who really didn’t want help. -
Jasper is a mess.. What was Grace thinking, rifling through their bedside drawers?? Ryan was being strong.
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This just opens us up wanting more in this series. Nice teaser.
