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That was an interesting twist. Nice cliffhanger. Sean and Gabriel need a rematch, flipping the script, maybe after the concert.
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"Melancholia (Part 2)"
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "Melancholia (Part 2)"
Wow. That was intense. Daniel let himself out, his brother was right about the room inside. -
Interesting chapter interviewing the archeology students. Jacey did provide some insight.
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Beautiful, this trip is bringing a lot of closure for Adam. Alex it accepted into the family.
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Good on Petre for giving Fenn some pain. This gift is not just a gift. Is it a tracker? Will it so something Fenn or Ain if they get close again?
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Lewis & Charles Discover a Murder
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Lewis & Charles Discover a Murder
The people who are the characters in the illustrated story seem onboard with Luis’ continuing on and publishing. Could turn into another series. -
Damn hard cliffhanger. Hopefully Mac will reach out to Parker and let him know Brody’s status. They both want to fix what they broke. Maybe they can. Egos are dangerous.
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It's Not Goodbye, Without a Kiss
VBlew commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in It's Not Goodbye, Without a Kiss
Good place to end this book. Looking forward to the next one. There are so many questions to be answered. -
Pull on the damn coord, unplug it from the wall. It may or may not be too late, hopefully not. Kick the door in. Leaving him alone was a very bad idea, but it’s too late for if only ideas now. That was a nasty cliffhanger. This came had really gone too far. Points for getting someone to kill themselves. And they think they know who pink is. They need to all go and confront her.
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Just keep the contact going. Radio silence is not good for this pair.
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Chapter 1: Sibylline Morning After
VBlew commented on Kreston Bach's story chapter in Chapter 1: Sibylline Morning After
Did Hunt know what he was doing with the magic? Or is it acting like a drug to him? -
Interesting beginning. Looking forward to the story.
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Amazing chapter. Shaun got his job back. His Spanish has improved so that working with the Latino guys was fun and net a torment the boss wanted it to be. He finally posted a video about his truth. I think that’s going to be a very good thing for the band at BOTB. Jesse got come clarity from his 3 calls. Monica is going to end up childless… all of the children will be better off. Looking forward to Halloween, and the show.
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It’s hard yo read Brandon’s side with him blaming himself, having read Billy’s story from his perspective, he was such a mess himself.
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Seems like Jesse picked the right place to stop, and get some work. The bad guys will not know what happened to them when they arrive…
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Chapter 9 - The Mask Falls
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The Mask Falls
Damn, apparently the therapist only helped Hunter hide his true self. Now that his true self is back, Marcus blocked him. Wonder if Sam will be able to get his things or will they be destroyed? Now he can focus on his feelings for James. -
It was great how everyone around the town was helping them escape. Jamal has found 2 knights and they agreed to heed the calling. I suspect the Wizard will be quite helpful to the prince.
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Dinner with Micah was nice, even with the wine drinking. He really needs to give him a decision. The interviews were hilarious. Surprise this is your new office. Wonder who Novak has in mind for the receptionist position?
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Finally Ain and Fenn, can do a covert operation and get to the base where they are converting people to people with powers. Space still don’t know why the Hearald didn’t want to do that in the first place. He had some ulterior motive that we still don’t know about.
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Great start. Seems like Bryan is trying to make up for getting kissed by Cooper. But not successfully. Maybe this project will get them talking again?
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The day was going so good… here’s to hoping that they win Battle of the Bands, and Imani really sees how good they are. Dallas was awesome support, and the options of other waterproofing companies to work for as backup plans was great.
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Billy was being a little ridiculous on this, it’s not like Brandon could come over to his house either…
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Tom, Charlie, Pericles & Gloria
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Tom, Charlie, Pericles & Gloria
Now that they have seen a photo of the said artifact, they may find in in the renovation, or gardening projects. Lovely day trip, something nice for Charlie. And now rearranging the house for Tom to stay long term. -
Fenrin is still a pawn, forced to assist in the brutal whipping of Ain. Fortunately he didn’t have to kill him. This is very very bad.
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This was a very difficult chapter to read. Whoever or whatever is running this game is mercilessly tormenting everyone playing.. could it be a rogue AI?
