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S2 E3: Take Your Time With Me
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E3: Take Your Time With Me
I’m wondering if Elliott is the photographer for Dylan’s reason for being in Paris? That could get awkward or turn into something good for all of them…. -
Another awesome chapter, with Daniel’s testimony and identification of additional victims, the prosecution will have even more to keep the perpetrators in jail. Joshua was unclear about how much he is loved and wanted. I have a suspicion he is afraid his girlfriend will want sex, and he may not be ready for that yet….
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Luke had some pretty vivid dreams about Zeke. Got a raise at work, and now has some spare change.
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Maybe the sword is testing Luther..
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What is Brother Mathias? A predecessor to the evil Cardinal?
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Interesting forplay….
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So the intriguing question is are Lanelle and Halric Vane working together? She really seemed to fuel Rory’s fears, and Halric Chas been very stoic? The question is who are they working for? Kieran will hopefully finish his trials in 2 nights and Rory will feel the strength coming from him, and maybe be able to use his magic again, as I have a feeling they are going to need it soon.
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Interesting reflection. Like they traded places.
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Jamie, what did you do? I get you’re angry, but blaming cottontail for your mess was not nice. Hearst does need to do some cleanup. What is Wencel hoping to gain from all of this. Jamie was spot on with the gossip rag comment. Jamie needs to start thinking of ways to improve his image, and just dumped his biggest fan/supporter…
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Fun chapter, this story is like a master class in writing. Noticing people’s mannerisms, similarities and differences. Also, interesting information on The holidays for those of us unfamiliar with them. Love the joyful banter between all of the guys.
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Josel doesn’t understand his jealousy, and Zdain has not told him how much he liked him. Renn certainly is a character, provoking Josel…
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So evicted and moving in with his good friend.
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Ash and Desmond deserve some alone time together, then down to business… Zareth is clueless about what’s happening around him, which is probably to the boy’s advantage. The found the location of the burial site, now to build a defense. As to writing two stories, at the same time. Follow your muse. We will be here reading whatever you write. It’s all amazing.
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Seth is thinking his dad left because he is gay and got found out, it really seems like his dad was gay and his mom couldn’t deal with that, and doesn’t even know Seth is gay… that’s just the way it read to me…
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The end of the date went really well. Setting up for a 2nd one. Was Alan just jealous enough to go have sex with Brandi to prove to himself he wasn’t gay? What is that going to do to their relationship? Maybe for the best if it means Jordan can have a relationship with Cal. Alan was pretty clear up front he just wanted a friends with benefits situation, but they seemed t grow beyond that. Will be interesting to see who says something first about Alan stepping out on their so far monogamous relationship…
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Brandon, going on about who he had fantasized about, hitting pretty close to home for Billy, since he had sex with Bobby when Brandon was out of town…not looking forward to the heartache that Brandon is going to have coming up…
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"The Book Of Disquiet"
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Book Of Disquiet"
Wow, the end of this book tied it up well, each has their separate lives now. And it seems healing. It has been an amazing journey. Some of it reflects past experiences of my own, it more it made me evaluate all of my prior relationships from a very different point of view. Thank you for this. -
Beautiful scene with Ben and Samantha arriving with their children. Touching at the end, the guys thinking about having their own family.
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A very funny family moment. Ryan will have these memories to look back on and laugh with his dads.
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Rick has some pretty amazing fantasies…. Hopefully reality matches.
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Did Sam get Gael out? Or was this Leo’s manipulation, to try and help Alex for himself. This is tragic for both of them. Leo is no better than the others.
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Evil aunt. We know Lucien lives, but what will this do to Amelie?
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Interrogations and Hospitals
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Interrogations and Hospitals
Stephen is a hero even if he doesn’t know it. Leon is very grateful. They are good brothers to each other. Stephen is going to need Michael’s support when he remembers what happened? -
Great business trip. Something changed with Keith, maybe the icy heart is thawing. Could be seeing how good Jon is for his dad… or correct boundaries being set.
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Marc is training his son and starson about managing within the house corporation. Love the new ships, especially the sleek black ops ship. Marc’s following of important people in his past is impressive. He’s always one step ahead. His relationship with Adam has grown as well. Loved the hologram dinner idea of having a family dinner. There must be some amazing tech to have that level of communication between such far off distances.
