Musings of a Messed Up Mind - 1. Chapter 1 Electric Dreams - a poem

You have this way with words, that I can hardly describe Tim, you are insanely talented.

I could feel the pain of the narrator in describing the affair that would happen if they make the dream reality.

Thanks for this poem

On 09/24/2015 06:37 AM, Drew Espinosa said:

You have this way with words, that I can hardly describe Tim, you are insanely talented.

 

I could feel the pain of the narrator in describing the affair that would happen if they make the dream reality.

 

Thanks for this poem

Hey Drew. Thanks, it's easy to do when you're telling the awful stupid truth about something you nearly did. The dude is a great guy, but it just can't be me.

tim

You show us here where the power of words... poetry... can clarify for us what matters in life. The words are beautiful, the message more so... there is a stunning truth to this... well done, my friend... cheers... Gary...

On 09/24/2015 07:11 AM, Headstall said:

You show us here where the power of words... poetry... can clarify for us what matters in life. The words are beautiful, the message more so... there is a stunning truth to this... well done, my friend... cheers... Gary...

Gary, thank you. It scared me, if I'm honest. But I sorted it out and I'm home, where I belong.

tim

Sometimes the heart gets it wrong and we're lucky when our head does. Every line in this poem, spoke convincingly of the longing, uncertainty and temptation. You sir, are mighty talented.
Thanks for sharing Tim.

On 09/24/2015 08:30 AM, Defiance19 said:

Sometimes the heart gets it wrong and we're lucky when our head does. Every line in this poem, spoke convincingly of the longing, uncertainty and temptation. You sir, are mighty talented.

Thanks for sharing Tim.

Aw thank so much Defiance. I appreciate it. I'm glad I sorted it out. Appreciate your comments and time.

tim

On 09/24/2015 10:01 AM, Reader1810 said:

Tim

You truly are a gifted story teller. It doesn't matter if the tale is short or long, you always manage to convey so much. Your words make me stop and think about what is being said.

Thank you for sharing them.

Thank you very much for the review. I appreciate you taking the time to read my offerings. Means a lot, thanks again.

tim

Curious about the underlying story ... your words tell me the danger of fulfilling this dream.

I can relate to this. Connecting with someone in a way you shouldn't...

It's a beautiful poem, Tim. It touches on the beauty that just because it's 'virtual,' that doesn't mean it's not as real as anything else. I love that aspect; it's something I can relate to very personally.

Thank you…for posting it…

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On 09/24/2015 10:11 PM, dughlas said:

Curious about the underlying story ... your words tell me the danger of fulfilling this dream.

hey dughlas, the underlying story is i nearly messed up my marriage. The guy is brilliant and sweet, but I don't want to lose the life I have with Michael.

Thanks for reading and for your comments,

tim

On 09/25/2015 02:36 AM, Puppilull said:

I can relate to this. Connecting with someone in a way you shouldn't...

Hi Puppilull, Lots of people can I guess... it's so easy. Friends are great ... careful what you wish for.

tim

On 09/25/2015 04:57 AM, AC Benus said:

It's a beautiful poem, Tim. It touches on the beauty that just because it's 'virtual,' that doesn't mean it's not as real as anything else. I love that aspect; it's something I can relate to very personally.

 

Thank you…for posting it…

 

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Hi AC. Thanks for reading and you comments as always. Be an interesting topic for a survey..

Thanks AC for your ongoing support and help.

tim

I like this. Poetry doesn't always connect with me, but this piece does. My throat caught and I understood. Thank you.

On 09/25/2015 05:57 AM, Parker Owens said:

I like this. Poetry doesn't always connect with me, but this piece does. My throat caught and I understood. Thank you.

Hi Parker, thanks for reading it. I never thought much of poetry either if I'm honest. But it seems to be working for me on some level right now. I appreciate you visiting and commenting.

tim

This is almost scary in its truth. It shows how easy it could be to let yourself give in to temptation - even if you know it's wrong.

On 09/29/2015 08:41 AM, EagleIsaac said:

This is almost scary in its truth. It shows how easy it could be to let yourself give in to temptation - even if you know it's wrong.

Hi EagleIsaac... too easy dude... way too easy. Thanks for reading and your comments... I appreciate it.

tim

Tim, this captured a moment, a temptation so well. Sometimes we get caught by it, hurt by it. Sometimes we are wise enough to see the trap, sometimes not. Either way the loss hurts.

On 10/18/2015 05:38 AM, Bucket1 said:

Tim, this captured a moment, a temptation so well. Sometimes we get caught by it, hurt by it. Sometimes we are wise enough to see the trap, sometimes not. Either way the loss hurts.

Yeah not the brightest thing I've ever done. Luckily Michael is the guy he is.

I particularly enjoyed this, it captures so much in so little words. Awesome job!

On 10/21/2016 11:14 AM, Arazon said:

I particularly enjoyed this, it captures so much in so little words. Awesome job!

Thanks.. for reading .. just a warning.. Musings is full of me, and my struggles with mental health and stuff that happens to me...not always pleasant.

Appreciate the review though.. thanks.