Writing Tips From Fellow Writers
Passive Voice: Avoid word choices using 'to be' and the conjugations 'is, am, were, was, are, has been, have been, will be, being' as much as possible to keep action immediate and reduce the passive voice when writing. It lacks precision and clarity. Use search to find those keywords that indicate passive voice and consider each to see if your sentence needs a re-write.
Plot Arc: The 'hook' is what intrigues readers in your story. The climax is
Well, that's it for the 2020 Spring Anthology! I hope you all enjoyed the great stories and made sure to let the authors know via comments and reviews. A huge thank you to all the authors and to the Anthology Team. Couldn't do it without you. Now, let's take a look at ALL the stories one more time.
Shared Blankets
Comicality
Destruction--Self and Otherwise
Headstall
Accused
Valkyrie
Hill of Candles
lomax61
Mates Come First
Caz Pedroso
Keraun
Half the year is behind us, and I suspect by the time 2020 is over, we will look back and marvel at how different the twelve months turned out to be from what we might have expected. If the COVID19 pandemic, social distancing, and quarantines weren’t enough to shake us, police brutality and Black Lives Matter protests surely did.
Not surprising then that two members sent in similar questions referencing the pesky virus and our reactions to it. Responses are posted in alphabetical order.
Did you read Caz Pedroso's story, Here Kitty, Kitty? What did you think of it? Make sure you share your thoughts below in the comments, but first! Enjoy this interview with questions Caz graciously answered for me so you get the skinny on her!
Are you a person who makes their bed in the morning, or do you not see much point?
Not much point making my bed. When my daughter and husband are home, my bed is my office.
If you were an animal, what would you be?
A house cat, my f
Cajun food is a lot like jazz. There are some basics but, there a lot of ad lib going on.
Some of the old recipes were designed to vary significantly depending on what you had on hand. For something like Jambalaya the rice and spices are constant but, it can be loaded up with anything from sausage, hamburger meat, shrimp, deer meat, etc. It's how a Mom could feed a lot of kids based on what's in the kitchen.
It's not hard to do, fun and you come up with some absolutely delicious stuff.
I saw this Friday night and thought it is such a good song for right now with everything going on in the world!
Well it made me smile and who better to cheer us all up than the Muppets! Hopefully it will keep that smile on your face for the rest of the week too
I also want to put out an offer to everyone! Our GA resident prompt guru comicfan, or those that love him, Wayne, will be away for a little while as he has a lot going on right now. This means we want y
Well, this is it. The last set of the 2020 Spring Anthology. Sorry this was delayed a bit this morning, Renee didn't sleep well last night (not because of Baby J) and Hubby let me sleep in. There will be a wrap up next week, so if you missed any releases, you still have a good chance to read through the list and see what ones you missed! And here are the final 3 anthologies.
The Teacup
aditus
The Truth is out There
Myr
The Challenge
Headstall
Another weekend is over and it's time for another review from the review team. This week, Timothy M has taken the chance to review "Yankee" by The Zot.
Yankee
TheZot
Reviewer: Timothy M.
Status: Complete
Word Count: 80,483
This story sat unfinished on my favorite stories list for years, but in 2019 @TheZot realized the last three chapters were not present on GA and uploaded them. Some readers argue the story still feels incomplete, and I can see their point. It’s definitely
Sooo I'm glad you guys liked my story Wicked. It along with Necromancer and Ceramic Flowers make up my three gay novellas.
Which did you guys like better? According to the stats it's Necromancer.
There could be various reasons for this. Like, the story does portray itself to be a typical romance up until the point you realise a relationship wasn't gonna happen. A harsh slap of reality right there. 😒
Anyways before asking about opinions on a fourth novella, I was going over old pr
What day is it? Sunday you say Oops. Who took away a day on me this week
Actually I got into reading around 7 last night and around 11:30 I put down the IPad and rolled over and fell asleep. Darn you authors here at GA for making me forget about the real world
So a little late, but better than never.
Oh my I got ahead of myself
Here is the June Classic Author Announcement:
Followed up by the June Classic Author Excerpt!
Then, believe it not, we have
Just the facts:
CALMNESS Definition & Meaning - Merriam-Webster
CALMNESS Synonyms: 128 Similar and Opposite Words | Merriam-Webster Thesaurus
CALM Definition & Meaning - Merriam-Webster
Calm vs. Calmness | the difference - CompareWords
The concept of calmness in storytelling acts as a structural anchor that gives meaning to action. Just as music requires silence between notes to create a melody, a narrative requires moments of stillness to give impact to its conflicts.
Emotional Counterbalance:
Accentuates chaos: Constant action leads to audience fatigue. A period of stillness makes the next dramatic peak feel far more impactful.
Allows digestion: Quiet scenes give the audience time to process major plot twists
The word calmness combines the root calm (from the Late Latin cauma, meaning "heat of te midday sun") with the Old English suffix -ness which denotes a state or quality. Historically, intense midday heat in the Mediterranean caused winds to stop and the sea to grow still, shifting the word's meaning from "burning heat" to a "quiet, resting state". The shift from describing weather or the sea to describing a peaceful human mind occurred around the 1560s.
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