Emulated Posted August 11, 2009 Author Share Posted August 11, 2009 Sati was retired when she was called up for "The Drumhead" episode. I'm sure Star Fleet retired her permanently. I'll be willing to follow that assessment, and in the case she wasn't retired at that moment, there's a high chance she would have done during the 13 years. So with that in mind, I can say with much certainty that she will not be appearing in the story. But to all Satie fans out there, I duly apologise. Lets hope so... Yep, she's no longer about. It's official. (At least in AVL anyway!) as Rilbur says, let's hope so... I was remembering the caution Picard voices at the end of the episode for the need to always be vigilante against those who wish to fan the flames of hate and distrust... but...knowing our wonderful Emulated...he surely can force retirement on any such character...(right Em...?) keep the romance coming I think that those are very wise words by Picard. Hate and distrust might be evident in the Romulan or past-Cardassian governments, but not in the Federation. It has no place for it. Hehehe, 'force retirement'! Yeah, like I said above, Satie won't be making an appearance in this story. Link to comment
G90814 Posted August 22, 2009 Share Posted August 22, 2009 Loving the story so far, I like how you focus on the characters, rather than detailing the technology, etc. I did notice a few discrepancies: Officer designations: Lt Comm should be LCDR (LtComm makes me think Lieutenant Communicator ) Ensign is the first officer rank, there isn't one before it other than 'cadet'. A good guide for this (and others) is: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/United_States_Navy_officer_rank_insignia#Commissioned_Officer_Ranks Also, in Ch1, Kai said "I am 5'12", just a hair under 6'"... 5'12" IS 6' unless they changed a foot to 13 inches Link to comment
Emulated Posted August 22, 2009 Author Share Posted August 22, 2009 Loving the story so far, I like how you focus on the characters, rather than detailing the technology, etc. I did notice a few discrepancies: Officer designations: Lt Comm should be LCDR (LtComm makes me think Lieutenant Communicator ) Ensign is the first officer rank, there isn't one before it other than 'cadet'. A good guide for this (and others) is: http://en.wikipedia....d_Officer_Ranks Also, in Ch1, Kai said "I am 5'12", just a hair under 6'"... 5'12" IS 6' unless they changed a foot to 13 inches Hi G01851! Welcome to the Forums! I hope you enjoy your stay! Thanks! I'm glad you like the story! Hehehe, I could easily get distracted with the technology, but I like the characters just a little bit more! Yeah, it's been quite confusing using all those ranks and stuff, but I realised a while ago that I didn't have to say Lieutenant Commander every time, as you'd just say Commander. (At least in a Star Trek setting.) But I see what you mean. I have the similar problem when I talk about the Comm System (as in the communications), the Conn (the helm), and Comm. (notice the dot, as a shortening of Commander). So it's confusing. I could write LCDR, but I personally see Commander being simpler, and easier to look at on a page. Yeah, whenever I reference Kai 'before' being an Ensign, he would have been a cadet. Hehehe, I've used that wiki page loads of times, or more specifically, when I had Raylis come aboard. I didn't want the Gorans to follow the US Naval ranking system, so instead they use the US Air force ranking system. (E.g. He was a Second Lieutenant, as opposed to the equivalent of Ensign.) Oh jeez! I can't believe I typed that! One serious typo, honestly! (I'm not that mad!) Link to comment
Emulated Posted August 24, 2009 Author Share Posted August 24, 2009 Hi! I hope you all enjoyed chapter 23 of A Vulcan's Love. Thanks! Emulated Link to comment
Rilbur Posted August 24, 2009 Share Posted August 24, 2009 Another great chapter, thank you! I will admit I was a trifle surprised when the 'tribunal' got cut short like that, but seeing as how the lady in question seemed more interested in finding fault than finding the truth (mind you, in a circumstance like this one Kai should feel like he was being run through a wringer...) I understand why it happened. Link to comment
Site Moderator TalonRider Posted August 24, 2009 Site Moderator Share Posted August 24, 2009 I think our previous discussions of Admiral Satie of ST:TNG's Drumhead episode, gave EM some ideas for this chapter. Anyone up for a possible wedding? With all that talk, it sounds like Trey may be thinking of asking. Link to comment
Emulated Posted August 25, 2009 Author Share Posted August 25, 2009 Another great chapter, thank you! I will admit I was a trifle surprised when the 'tribunal' got cut short like that, but seeing as how the lady in question seemed more interested in finding fault than finding the truth (mind you, in a circumstance like this one Kai should feel like he was being run through a wringer...) I understand why it happened. Thanks Rilbur, I'm glad you liked it. That was exactly it. Had it been a better investigation (i.e. not out to place blame) then I'd have carried it on longer. But because it was due to a few people from Command who were out looking to place blame, I had them close it down. Hehehe, yeah, I don't think Kai was too happy about the whole thing! I think our previous discussions of Admiral Satie of ST:TNG's Drumhead episode, gave EM some ideas for this chapter. Anyone up for a possible wedding? With all that talk, it sounds like Trey may be thinking of asking. Perhaps . But I must admit that I hadn't seen that episode, or seen anything with Admiral Satie. But as for the character Vice-Admiral Biggs, I wanted to create a character, rather than use one from the series. (And because as we previously discussed, Satie would have retired.) Wedding?!?! Wow, talk about warp speed, Talon! I think Alex and Trey are enjoying where they are at the moment. Any wedding(s) will have to come a little later, at least! Link to comment
NightOwl88 Posted August 31, 2009 Share Posted August 31, 2009 Another great chapter, thank you! I will admit I was a trifle surprised when the 'tribunal' got cut short like that, but seeing as how the lady in question seemed more interested in finding fault than finding the truth (mind you, in a circumstance like this one Kai should feel like he was being run through a wringer...) I understand why it happened. I was surprised by how short the tribunal part was too, glad; but surprised. I love this story and have been follwing it since I found it on Nifty. I must say it has given me a greater appreciatation for Vulcans lol, I do like pointed ears lol. Link to comment
Emulated Posted August 31, 2009 Author Share Posted August 31, 2009 I was surprised by how short the tribunal part was too, glad; but surprised. I love this story and have been follwing it since I found it on Nifty. I must say it has given me a greater appreciatation for Vulcans lol, I do like pointed ears lol. Thanks, I'm glad you like it! Yeah, like I mentioned above, the main reason that the tribunal was cut so short was because they acted like they were out to place blame, rather than conduct an official investigation. Similarly, if it was a proper investigation in the first place, perhaps it would have continued longer. I say perhaps because it was Starfleet Intelligence who had the 'tribunal' disbanded...maybe they have a reasoning behind it. (Or I could be playing with you!) Hehehe, I know! The poor little guys! It must be hard to be walk around looking all cute with those ears! Link to comment
Emulated Posted September 7, 2009 Author Share Posted September 7, 2009 Hi! I hope you all enjoyed chapter 24 of A Vulcan's Love. Thanks! Emulated Link to comment
Phoenix Posted September 7, 2009 Share Posted September 7, 2009 You have a fantastic story here. I love how things are working out with Kai and T'Luk. I can't wait to see where things go for them in the future. Link to comment
Emulated Posted September 12, 2009 Author Share Posted September 12, 2009 You have a fantastic story here. I love how things are working out with Kai and T'Luk. I can't wait to see where things go for them in the future. Thanks Phoenix! Yeah, things are going pretty fine for the couple, aren't they? In keeping with my usual style, I won't tell you the specifics, but rest assured they have a long future ahead of them. (And I'm not just referring to their relationship either!) Link to comment
Emulated Posted September 27, 2009 Author Share Posted September 27, 2009 Hi! I hope you all enjoyed chapter 25 of A Vulcan's Love. Thanks! Emulated Link to comment
Site Moderator TalonRider Posted September 28, 2009 Site Moderator Share Posted September 28, 2009 It's been way too quite for the guy's now. I get the feeling that something may be happening soon. Link to comment
Emulated Posted September 30, 2009 Author Share Posted September 30, 2009 It's been way too quite for the guy's now. I get the feeling that something may be happening soon. Hey! What's wrong with quiet? As for something happening soon...hmmm...intriguing. Link to comment
Emulated Posted October 4, 2009 Author Share Posted October 4, 2009 Hi! I hope you all enjoyed chapter 26 of A Vulcan's Love. (AKA: The one where Talon performed magic!) Thanks! Emulated Link to comment
Emulated Posted October 19, 2009 Author Share Posted October 19, 2009 Hi! I hope you all enjoyed chapter 27 of A Vulcan's Love. Thanks! Emulated Link to comment
Rilbur Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 Another great chapter! Thanks for the fun, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! Link to comment
Emulated Posted October 21, 2009 Author Share Posted October 21, 2009 Another great chapter! Thanks for the fun, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! Thanks, Rilbur! Yep, there's a lot of fun stuff still to come! I hope you enjoy it! Link to comment
Emulated Posted November 1, 2009 Author Share Posted November 1, 2009 Hi! I hope you all enjoyed chapter 28 of A Vulcan's Love. (Only two chapters left now!) Take care, Emulated Link to comment
Emulated Posted November 16, 2009 Author Share Posted November 16, 2009 Hi! I hope you all enjoyed chapter 29 of A Vulcan's Love. (One more to go!!!) Take care, Emulated Link to comment
Emulated Posted December 1, 2009 Author Share Posted December 1, 2009 That's it, guys! Chapter 30 has left the building! I really hope you enjoyed reading the conclusion to this story! Thanks and take care! Emulated Link to comment
Librent Posted December 1, 2009 Share Posted December 1, 2009 A great chapter that finished off a great story. Although I am a little biased because I love Star Trek, I feel you have created a story that fits in well with the Star Trek Universe and have introduced characters that are just as interesting as the originals. I will be haunting you for that sequel thats a promise ;-) LOL My reveiw of 'A Vulcans Love' chapter 30 :worship: :worship: As I said in my review I will be haunting you. I am going to miss getting my Kai & T'Luk fix now that its finished. BTW I still love that Pon Farr scene very erotic Link to comment
Nephylim Posted December 1, 2009 Share Posted December 1, 2009 The end of an era.... and what a way to go. What can I say? You know how much I love it, especially the last chapter. You are an awesome writer so get writing and give us some more... a sequel, something new... whatever... just write Who needs a life Link to comment
Emulated Posted December 2, 2009 Author Share Posted December 2, 2009 My reveiw of 'A Vulcans Love' chapter 30 :worship: :worship: As I said in my review I will be haunting you. I am going to miss getting my Kai & T'Luk fix now that its finished. BTW I still love that Pon Farr scene very erotic Thanks again, Librent! And thank you for your help too! Hehehe, there is a sequel and it will be coming. Promise! l'm pleased you liked the Pon Farr scene, it was quite a special one to write -(and not only because of the sex!) The end of an era.... and what a way to go. What can I say? You know how much I love it, especially the last chapter. You are an awesome writer so get writing and give us some more... a sequel, something new... whatever... just write Who needs a life Thank you, Nephylim, and again, thank you for your help! I'm pleased you enjoyed this story. Hehehe, I agree. Drop everything else, just write! I could live with that (in an ideal world!) Link to comment
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