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Shhhhhh. I don't correct things like that in public! I send a pm!

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Thanks for setting this up Tim!   I'll post some relevant pictures in my Gallery as the story progresses, I will provide location links for those interested in seeing a bit more of Washington and I

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Oh, I would not say Brett is my favorite - at least not yet! Cesar is quite interesting as well.  I can say Lourdes is my least favorite. While asshole (Rich the step dad) quite deserves the name assh

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Congrats on the 50+ and also on getting one of the best compliment someone could ever give you - comparing your story to Love on the Rocks.   When I read the review I thought, OMG Carlos will be ov

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In the final scene of Chapter 3, I found it very easy to picture Nick Y as Papa Brett...boing...now I just need to be able to picture Cesar....Carlos? Who was in your mind for Cesar?

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In the final scene of Chapter 3, I found it very easy to picture Nick Y as Papa Brett...boing...now I just need to be able to picture Cesar....Carlos? Who was in your mind for Cesar?

 

https://www.google.com/search?q=henry+Cavill&tbm=isch&tbo=u&source=univ&sa=X&ei=umWxVP_pFIHlggSbmYG4DQ&ved=0CJQBEIke&biw=1600&bih=789#imgdii=_&imgrc=LF5WDWJFo4a6kM%253A%3B10sRdmIKnK05mM%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fimg2.timeinc.net%252Fpeople%252Fi%252F2013%252Fspecials%252Fsma%252Fsixpacks%252Fhenry-cavill-435.jpg%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.people.com%252Fpeople%252Fgallery%252F0%252C%252C20749182_30040667%252C00.html%3B435%3B580

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Omg...Him? I love him...and I totally get it. Adi is right...those blue eyes of his have always spoke to me...Crap. Could a couple be any hotter??? So glad I asked the question...THANK YOU

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Shhhhhh. I don't correct things like that in public! I send a pm!

 

I know - but you'll admit to liking when writers remember to write an hour - I know, because you patted me on the shoulder for it once. :lol:

(and if Carlos edited his post I would edit mine too)

 

Sorry I was a bit slow in responding, I had to stop drooling over Henry first. :P

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If I edit my post then all subsequent ones related to it lose their meaning...  I need to screw up on a regular basis in order to keep expectations low! :P

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Hey Tim...

 

When CJ starts high school I have a bunch of characters for him to interact with. I've been thinking I want one of them to be a girly boy. I may have to call upon you for technical advice. :gikkle:

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Hey Tim...

 

When CJ starts high school I have a bunch of characters for him to interact with. I've been thinking I want one of them to be a girly boy. I may have to call upon you for technical advice. :gikkle:

It's a good job you're kind of lovable, Carlos, cuz you are such a shit disturber :P

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Gary said you were the resident expert.... :rofl:

 

I want to create a non flamboyant, effeminate kid who CJ befriends. Girly boy will be scared of why such a big butch boy wants to be friends with him and will do a lot of squeaking.... of course that's all in my mind right now and with the clutter in there you never know what may happen.


It's a good job you're kind of lovable, Carlos, cuz you are such a shit disturber :P

 

It's a hard job but someboy's gotta do it :P

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Gary said you were the resident expert.... :rofl:

 

 

It's a hard job but someboy's gotta do it :P

There you go again... Tim trusts me enough to bend over in front of me :o so he is not going to believe your trash talking ass... and I've got a Hard job for ya :P ... but I like my guys more masculine...like Tim... -_-

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Next chapter drops in less than 36 hours.

 

In the meantime, here's a look at pictures of some of the locations mentioned in the first few chapters.

This is a Facebook album on CJ's page but you don't have to be a member of Facebook in order to see the images.

 

https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=a.409479902551662.1073741832.100004689679052&type=1&l=18d819c619

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Nice chapter, Carlos. Very inspiring... :P

and I'm glad to see some of your guys can blush too - at least when they are fifteen :lol:

but otherwise CJ must be in heaven.

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I can tell you that CJ will be doing a heck of a lot of blushing all summer long. Being a teen surrounded by his dads' friends will place him in situations that may be a bit R rated :)

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One more thing..... after 3 pretty intense chapters I felt the need for a breather. Maintaining constant tension would not be realistic for the guys who want to have a 'normal' life. I may not describe them brushing their teeth but I think we need a good insight into their daily lives in order to understand future events.

 

And that's as much of a spoiler as you'll get from me! :P

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What??? These hunks actually have NORMAL lives?!?!  Say it ain't so!

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And whatever inner turmoil being hidden by one or more of Cesar and Bretts friends that you mentioned better not include wanting to get between Cesar and Brett. You might have a revolt on your hands!

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Not saying anything but if Cesar or Brett stray I'm going into hiding. Gary would probably send a lynching mob after me ;)

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Not saying anything but if Cesar or Brett stray I'm going into hiding. Gary would probably send a lynching mob after me ;)

The "friend" would also have to go in to protective custody. Would NOT want Papa Brett or Cesar mad at me.

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Partial view of Brett's tattoo honoring his grandfather

 

https://www.google.com/search?q=nick+youngquest+tattoos&rlz=1C1CHWA_enUS597US597&espv=2&biw=1600&bih=809&tbm=isch&tbo=u&source=univ&sa=X&ei=EU-5VOX-LpPrggTIjYLgDQ&ved=0CB0QsAQ#imgdii=_&imgrc=HSIxiVtp5OGSIM%253A%3Bjk73ZaYMoNZ-8M%3Bhttps%253A%252F%252Fnicolasramospintado.files.wordpress.com%252F2008%252F05%252Fnick-youngquest3.jpg%3Bhttps%253A%252F%252Fnicolasramospintado.wordpress.com%252F2008%252F05%252F28%252Ftop-10-los-tatuajes-mas-famosos-tattoos-famous%252Fnick-youngquest3%252F%3B695%3B720

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That's their normal, every day, brush your teeth  life? I'm doing something wrong.

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