cj CJ By Carlos Hazday - Series Discussion

[Bucket1]

No more likes today but looking forward to the big reveal

[Carlos Hazday]

No more likes today but looking forward to the big reveal

 

LOL... the cover for Part II of CJ is already in my gallery. Here it is in case anyone missed it (right, like anyone even glances at picture galleries these days!)

 

[clochette]

You are female so you should be safe but the last guy that bowed in front of Carlos, well         

I "should be safe"?   As in you're not 100% sure about that?   Reassuring...

But hey when I bow in front of Carlos it's always in an innocent and honest manner and face first. But hey if your doing it the other way around you probably know what you're exposing yourself to   

[Carlos Hazday]

Innocent? Hmmm, that's not what i ws thinking when I decided on this character I've been thinking about.

[Carlos Hazday]

Anybody know what the picture on the story cover is?

[clochette]

Innocent? Hmmm, that's not what i ws thinking when I decided on this character I've been thinking about.

I didn't say I am innocent but the bowing in front of you was lol   I can't wait to read what you wrote about this lovely Mademoiselle Clochette

[Carlos Hazday]

I didn't say I am innocent but the bowing in front of you was lol   I can't wait to read what you wrote about this lovely Mademoiselle Clochette

 

Haven't written it yet, just outlined it. I'm in the middle of revising chapter seven right now. Funny how much I keep changing after letting it sit for almost six months. Hopefully I'm a better writer now.

[clochette]

Anybody know what the picture on the story cover is?

The cover for Autumn? The one with the "tower" and the writing "Northalsted"? 

[Carlos Hazday]

The cover for Autumn? The one with the "tower" and the writing "Northalsted"? 

 

Yep

[clochette]

I've done some reshearches and it's for the new condos build in Boys Town. 

http://newhomenotebook.net/new-homes-roundup-new-condos-in-boys-town/1950/

 

Am I right?

Edited June 19, 2015 by clochette

[Carlos Hazday]

I've done some reshearches and it's for the new condos build in Boys Town. Am I right?

 

Close, and it's Boystown, all one word

 

That is one of the lampposts on North Halsted

[clochette]

Thanks to my friend Google then 

Edited June 19, 2015 by clochette

[Carlos Hazday]

Chicago's a great city and Boystown's a fun place. LOTS of fun. I'll be there in August, can't wait!

[clochette]

sound like a lot of fun.

But I wonder why Chicago when Summer was taking place in D.C...

[Carlos Hazday]

sound like a lot of fun.

But I wonder why Chicago when Summer was taking place in D.C...

 

There's a hint about that towards the end of Summer

[clochette]

There's a hint about that towards the end of Summer

I'll have to take a closer look then 

[Carlos Hazday]

I'll have to take a closer look then 

Pssst... read the wedding chapter again, slowly. I keep telling people my stories can't be speed read, I either leave clues about what's coming or hide Easter Eggs!

[clochette]

Pssst... read the wedding chapter again, slowly. I keep telling people my stories can't be speed read, I either leave clues about what's coming or hide Easter Eggs!

So you're also one of those that hide Easter Eggs!   I've been looking after one since last year cause they had  forgotten one of mine 

The wedding chapter okay, I'll look at it once again 

[Kitt]

Unresolved tiny little issues 

 

The master of understatement 

 

 

Wow! Does that mean I'm no longer in the bloody author category?

 

Hate to tell you this Carlos (Ok - not really) but "Master of understatement" is the next step past "Bloody Author"!

 

Cliffhangers? What are those? Did I end up Summer with one of them?

 

 

I've decided if there were any sort of small cliffies at the end of 'Summer', they were the fault of the editor. I mean, he could have told me to correct them, right?

 

Twelve days and I'll start working on resolving them!

 

On behalf of editors everywhere - DON'T GO BLAMING THAT ON US! We correct mistakes - fix grammar - sometimes even make suggestions - but the content of the story is YOU mister!

[Bucket1]

Pssst... read the wedding chapter again, slowly. I keep telling people my stories can't be speed read, I either leave clues about what's coming or hide Easter Eggs!

OMG a real actual hint, careful Carlos they will take your author status away 

[Carlos Hazday]

OMG a real actual hint, careful Carlos they will take your author status away 

 

Well I sort of gave it away already, the hint I mean! But the hint will be confirmed in chapter 5

 

Damn, I'm bored. Don't want to go out, don't feel like reading and don't feel like writing. May just have to pop a Marvel movie into the DVD

[Bucket1]

Well I sort of gave it away already, the hint I mean! But the hint will be confirmed in chapter 5

 

Damn, I'm bored. Don't want to go out, don't feel like reading and don't feel like writing. May just have to pop a Marvel movie into the DVD

A Marvel movie? Sure 

[Carlos Hazday]

A Marvel movie? Sure 

 

May just check the History channel or something like that. I think it's going to be an early to bed night. Have to do accounting tomorrow and would like to finish my revisions to chapter 7 this weekend so I can stsart editing next week. Plus there's a couple of story ideas which won't leave me alone and I may have to do something about them LOL

[Kitt]

Don't you just hate it when characters start nagging you?  But we love when they nag you!

[Bucket1]

Don't you just hate it when characters start nagging you?  But we love when they nag you!

Some sympathy for the nagging but we do like the results