Lisa

Mrs. Gnomie! When I saw that you had completed a new story I hadn’t read yet (what the hell kind of rock was I laying under?!), I dropped the other story I was reading and started on this one. OMG! What a great story! I love Kyan so much; he’s so cute, and his kids are perfect! I love Perry too; he’s so wonderful to Kyan and the kids, and I can’t picture anyone else who would be so invested in Kyan’s life. I’m sure others have beat me to the punch because I haven’t been on here in forever, but I do see a sequel in the future with Max and possibly Reid (like a love/hate/love relationship? ) Anyway, I know the story is complete, and unfortunately I only have a few chapters left to go, but I wanted to stop by to tell you what a terrific story this is, Mrs. Gnomie. I can’t wait to read your next one!

I got angrier and angrier at Corbin the more I read of the chapter. All I want to do is slap him upside his head! lol And the next chapter; he just doesn’t know what he wants. He flip flops between boys more often than he changes underwear! 🤣 Seriously, though, thank you for agreeing with me. I just don’t understand him at all. You bring up a great point, though: I don’t want Jon to think I’m attacking him personally. I am definitely NOT. And yeah, as I read each chapter, I think the same thing: how much of Corbs’ personality and motivation does Jon have?

What a wonderful story, @Mrsgnomie! I absolutely LOVE this spinoff of Boss Nanny, and I can’t wait to start the Epilogue. You are such a fantastic writer who can mix comedy with drama with action with suspense…I just love all your stories I’ve read so far.

JON!!!!! YOU’RE BACK!!!! YAY!!!!!! I’m so excited you’re back!!!! 👋👋 Now, onto the comment: Corbin is a fucking idiot. And an asshole. And the most power-hungry, self-absorbed, narcissist (I could go on and on) douchebag I’ve ever read about. All I want to do is yell at him and slap him upside his head a few million times. He FINALLY got what he wanted, who he wanted, and what does he do? He throws it all away for what? A place on the EC? Was it worth it, Corbin? The Brit was FINALLY on the same page as you, all in the relationship 100%, everything you’ve been obsessing over since you laid eyes on him, and now you blew it royally. Ok, so you think you were protecting him; I’m sure he did not think that. He was most likely thinking that you betrayed him and chose your little frat committee over him. Corbin, you will do whatever it takes to get what you want and sacrifice everything and everyone around you. You and Pete are still so young; you have your whole lives ahead of you, and who knows, you probably wouldn’t have made it past the end of the semester. But you bailed before giving the two of you a chance. And you would bail on him anytime something came up regarding the frat or moving up the frat ladder. And I ask again, for what? Three years from now, being on the EC won’t mean shit. But you might have had love in your life, and that is definitely worth way more than some Greek committee. Oh, and one more thing, Corbin: talking to your friends in front of Adam about how your first time with Pete went, was so not cool. And since when are you all buddy buddy with Adam anyway? Ok, I think I’ve said my peace. 😆 I’m waiting anxiously for the next chapter, Jon!

Funny, I just started a new topic on this because I didn’t see your question,@astone2292. Hopefully, if I log back in tomorrow night everything will be fixed?

Ok, I had to log in in order to read a chapter of a story I’m following. When I logged in, I was not directed to the story. All these little options in blue appeared in a vertical zig-zag down the page. It wasn’t until I scrolled three-quarters of the way down, that I finally saw the story. Is this the new format, or did something happen to my phone? This format is very difficult to navigate. I logged in a week or two ago, & everything was great. Now I can’t find anything. 🥲🥲

Oh, I will stick around! I’m looking forward to your next story! ❤️

So, I haven’t been on here in forever, but I wanted to sign in so I could tell you @Mrsgnomie, that this story is now one of my all-time favorites. And as much as I love Loren and Jay, I have to say that Aido Potato steals every scene he’s in! I just love that widdle (wittle?) dude! ❤️

What a fantastic story, @kbois! Omg, those twins were sick af. Jesus. I’d be afraid if I were Kyle and Megan; I wouldn’t want any of the Greene’s dysfunctional, sick, twisted genes in my DNA! As much as I love all the characters (well, obviously not the sick af brothers), my three favorite were Bruce, Rosie, and Tator. And I loved the short story about Lucy and the little monsters. lol 😆 It was very cute! I’ll have to start stalking your profile to see what other gems you’ve written.

Ron! I’m so excited to read another story from you! I’m always checking your site for updates! Obviously, the pastor is sick af. I hope to God he doesn’t find the boys. If he does, I’m sure they’ll never have the opportunity to escape again.

I absolutely love your writing, Dabeagle! I was so excited to see a Panic 2! Although I loved reading from Jack’s POV, I really like Derry’s POV also. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

I love this story! I just started reading it a few days ago, and you had me hooked from the start! Any story with dogs in them is a sure winner with me! Sorry, But Bruce steals all the scenes he’s in! 🐾🐕‍🦺🦴 I’m looking forward to seeing what’s going on with Kim and why she’s so upset. I do love mysteries!

I was so sad when I heard about Wayne. I didn’t know him well, but I did get the opportunity to meet him a few years ago. He was sweet and kind and had us all laughing with his humor. He was way too young to have left us. Rest in peace, Wayne. May your memory be a blessing. ❤️

JON!!!! How are you???? I have been keeping up with this hella awesome story, but I noticed you put a temporary hold on it. NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol I hope you can continue it soon! Although you know I love Pete, I love David more. I think for Corb’s sanity, David is much better for him. Pete’s too unpredictable, and he’s hurt Corbin so many times in the past. And I get it. Corbin is pretty pushy, and he pushed Pete away because Pete wasn’t ready to deal with his feelings for Corbs. I’m just not sure if Corbs has the patience to wait for Pete to realize how much Corbin means to him. Corbin has too many distractions in his way: Chip, David...and whomever else might strike his fancy. This was another spectacular chapter, Jon! Edit: please disregard the ‘Spoiler’s; I accidentally clicked on the ‘eye’ icon twice! lol Hey, it’s been awhile since I’ve been on here, so I’m cutting myself some slack. Haha

Laura, I absolutely LOVE this story!!! Your three main characters just jump out at me. I love them all! I also love Ryan and Shane...Edward, I’m pretty pissed at right now. I think he’s already fallen for Adrian, and that’s why he’s giving him the cold shoulder. Did I mention that I really LOVE Shane????? lol Ok, on to the next chapter!