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Chapter 3: “Court attention at all costs”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 3: “Court attention at all costs”
The crux of the issue is what time do they have to catch-up to the foul actors on the continent, a stone's throw so to speak, from the bad actors??? -
Just how was technology been introduced, recreated, and now in use by what will appear to be enemies of Eli??
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Chapter 1-Always Say Less Than Necessary
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 1-Always Say Less Than Necessary
An interesting twist to say the least! One has to wonder if others are aware of his dual sexuality... -
Charlie needs to remind himself that he is better off, he has a house and a younger brother he needs to be strong for. If he should see Drew, he will need to point to the sidewalk and the curb saying so long!! It's gonna hurt but in the long run it will get better!!
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Welcome back, a very interesting chapter and looking forward to the rest!
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And as the old saying goes..."There's more than one way to skin a cat"! Loved this chapter!
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Looks like a non-exclusive club of 'straight' guys getting their gay side some fun...
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A Very Enchanted Boy
drsawzall commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in A Very Enchanted Boy
I thought the 'confessional scene' was as well written as anything I've read recently, it was original, well-paced, and descripted, well done... An interesting ending to say the least, not too sure I would have spared the miscreants...- 19 comments
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This looks like it might be a slower process, wonder if Luke will 'get' thru to him???
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Chapter 13 The Photo Shoot
drsawzall commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 13 The Photo Shoot
Me too...well, that was quite the jump, going from discovering his grandfather's proclivities to taking it a step further...and becoming a minor celebrity... -
Liking this coming-of-age story, a lot of common-sense wisdom interspersed throughout!!
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A great start to what will be a very interesting story! The following rang so true to me…. The guys were not explicitly homophobic, just woefully unaware of what else was going on around them and profoundly myopic in their world view. It tended to be casual cruelty rather than deliberate aggression.
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Could someone from off-world be after our sly little fox??? A long distance marriage could be fun, just think of the joys of welcome home sex... “Mateio, why did you ask me to check the food?” the elf asked suddenly. “I thought I smelled arithal in it. That’s a poison from Egara, though I have no idea what it would be doing here.” “You’re certain you didn’t bring any with you?” “Of course not! I don’t trade in poisons. Besides, no one can get into the ship without me.”
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Talk about an auspicious beginning to this tale, change is never easy and unplanned events can be quite disconcerting to say the least!
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Thank you for the time and effort to share this tale with us. I am remis in not reading the previous segments and will do so! I hope good fortune allows us to follow King Aaron, Itumak, and Captain Darren in future adventures. This was well done, brilliantly conceived, and a joy to read!!! Thank you!!!!
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You miss so much by not starting at the beginning....well worth the time!!!
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I can get it on Amazon, it comes in a can like sliced peaches in a sugar sauce, it is good for baking in upside-down cakes and whatnot!!!
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Well, if you wanted to impress your sovereign, I can't think of a better way to do so and lay those nasty rumors to rest!!! A fortuitous sequence of events...now...how in the heck did Calvert pull this one off??? It is going to take every bit of Dr Jackson's skill to pull this one off...all sorts of debris gets caught with the bullet as it goes through cloth and decorations... Loved this chapter!!!
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The following may help to explain in better detail what a "Karen" or "Ken" is...a sad commentary of where we are as a society today!! How 'Karen' Became The Name For Rude, Middle-Aged White Women (lifehacker.com.au)
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I have to wonder if the 'Karen' next door has a husband named 'Ken"...or is he a henpecked minion...It would be wise to keep tabs on her and the property line, video cameras would go a long way to diffusing any issues or trespassing concerns...
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I think Joe is going to turn out just fine!!!
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Hey now...I happen to like rhubarb straight from the garden, made into sauce and used as a pie filler with some strawberries...oh...wait...as a name....no.... I have some friends who have sons of a certain, tender age where Pillock or Dolt would be more than appropriate...I can remember a couple of the other species where Badger would have sufficed and been appropriate as well...
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At their age and the hormonal swimming pool they are bathing in, like I was once, a stiff breeze was more than enough to make me fall in love with the closest living and inanimate objects that piqued my fancy... One has to hope sensibility factors in after a short, hopefully so, cooling off period... Is it wrong of me to hope Mr Clancy gets hit by a bus/freight train???
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They say nothing lasts forever, is it wrong of me to wish Mr Craig a fatal coronary??? Craig, I hope you find your testimonials, here's a hint...if you've warmed up, they should be dangling between your legs...
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Chapter 12 A Funeral and a Birthday
drsawzall commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 12 A Funeral and a Birthday
Well...I had to go with wow...talk about a dichotomy, Carey had the pressures of financing college erased and a tidy sum for when he turns 21, as well as finding out he may share certain proclivities with his grandfather. While I don't necessarily believe in coincidences, the invitation from the naughty/kinky professor, to the photo shoot and the discovery of the porno's in his grandfather's safe, makes a person wonder... Oh Bell...whatever is happening to you and will your future have anything to do with the other naughty/kinky professor???
