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Very nice chapter!! To say that Denise is the most deluded individual on the planet is a gross understatement!!! But of course, her "religion" calls for her to only see things with the usual self-righteous, dogmatic, bigoted, attitude that comes with most religious BS!!! Jason was stupid, to not put her out of his apartment, before leaving...now he's given her delusion another lifeline! Well, can't wait to see if he can truly man-up and get rid of that albatross before she chokes the life out of him. Loved the chapter...so looking forward to more!!

Loved the cast and their interactions with each other! It was difficult picking a favorite, but in the end, I had to choose Nobu, simply because he was ultimately the magnet that drew them all together and decided that they could and would be true "brothers"! I chose Dante as the most relatable, because of the beautiful spirit and impish little character within him...to know him is to love him.. I'd love to see more development from Nikola and Mikhail...I think there might be some hidden feelings there to explore. The beauty of this story, is the many avenues left to explore with a number of these wonderful characters....Dimitry, Alexi, Satoshi...the interplay between the mafias...the future of extricating the brothers from the mafias, etc...I can not wait to see what happens to whom next!!!!!!

Wow...perfect ending (beginning) to an awesome story!! You've evoked every emotion...laughter, tears, smiles, groans, shocks, intrigue, excitement, sex and most of all Love...and we absolutely adored every written word!!! I'm just hoping this is just a book 1 to a series.. and we can look forward to more from the brothers and more from you!! It's been a great following this tale...and we thank you for sharing your talent with us!!!

Okkkkkkkkkkk...love this one!! I'm thinking Bubba should move away from the intelligence business and hang out his "Insight to life" sign and start making the big money!! Insightful, not pushy, easy flow conversation that led to a bit of soul searching for Ryan...and VIOLA!!!..home where he belongs!! Good job Rex...you're batting a thousand (nothing unusual)!!

OMG...another awesome chapter!! Trying to stem the tears...how awful can one parent get...how much hate and evil can manifest itself in one human being!!?? Their "papa" and Barrett should be captured and put together in a dungeon for life, to be given the occasional bread and dirty water!!! I hope Ash can teach Kye how to live and love...that it's not too late to heal and be happy... Thank you for a beautiful, gut wrenching chapter...

EXCELLENT!!!!! Well written, exciting chapter! Finally, Rafa is coming to terms with some of the feelings he's developing for Hyun!! Looking forward to more and more...thank u for sharing!!!

Great start...should be very interesting how this progresses!!!

Excellent chapter!! So happy that Nobu took the high road and decided to forgive and walk away with both his dignity and integrity...leaving Daisuke in more turmoil and anguish than if he had physically tortured him!! There may be a chance for the guys to extricate themselves from these detrimental familial ties that seem to want to rob them of humanity and potentially keep them apart!! Can't wait to see the brothers confront their father....

Thanks Rex, for the awesome history of a movement, a time, an epidemic that was allowed to almost wipe out an entire generation of wonderful loving people!! This chapter brought tears and memories of how heinous human beings can be toward others whom they perceive as "different" or not worthy to be protected and secure in our world...I've lived through the tragedies of both the 60's and the 80's...and yet, we still have to be ever vigilante in keeping evil and hate at bay, everyday!! How sad! Again, excellent chapter...glad to see the guys moving forward so lovingly!!

As usual...you've done a fabulous job with this chapter...the adenalin rush you gave us with the anticipation of Vladi getting to Daisuke in time and the terror we felt (literally) along with Nobu for Viktor's life...was just amazing!!! Thank you for such an awesome story, and especially for this chapter that took us from terror to relief...brilliantly!!

Fabulous chapter to a beautiful story!!! So glad Cor was forced to thow the "garbage" out! Hopefully he can learn to forgive and give Jas another chance...if Pierre can do it...what's stopping him.. Get a grip Cor and see what's smacking you in the face.. Awesome writing...

Awesome....simply fantastic story!! So looking forward to Ash making Kye believe that he's worthy of being loved...should be quite interesting to say the least!!

Hoping this review will let you know that you've created two characters that we've totally become enamored with!! Loving the storyline, and the way it's developing...beautiful!!! So please be encouraged to give us moreeeeeeeeeeeee!! BTW, love the way Benji is taking care of his man...

While I'll admit to not caring for Jason and his cavalier treatment of Pierrre, I was totally impressd with the way he was so open and honest about his shortcomings back when he was young and taking everything for granted!! It shows his level of maturity, especially given the fact that it could have gone downhill and caused a scene...he knew that it was something that had to be done.. Difficult chapter...beautifully done!!

Brilliantly done...so exciting..so loving, so menacing...all wrapped into one chapter!!! Absolutely brilliant writing!! Can't wait for the next chapter...you have left our minds in turmoil...and literally on pins and needles waiting to see what happens next!!! Great job...thanks for sharing!

Very nice updating chapter, Rex...love how you have them showing the kind of love a real friendship should be...unconditional and there when you need it!! Good job!!! Hope you're doing ok and in good health! Can't wait for the next chapter...

Very nice...soooo glad our Barry is ok, and hoping that with all he's been through, with the love of Dave and their wonderful friends, he'll be just fine!!! But it was hell waiting a whole week... not knowing if one of our faves was ok!!!!!!!! Thanks for the update on everything.. I wasn't worried one bit Anyway, now to Clay's secret...after all of this, I'm glad he realizes that his love is in excellent hands...and secrets will be handled... Rex!!!

Great beginning...can't wait to see how these two tango!!! One will teach the other about a delightful sense of humor that can go a little awry...while the other will have to learn that every day is not a "play" day....should be quite interesting!! Absolutely loving the storyline and the characters already!!

Hey Rex...I'm a bit confused...would the authorities have left them all there without investigating the scene, dusting, and collecting evidence to get a sure fire conviction??? And would Barry's friends be more worried about celebrating a holiday when they don't know how badly he may have been injured??? Help me out buddy....just askin???? Are we to learn the answers next?

Wow...just happened onto this story...and so far, am blown away with it's energy and excitement!! And now...they must deal with the asinine "media" of assume what you will and assinate characters at will... In any case, looking forward to "plan B" and the next chapters...amazing job so far!!

Hmmm...trying to decide whether to beat you now...or wait until the end of the story!!!??? Decisions, decisions, decisions...ahhh...guess I'll have to wait until you finish the story(psst..wouldn't want to injure those talented fingers)!! Excellent chapter, Rex!!! Love how you're showing how Clayton and Ryan are getting sooo comfortable and more understanding of each other!! While the nightmares concern me, I think that the love that's growing between these two, will suffice any and all obstacles! Let me be the first to say that...this poor robber has...picked the wrong bar, the wrong night, and OMG...the absolute frikin wrong set of friends to try and rob...Dave is gonna kill him for breathing on Barry, and twice for threatening him and his friends!!! Can't wait for the next chapter...tomorrow In any case...awesome job "King Cliffy"!!

Very nice storyline here...short chapter, but informative none the less...characters are coming to life better and liking the way this is fleshing out so far!! Good job!

Great chapter, loved the museum descriptions!!! Very nice the way the guys have become so in sync with each other...almost sensing their feelings, solidifying their new found love... The interaction between the friends is building a bond that will be lasting, loving and fun-filled!! Kudos on this chapter!!! You did good...oh...btw, don't think I didn't notice you were a lil late... but, considering it was well worth it...I'll let u slide this time!!

This has been a unique and exciting story, from beginning to now!!! Looking forward to the epilogue and more of your talent!! Thanks for giving us the pleasure of reading your awesome work!!

Loving this story!!! Your characters are always unique and fascinating from beginning to end!!