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Poor Melissa.. Terry and Camilo, both selfish. Camilo is lucky that Desean even wants to talk. Hopefully that talk will be a step in the right direction, even if he doesn’t get back with Desean. Thank you Headless.

This gave me chills.. including Ralph and Darrell listening in as their story was told. Well done Headless.

This was a very good story.. Hopefully, Devin can move on poor guy. The ending surprised me only because I was probably as far gone as Devin.. Thank you Headless

So happy you updated.. Sophomore year is off to a great start... more soon...ish?

Done...

Hope you’ll go easy on yourself renee, and take it day by day..

Don and Louis are faced with challenges after don’s sudden accident. Life changes for this active, vibrant couple in a blink of an eye. While trying to cope with the very real implications to their relationship, in walks a sister with dubious intent and a temptation from a co worker. This is a nuanced story about love, and the strength and fortitude of Don and Louis. It is about dealing with uncertainty and fighting the unknown with courage and grace. You cannot be untouched by this story..

Tommy is a brave soul.. and Jody.. 😳 This was suitably creepy.. No lie, I’m a little freaked out.. Well done Headless.

Oh phooey, indeed. The dream probably would have only kept him away from the Snell house and others that looked like it. But come on he’s at the best age to go trick or treating.. Nice story. Thank you, Headless

This was a lovely and amusing story.. Just the right amount of spook and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you, Headless

See, while I am happy that Christopher was able to solve that mystery, I don’t know if I would have been able to keep the souvenirs.. Too creepy for me, but as long as he knows the boys are at peace and grateful.. Thank you Headless..

This is a rough one for Jake. His mother’s response is typical and hurtful. I have two thoughts about Jake and Nat. The first is that Jake is a little manipulative- maybe not the right word, but getting mad at Nat when she is under no obligation to listen to his ‘whining’ isn’t fair. That’s where the support of AA or therapy or something other than friends comes in. She is his friend and support doesn’t mean she has to be on-call for his meltdowns 24/7. Especially when she might not be equipped or know how to handle it. If she is a really, way back when close friend this makes her a little shallow and callous. (I forget of it was mentioned how they met or how close they were) My second thought. Nat herself might be mad at Jake for getting sober. She might be resentful of losing her ‘fun’ partner. Like, you decided to go sober I didn’t.. so fu.. Was she part of the problem? Someone who he could have drinks with freely without censor. If that’s the case, maybe Nat maybe another person who’s no good for his sobriety right now.. Not that she’s no good.. Forgive my ramble.

You speak to all our fears Gary. Most days I’m in denial.. then I get angry. Then I try convince myself this is an alternate universe.. But then I wake up... It is worrisome and sad, but we need to try to find the light of hope I think.

Thank you Caz.. This was a really great story and I enjoy from the beginning to this amazing chapter end.. Cant wait to see what’s next!!

tim, I’m always a little sad when your stories end because there’s always such a connection to your characters. Changes was such a wonderful and rewarding story, rich with real emotion and struggles but never lacking in love. You allowed us to see through Don and Louis, that change in whatever form, does not have to diminish love in spite of the harshest trials and distractions. Instead, we can face it with courage and be stronger for it. And that unconditional love and forgiveness can certainly make us better, if only for ourselves. Thank you for a beautiful story.. I am so looking forward to what comes next.

🎉Happy Birthday to you!!🎉

That is priceless.. and you’ll always have a piece of them.

✅ And yes! Yours was definitely better.

I would never have stopped kissing the cute boy for a game of Quija so the night would have ended up without the fright for me. That was a very good story and that’s the kind of prank that would definitely have scared me. Well done Headless

Hehe... This could possibly be based on real events. Loved it. Good job Headless.

Oh the pine needle.. this was good and spooky. You did a really good job building the tension. Great job Headless.

(and the puppies) xoxo

for you..

Congratulations! That’s amazing and exciting and speaks to your wonderful talent. You know I’m soo happy for you!!!

Oh, Horny Harry... methinks he needs his own guy.. someone set him up please!!! Louis didn’t try to hide or make excuses for what he was feeling and what happened. That’s the adult way and I appreciated that. That’s the constant between those two men. They deal with everything honestly even though each might not like it. Another wonderful chapter tim, made even more so by the ending which was beautiful.. so very happy for Don..