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Great chapter! I disagree with those who say Colt went about his interaction with Sam the wrong way. If it wasn't for his daughter being with him, I'm sure Sam would have got it much worse, which he would have totally deserved! Don't even think of coming around saying you're my best friend after saying what Sam said. He can f**k right off!
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Great chapter....but now I'm hungry for ribs! Lol!!
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I think he should definitely go meet Ali, although at the same time I'd feel bad for Oliver. He seemed like a decent guy.
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I agree! Paul needs a big dose of karma!
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I'm not surprised by his parent's behavior. Now we know where his brother gets his way of thinking. To treat the boys the way they did is unforgivable. I would have loved to hear the conversation between them and Evie. I can imagine it wasn't at all pleasant. Lol!
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I just started reading this story today, and I love it! I couldn't stop reading til I was caught up! Lol! I've laughed and cried. Pete has such a big heart, as does Jimmy. I absolutely love Bobby and Butch. Bobby playing matchmaker for Pete and Jimmy was the greatest! I like Pete's family members that we've met so far. Paul sounds like a total ass, and I feel sorry for his son. Pete's parents sound like a real piece of work too. Wonder if they'll have enough guts to show their faces.
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Interesting start. I think it would make me physically ill to kno I just fucked someone I hate. Can't wait to see where u take the story, why James hates Alistair, and if Alistair knew who James was.
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U did fine with the fight scene. No need to get graphic. Lol! I feel so bad that Tris got attacked and injured. Saving the wolf and her pup shows his character. Hopefully Sasha will realize that....or maybe it will be him that hears the female's distress howls.
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I just started this story yesterday and already love it! Its hot that Tris has never been attracted to a guy before Sasha. I'm very entertained by Sasha's defiance. I, too, can be very stubborn so I can totally identify with Sasha's behavior. I'm sorry to say that I would have probably had the same reaction as he did, with the exception of shooting a load in Tris' bed. Lol! Can't wait to read more!
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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 7
jaysalmn commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 7
Great chapter! I love Jaime!! His commentary is so entertaining! What an afternoon they're having! Can't wait to see what Ricky wants to try! -
Don't get me wrong, I love the story! I've lost track of how many times I've read it.
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I thought the exact same thing when I first read it! Had it been me, things would have been broken, chairs would have been flying out of windows...maybe along with the ex! Lol!
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Freshman Year, Christmas Break
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Freshman Year, Christmas Break
Great chapter! I absolutely love Noah's story. Its wonderful to be able to read something happy and positive when the world today is negative in so many ways. Be safe. Minnesota isn't too bad right now. Expecting it to get worse, but hopefully I'm wrong. The retail company I work for is cutting freight by 60% expecting another stay at home order in the near future. Scary times, but we have stories like yours to get us through. -
Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
I'm not a fan of those kinds of stories either, and was skeptical when I started reading Morningstar. It ended up being a favorite of mine. -
As horrible as he was to Sage, the whole world is gonna hear Blu explode when he hears about Tracy!! Lmao! Sage and Link weren't hiding anything, and Bella is his princess! I don't care how big Tracy is, Blu is gonna want to destroy him! Can't wait for that chapter! Lol!
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I really enjoyed this story! Alex matured way more than I had expected, and I absolutely love Jeremy! The only part I would disagree with is Alex meeting with Brandon. Why Alex would want anything to do with him is beyond me. The last thing I would do for someone who hurt a person I love, intentionally or not, is to make up with them and continue to be friends, but whatever. Great story! Can't wait to see the next one!
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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 6
jaysalmn commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 6
Go Jamie!!! Great chapter! His thinking through all this was so entertaining! Can't wait to see what happens next, especially when Silas finds out! -
Loved the story! To answer your question, yes I would definitely like to read more!!
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What a great bonus chapter! Harlan knocked Pastor Hypocrite off his self made pedestal! Love it!! Hopefully this will give Huck and Rayne the chance to find that father/son bond again. Its obvious that they're both unhappy with the current situation.
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Well, this isn't exactly three 8 year olds we're talking about. No comparison.
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There are a lot of red flags waving on this one. A "straight" guy would rather share a bed with two other guys than sleep on the sofa, or ask to stay in the main house, not to mention that he has already had an encounter with Richie. Nothing about this seems right.
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Just the fact that the three of them are sharing a bed is extremely weird. They live in a gated property, his grandfather can afford to buy him a new BMW, but there's no sofa?? They can't afford to buy a fold away bed if he insists on staying at Jimmy's?? I don't get it.
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It will be very interesting to see how Jimmy and Richie can even move forward with a third wheel. Considering Richie and Nick already had one encounter, I'd be apprehensive if I were Jimmy. Happy to see that Jimmy is doing so well at his new job.
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What a wonderfully written chapter! I'm teary eyed as I type this. I'm so happy Kyle and his father at least started communicating and hopefully moving to a better father/son relationship. Kyle really needed to hear what his father said. Lucky for Jake it turned out the way it did. With the wrong kind of father, that could have blown up and ended really bad. I'm beyond happy that Jake and Kyle have the kind of connection they do. I think they're good for each other. Glad that Danny has been respectful of them....so far. I don't hold out much hope that Danny won't persuade Jake to cheat on Kyle. His track record so far in this story makes me think this is a definite possibility. I hope I'm wrong.
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Awww their first kiss!! ❤ I like that they're taking it slow and not going from a first kiss to humping like rabbits in the same chapter. Yeah, we kno exactly what Brandon and Charles were gonna do when they went back to the EMPTY house. Lol!
