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Thank you for reading. I seem to have a pattern of "things end on a good note." I think I need to change that. -
Interlude 4: Doctor Shane Thomas
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in Interlude 4: Doctor Shane Thomas
You're welcome and thank you for reading. Doctor Thomas and Admiral Toews are very much in the camp of "The Ends, Justifies the Means." You'll see soon what I mean. Aeris should have shot him, but Admiral Franks (and anyone else on the Prometheus) didn't know about the immunity deal Dr. Thomas had. I'll just say, Shane gets what is coming to him. -
Thank you! I've been using these prompts mainly to work on Convos, so I'm glad the interaction was good.
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“Where are you planning to get the money for that vacation?” Professor Kline asked looking over at AJ. “Three weeks touring Ireland, England, and Scotland, seems to be rather expensive.” AJ smiled at his Professor, knowing he meant well. Professor Kline was his academic advisor, and whom he sought guidance on a variety of issues over the years. He’s also the man, which needed to approve him to access the campus computer system while he was away. “It’s mine and Tommy’s wedding honeymoon. D
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He spent the remainder of the shuttle flight back to the Prometheus in silence. Having just seen Aeris teleported without warning, and Admiral Franks’ admonishment of a serious discussion once on board, he wasn’t looking forward to docking. He wasn’t scared. He knew what he had done was all sanctioned by FleetCom, and he had his trump card as well. What he was, was pissed off. Pissed that Aeris screwed him out of this discovery. Pissed that Aeris was so overly cautious, he jeopardized Shane’s re
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I have no words, but to say it was fantastic writing. Made me want to be the guy giving directions to the waiter.
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Thanks! I am tempted to further the story along and may do so once one of the three open projects I have been completed.
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I might try to hit St. Pete Pride, but currently, just being my Gay self, out and proud.
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Interlude 3: Friendship & Trust
Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in Interlude 3: Friendship & Trust
There is really no cost with all it. The exception is that each time something is sent back in time, the old timeline is locked, and is no longer accessible. No, this was the first time a time capsule from the future happened. -
Very gay as well. Also, that was some messed up questions. They had no Key West on there!
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Tough subject, but a well-crafted story.
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The characters we already love, plus new characters who quickly become endearing to you. Veil of Shadows is an excellent follow-up book to Hidden Sunshine.
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Good days, and Bad days. I know all about them. It's another poem of your's Tim I feel you're taking straight from my soul or mind. Excellent work.
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This story has everything a good SciFi needed. It also has a great Romance feature to it as well. Excellently written, and captivating. The characters come alive, and you feel a connection to them. I highly recommend it. Five Stars.
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Thank you, Tim. I lost two people I used to work with at the Pulse shooting. This was a great poem for them.
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Your poems have a way of speaking to my soul, Tim. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Thank you! More to come, soon.
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Thank JP. I have plans for them, and a few more Real Life events to put into them. So it's not all fiction.
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Thank you for reading. It's partially inspired by Real Life events, so there will be more.
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Thanks, Drewbear. I'm glad you liked it!
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Coward, Anal and Time - Prompt 500
Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Coward, Anal and Time - Prompt 500
This was fantastic. You could feel the loneliness of the Cook's Mate, and nervousness that comes from being so close to death. That feeling of wanting to be held. (Which I've been experiencing a lot lately.) Perfect in my opinion Tim. Great job. -
Excellent! What song was it?
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I found it very enjoyable.
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I sometimes wonder what aliens from outer space would think of us. Loved this short hun.
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I sometimes feel my little comments pale in comparison to the work, I just read. This is one such time. It was an excellent story, uplifting, and you made me feel like I was sitting with Hugh and Even while they talked. Excellent work Tim.
