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The day of rest turned into work, and gave Niran the chance to see Kaleo in his element. He really does have a passion for his work. Hopefully Brandon is dealt with on a permanent basis, as well as the Shawick group. Will be interesting to see how Kaleo’s family responds to meeting Niran. And if they take the younger ones to the amusement park, invite Dory to go with.
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Interesting they had to stand and listen to philosophical readings for 3 hours on a Sunday… Lawrence learns a little more about Bastien.
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Interesting this is a current reality rather than science fiction. Beautiful.
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Well if the first days of filming are any indication, this is going to be another fantastic film…
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Adrien was very careful in the giving of his blood. Lucien is very possessive. The complete bondage is now broken. Eli wants to go out and be seen with his hot boyfriend. I wonder if Lucien has any assets in his name? They would have grown in value in the time he was held captive. Where are they going to go from here?
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This is a tremendous chapter. Jamie fets to be a part of this amazing extended family. Levi did need to set boundaries. Luke was absolutely correct that Jamie should in no way feel like he needed to do anything sexual as payment for being there. Levi still hasn’t figured out his sexuality yet, but states he doesn’t think he’s like that to Jamie. Casey deserves whatever punishment he gets for being a troublemaker.
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Interesting chapter on the older characters.
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Fascinating work they are doing with all of the genetics. Will be interesting to see who they find in China.
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River was really pushing Kai in that kiss
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Part XXXIV. Displacement
VBlew commented on sumtimesIwrite's story chapter in Part XXXIV. Displacement
Nice cliffhanger. Lovers with secrets, lovers trying to get their partner back. What a twisted web you’ve written. -
Chapter 30 ~ Finding His Place ~
VBlew commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 30 ~ Finding His Place ~
Everyone on this ranch is supported and wants to give back for what they have received. Bass was afraid that he would have to buy Kidd some custom boots… the dog rescue sounds like a great addition to the ranch. Mannly, wants to use his talents to get a website up and running to help bring in money, volunteers and overall promote all the good things happening on the ranch. Wait, why would Mannly move into the bunkhouse? Jake needs to ask him to move into his place out of the main house? -
Chapter 13 Under the Wyoming Sun
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 13 Under the Wyoming Sun
Back and forth. Ryan seems like the stable “family” man who wants to stay in town. Cameron really seems like a wanderer, and not likely to stay with one person. Marcus has a tough decision to make. -
The coincidence of them both being nominated for awards by the same entity is amazing. Then neither of them looking through the entire list of nominees to see their ex was going to be there. The foreshadowing a few chapters ago about Miles’ sunset post now makes sense. I was thinking it was about Owen finding Miles online, but seem more like this getting them back together. They both still love each other, but Miles seems so stoic about it that he would not let Troy know. Will Robbie get introduced and say something?
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I like this pair as private detectives. It was a very good ending to the story. Looking forward to more in the series with these guys.
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Kai’s interaction with River at the bar were pleasant, why back to the sworn enemy trope the next day? River is interested, but not enough to make a move. Is Fly really that oblivious?
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Brandon once again proves he is an utterly stupid person, thinking he can try hurting Kaleo, without consequences. Niran now knows for sure who killed his father. And they have royal security forces engaged to thwart Gordon Shawick.
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Seems like a crazy thing telling them they have to fight or leave. Zafiro doesn’t seem to have any problem with fighting at this point. It’s sad to hear that the treatment didn’t completely heal him though.
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Back on the plantation that he now owns, feels different and he is leaning into the work. Sam’s letter was a welcome surprise.
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Hopefully when Kent is healed they will explore more than quick kisses.
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Eli just enjoyed the day by himself. He did not reach out to Adrien. Which seems like a good thing. Lucien is very possessive. And I think they realize they really are just friends. Tonight the change happens.
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Yes on the new story. Noah as concerned seeing Ash with a bruise his face. Looks like they bot want some more alone time.
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Chapter 10- A Mother's Shadow
VBlew commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 10- A Mother's Shadow
Now stood up to his mother. Cal came in strong to be with his man. Everything turned out ok. The bonding seems a little one sided… they need to swap roles. -
He survived the fight because he is telling the story, but lost some friends this day. Were the Romans not equipped to counter Guerrilla warfare? Seems not from this account.
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Why does River come and sit at the bar in Kai’s section if he acts like he hates him? That accident with the horse could have been tragic. Got to be focused around those big dogs…
