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  1. VBlew

    Chapter 15

    Narrow escape, good thing for the traps, collapsing the tunnels. Very suspenseful chapter.
  2. VBlew

    Chapter 47

    Sean getting the call from Miguel, an another singer he admires, made him think differently. Sometimes it takes someone outside our close circle to tell us the same thing for it to finally get through. Hopefully he acts on that. The kids were so cute, Brian is a brilliant light in all of this, so optimistic about everything. The Reddit investigation is going well in the search for Erin/Gary. The scene in the bedroom was hard. Jesse loves Shaun so much he’s willing to be physically hurt, and it was terrifying him this time. He flipped it around after the deep cut happened. First time being in charge of their sexual, and being on top, loving Shaun, being gentle, was a huge turning point for them. I hope this ends the need to cut…. I can’t believe we’re close to the end.
  3. These guys just keep getting caught.
  4. VBlew

    Part III: Joint Ops

    Amazing work. This op really stressed them until they finally connected. Not sure how much longer Brody is hoping to be ably to keep up this tole if he’s starting to have knee issues, but for now, they have each other. That bar scene was fantastic.
  5. Great ending, left us wanting more. So hot.
  6. VBlew

    Chapter 10

    Now we know for sure Miller is on Hank’s team…. Jesse is still a target, and hopefully the connections can assist, and they get more intel on the whereabouts of the abuser…. Then they eliminate that problem.
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    Chapter 9

    Seems like the Sherrif just needed an excuse to have Hank abuse him. It was a hot scene. But Jesse is terrified.
  8. VBlew

    Chapter 9

    The money came pouring in. Enough to get the watch back if he wants to. Matt is so cute, getting detention just to get close to the boy he’s interested in. It worked. Then added himself to the group, just to be in the loop. Brilliant idea, new deal. The question is who makes the deal?
  9. VBlew

    Senator Martinez

    Everyone is getting along. Getting ready for the wedding, and the concert.
  10. VBlew

    Chapter 28

    This really does not seem like a good way to start, especially if Fenn is going to be bound on their first time having sex… seems very manipulative. More so than Daryan has already been doing.
  11. Another step forward for Kitt. It still doesn’t make sense that he has not reached out to Matt…
  12. VBlew

    Chapter 4

    Beautiful and sad at the same time.
  13. This is a time for family and healing and it started with Jay. They love Adam so much. He is beginning to finally accept it, that he can come back to Vancouver, and be OK.
  14. VBlew

    Chapter 46

    Good on Jesse making Shaun actually do things around the house. It got his mind off his troubles and actually working on the house which needed it. Hopefully with the online sleuthing they will find “Erin” and be able to have him arrested.
  15. VBlew

    Crossing Lines

    Paul is slowly accepting this version of himself.
  16. The separation without being able to say goodbye was rough. The phone number was enough to maintain contact. The writing is amazing. I feel like I’m right there with them.
  17. Wow, this is an amazing first chapter, you captured the reality of the situation, and the attraction of these two incredible men,and their realization that they had been looking for each other for a long time. Looking forward to more of this story. It could be a good ending, but feels like there is so much more to be told.
  18. Wow, that was a huge plot twist. Not sure that Andrew can really come out of this as anything beyond the Bully that messed up Marcus’ life. Maybe it’s time to go back to Edmonton, be with his best friend. Could that subconsciously been part of the reason he never said yes to getting married?
  19. VBlew

    Chapter 6

    Awesome, we get a little more of a view into the real Charlie. Maybe he’ll be nicer to the caregivers now. Interesting twist wanting to know how the date goes.
  20. Very funny interlude….
  21. VBlew

    Bollix

    Hopefully there is a good safe room in the apartment for Scott, would not want to loose him, or maybe he can take out the would be assassin? Sean is interested in more for his life. His hacking skills could come in handy for working with Gabriel…
  22. It’s like a family reunion with the older generation popping in to help.
  23. I loved how they moved to the next level. Five using his specially mad tool to finish the bet, and that getting Percy all worked up that he had to go all Dom on him. Their honest conversation about who they wanted to be with. Loved the interaction with the flirty twins. The surprise getting back and possibly interrupting a robber in the house, but I think it’s Ethan, all of those clues around strange things in the pool area, maybe he hacked the security or saw the code Five or Percy were using… Percy clearly knew who they were, and he’s not going to loose Five now.
  24. VBlew

    Chapter 45

    Gretchen is right. Shaun needs to post his own video. Sam is great support, first finding that Bobby takedown video, then suggesting how to get Erin back… they have their song selection ready. Halloween is going to be interesting.
  25. Given the appearance of the artifact in the photo, it could be anywhere on the property, and not be noticed. Like the Barn for example.
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