dughlas Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 I am thoroughly enjoying the story. Haven't left reviews for which I apologize. I am trying not to overthink it instead letting the story flow around me absorbing each new bit as it comes. This, for me, allows a deeper suspense. 2
Site Moderator Reader1810 Posted September 10, 2015 Site Moderator Posted September 10, 2015 (edited) I am thoroughly enjoying the story. Haven't left reviews for which I apologize. I am trying not to overthink it instead letting the story flow around me absorbing each new bit as it comes. This, for me, allows a deeper suspense. I like the way you think dugh. Sometimes, it's better to see where the ride takes us rather than planning a destination. I do that on my nightly walks and it's a lot less troubling for my mind than failing to meet my goal. Or in this case, figuring out "whodunnit". Edited September 10, 2015 by Reader1810 1
Puppilull Posted September 10, 2015 Posted September 10, 2015 I'm really getting into the story now, sitting here talking out loud to the characters... I liked Kit so much, but now I'm thinking he needs to grow up. He knows Colin is very attracted to him, yet he more or less throws Colin out. Then he shows up with Kim after a trip (!), but still manages to appear jealous. Only to conclude with more confusion and mixed signals. What is he? 15? Maybe the brute is the way to go? Forest green eyes... Says a lot. 2
lomax61 Posted September 11, 2015 Author Posted September 11, 2015 Thanks to everyone for staying with me on this one. I know there's a lot happening which is all part of the build up, but the next couple of chapters will provide some new and potentially telling clues. And then... Hang on to your hats ! 3
Timothy M. Posted September 11, 2015 Posted September 11, 2015 Whoa mate, stop throwing new chapters at us while we're still reeling from the previous ones. I'm still trying to recover from after reading the couple counselling scene. 2
Puppilull Posted September 11, 2015 Posted September 11, 2015 No, Tim, don't give the nice man feeding the hungry birds any ideas! New chapters? Om nom nom nom! 4
Timothy M. Posted September 11, 2015 Posted September 11, 2015 (edited) No, Tim, don't give the nice man feeding the hungry birds any ideas! I wondered how long it would take before someone objected. Edit: and of course I don't really want Brian to stop posting chapters. Edited September 11, 2015 by Timothy M. 2
Site Moderator drpaladin Posted September 11, 2015 Site Moderator Posted September 11, 2015 I believe Brian was making up for the time he missed on his trip. The rapid chapters are appreciated though. 2
dughlas Posted September 11, 2015 Posted September 11, 2015 He's spoiling us, that is not a complaint. 2
Site Moderator drpaladin Posted September 11, 2015 Site Moderator Posted September 11, 2015 He's spoiling us, that is not a complaint. Hehe. I love being spoiled. It's been a bit since I was, so I almost don't know how to act. Bring it on Brian! 1
lomax61 Posted September 12, 2015 Author Posted September 12, 2015 Whoa mate, stop throwing new chapters at us while we're still reeling from the previous ones. I'm still trying to recover from after reading the couple counselling scene. I know, I know, Tim. And I am most grovelingly (is that a word?) sorry. The problem is I have these 99.9% ready chapters waiting to be aired, and get a bit trigger happy. Things will begin to cool a little with the ones that need more work before posting. Great reviews by the way. Brian 1
Site Moderator Reader1810 Posted September 12, 2015 Site Moderator Posted September 12, 2015 (edited) I'm behind in my reading, so the good thing about these rapid postings is that when I do manage to catch up, I will have a bunch of chapters to read in one go. No waiting to find out what happens next. The only downside is that I have to stay away from the forum, for fear of stumbling across "spoilers". PS: I like your new gravatar Brian. Just wondering if you know that lady in the background or have you been photo bombed? Edited September 12, 2015 by Reader1810 1
lomax61 Posted September 12, 2015 Author Posted September 12, 2015 I'm behind in my reading, so the good thing about these rapid postings is that when I do manage to catch up, I will have a bunch of chapters to read in one go. No waiting to find out what happens next. The only downside is that I have to stay away from the forum, for fear of stumbling across "spoilers". PS: I like your new gravatar Brian. Just wondering if you know that lady in the background or have you been photo bombed? Hi Reader1810, She is an old (or not so old in my case) PLU friend of mine. And this was a junk (as in Chinese style boat) trip from Victoria Harbour in Hong Kong to the outlying islands about two years ago. My immediate family (brother, sister-in-law, and kids) were visiting at the time. Make of that what you will. B 1
Timothy M. Posted September 12, 2015 Posted September 12, 2015 The problem is I have these 99.9% ready chapters waiting to be aired, and get a bit trigger happy. two chapters on the same day ?! that's not 'a bit trigger happy' - that's a bloody machine gun jamming. Maybe I shouldn't have egged you on... (Please post the next chapter soon (forget what I said in the forum).)
Defiance19 Posted September 14, 2015 Posted September 14, 2015 Agh! It happened again! Chapter 20 doesn't work. I think I'm glad though, need a breather. 1
lomax61 Posted September 14, 2015 Author Posted September 14, 2015 Agh! It happened again! Chapter 20 doesn't work. I think I'm glad though, need a breather. Sorry. I think I'm clogging the system by getting chapters ready and waiting online before publishing. I'll stick to the traditional method and post them as soon as they're ready. Chapter 20 should now be ready to go. B 2
spread_love Posted September 14, 2015 Posted September 14, 2015 May be the recent posted chaper 'Morning' should be renamed to 'One Night Stand' !? Thanks Brian for the fast updates! I can't wait to read more:p hopefully Colin does something to make DCW jealous and come running to him all horned up..haha:)
Puppilull Posted September 14, 2015 Posted September 14, 2015 I'm just waiting for another Ben/Kit face off! Could be epic! Both jealous, neither willing to talk about the elephant in the room...
Timothy M. Posted September 14, 2015 Posted September 14, 2015 No they didn't lock the front door but then Colin is under (geddit) police protection. Unless the men have left anything incriminating on their way to the bedroom, Billy will probably be none the wiser. Do you honestly mean to say, that Billy comes home to an unlocked front door and suspects nothing? I'm surprised he didn't start yelling for Colin or called the police.
dughlas Posted September 14, 2015 Posted September 14, 2015 I like how the story is progressing. Somehow I don't buy the one-night stand. I think Ben cares more than that...
dughlas Posted September 14, 2015 Posted September 14, 2015 Do you honestly mean to say, that Billy comes home to an unlocked front door and suspects nothing? I'm surprised he didn't start yelling for Colin or called the police. I suspect there were noises in the night that suggested he was better not to interrupt. 2
Defiance19 Posted September 14, 2015 Posted September 14, 2015 I'm just waiting for another Ben/Kit face off! Could be epic! Both jealous, neither willing to talk about the elephant in the room... Oh, that could be grand! I suspect there were noises in the night that suggested he was better not to interrupt. If that's the case, Billy will be full of questions later... How will Colin deal. Hehe. 1
Timothy M. Posted September 14, 2015 Posted September 14, 2015 Did you notice we got the title of the story in chapter 20?
Puppilull Posted September 14, 2015 Posted September 14, 2015 I sort of thought it was present in ch 19, but not explicitly. If the image in the beginning is Ben, I don't really see why Colin's mind would be confused. How can you not want to just kiss that? Or lick it?
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