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Loved the chapter! I think I was just as excited as they were for them moving into the house! Loving Mrs B! Was worried for a minute when she was talking about her husband, but technically he did take a spill! Lol!! Snowballs to the back of the head was hilarious. Nate and Bodie are so cute together! Can't wait to read more!

Great beginning! I like Wes and Joseph, and who could possibly not love a story with Benny in it! I'm excited to follow Wes' journey to finding his own happiness.

Bondage isn't my thing, so could have done without it. Great chapter otherwise. Brady's father sounds like a real sick fuck! Can't wait to see how they pay him back for all of his horrible deeds. Brady needs to ease up on breaking down doors. This is Nessay's house after all.

Great chapter, but made me cry too. Joey and Allen are so good for each other. I love that Allen's HIV status doesn't matter as far as Joey's feelings go. Reminds me of when one of my best friends mentioned he was HIV positive during casual conversation. I just shrugged my shoulders and nodded. He kinda looked at me and started laughing. I asked him what he was laughing about. He said "I just told u I was positive and u acted like I told u I didn't like onions or something" I responded "Ur status doesn't change our friendship." He passed a quite a few years ago, at too young of an age. I miss him a lot, but will never forget that conversation in his car on the way to Happy Hour!

Great chapter! Glad that the party went well. I can imagine how emotionally exhausted one can get, especially agonizing over things as much as Kaiden had. Sounded like a great party, as did the next day! 😉 I'm also glad that u decided to add to the story. Can't wait to see what happens next!

So very Happy to see another chapter! Hope u get it internet problems taken care of soon. What can I say about Anna that hasn't already been said? Baby aside, she isn't deserving of the oxygen she breathes! I still say unleash @Dahawk on her as soon as the baby is born! I can totally understand Ian's reaction and how he's handling the whole Adam situation. As I said in last chapter's comment, Ian laid everything out. He was an open book to Adam. Adam was the one who held important information from Ian, THEN accused him of knowing and colluding with Anna! I don't think it's unreasonable to still be angry six weeks later. I sure as hell would be. I don't think an intervention from his dad was necessary. I probably would have told dad to butt out, and any talk about Adam was off limits. Lol! I can understand them being worried, but I think Ian deserves to be angry. I kno for the sake of the story he needed to accept the meeting for a coffee, but I'm not so sure I would have. Also, I NEVER answer my phone without looking to see who it is first!

Great chapter! As much as I wanted to hate Brady and not forgive him for how he treated Nessay back in high school, I think he more than redeemed himself by pushing Nessay aside and putting himself in harm's way. Can't wait to find out who the homophobic assholes are.

So sad that we've reached the end of the story, but what a perfect ending it was! Sam and Brian are definitely perfect for each other. Great story!!

Have to say, I'm very surprised at Adam's reaction to Ian. I would think he'd at least know by now that Ian isn't an evil manipulator like his sister is. I wouldn't only be hurt, but I'd be mad as hell if I were Ian. Ian didn't know anything about Anna's situation. Adam, on the other hand, hid a wife AND unborn child from Ian. Adam better be crawling back on hands and knees begging for forgiveness! I seriously think you should let Dahawk deal with Anna! Lol!!

Great chapter!! If I didn't already think Nate was the best, I sure as hell would now! He gave Jesse exactly what he deserved. If Jesse was jealous and mean when Brad was single, what's he gonna do when he hears about Mitch? I see more bloody noses in his future! Lol! I really like Mitch. He seems like a very sweet, caring, well-mannered guy. Just what Brad needs. He doesn't need someone that turns mean and vindictive just because he's upset about something that has nothing to do with him.

I agree with tesao when it comes to Toby. He loved Josh, and now that he's gone his brother will do? Not liking Toby very much after his lame explanations. I also have a big issue on how Toby just kinda glossed over Mandy, like it wasn't a big deal. He also never mentioned putting a stop to their being friends with benefits. Just jumped right to a date. For me, I question how trustworthy Toby would be. I don't see him being very trustworthy at all. Also, judging Mandy's behavior at the bbq, she probably sees it as more than a fuck buddies scenario. I see poor Liam being hurt in the end if he starts anything with Toby.

Allen having AIDS breaks my heart. Just when I thought the story couldn't get any more sad. I think he and Joey really need each other for support. I'm happy Star is being the mother hen. The boys really need her to keep them in line. Lol! I'm happy she's making Joey go back to school. He's too smart to throw it all away.

And THAT is where the story went wrong.

Good chapter. I really enjoy the back and forth between Brad and Nate. Very entertaining. I can understand Brad's mom being overprotective. Glad that Brad understands that too. Unlike others, I took what Jesse did to Brad to be more mean than a joke. Seriously, what kind of person would think of setting up their "best friend" with an idiot mama's boy like Michael?? I would never do that to one of my friends, and I hope none of my friends would do that to me. Sorry, but I don't see the funny in that.

Very interesting read! I can identify with Jody as far as being that hurt and angry, but would have never considered killing my ex! Lol!! Jody definitely needs some counseling. I agree with CassieQ about Tommy being brave for wanting to date someone who had planned on killing his ex, but I think Jody is also brave for going out with a so-called straight friend that hooked up with his ex. I would never date someone that hooked up with my ex!

Good story, but still very disappointed on the direction you took it as far as Mitchell's sexuality. I think it would have been a much better story if you had left him gay and had him explore that and maybe find love with one of his fellow servicemen. It's really not even fair to call him bisexual considering he never even spoke of any attraction to or had any experiences with another man. If he was going to end up with a woman, there would be no reason for him to leave home or have "a talk" with anyone. Just didn't make sense.

A very good story, but unfortunate that you strayed from the original idea and made it a "straight guy" story.

Wow! Now that's some drama! Poor Ian. I hope his dad drowned at the bottom of that pool! What a nut job! I agree with Wesley, that at least Ian won't be going back to school for a while. Also hope that Ian didn't get hurt that bad. The fact he was airlifted has me concerned. On a much lighter note, I think Charlie is so cute with Eli! Had to laugh when he told Jacob he was going off the pill so they could have one of their own. Charlie and Jacob are gonna be wonderful uncles for Eli!

Great chapter! Happy that the training is going well, and SOOOO excited that Don is getting feeling back in his legs and feet! I absolutely hate Harry!! What a complete asshole to push himself on Louis like that. Louis doesn't have the backbone to tell him to "back the fuck off", in those exact words?? I think that's what Harry needs. He's obviously not getting the message. Harry deserved a bloody nose or a black eye at best for his actions. I think Don will have to shut Harry down himself, because obviously Louis either doesn't have the balls to forcefully do it himself or he likes the attention, which doesn't put him any higher than Harry on my list! I would have a big issue with Louis' behavior with Harry if I were Don. I don't kno that I believe Louis when he says it will never happen again.The reason that Don had originally suggested Harry isn't even an issue anymore, so I don't understand Louis continuing his little games with Harry.

Aww...glad their lesson/date went well. Wasn't sure about Jared at first, but he's ended up being a very good friend to Sam. Can't wait for their next "date". I think I'm just as excited as Sam is! Lol!!

Great chapter! So happy the date went well, considering his panic attack. His parents handled it great, and Josh made me laugh at his reaction and the "Gay Kay" comment. Happy that he told Sarah he didn't care about the other's drama. They sounded kind of annoying to me. Lol!

Absolutely loved the chapter! So happy that things are coming together and settling down....for now. Lol! Have to say I'm very surprised at Miriam's turn around, and Doug sounds like a good guy. Maybe, just maybe Rena will be getting some D from Robert too! Looking forward to reading more!

I agree that it would have been more heartbreaking at the party. In fact I think it would have gone horribly wrong. It's pretty clear that Jesse has feelings for Brad too. I'm really looking forward to see how this plays out!

Good chapter. I hope eventually u plan on getting to the premise of the story, or maybe consider changing the description and tags on the main page. Considering the direction of the story, it is kinda misleading.

Yay!!! I was getting kinda nervous there for a minute. It was Definitely worth the wait! So happy for Liam, and that Toby didn't break Liam's heart. He better not! Lol! There has to be a story about the brunette at the party and why Toby has been ignoring Liam, and I for one can't wait to find out what they are. Looking forward to the next chapter!