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  1. JeffreyL
    This was a fun story! I have no personal experience with geese, but their reputation does proceed them. And there is no sucker bigger than a favorite uncle! 😆 Thanks.
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    Hey Cole! Tate was very clever in the way he reminded Damien why he loved Tate! You were also very clever the way you put this story together! I was amused by the way Donovan's friends seemed to take Tate's side! I loved Donovan's "labors" and all the references to Hercules and his labors. I suspected a puzzle ring, but like Clancy59 I kept picturing a straight wire and not a circle. Extra points for a great ending! Thanks and Merry Christmas!
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    Table For Two

    JeffreyL commented on northie's story chapter in Table For Two

    For a first meeting, Eric did pretty well! I hope he and Rob can develope a friendship, and Rob becomes a gentle guide to the life of a gay man for Eric. Thanks.
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    Ah, my beloved curmudgeon, I am a little behind, but planning to be caught up by the end of today. Thank you for finally getting up the gumption to call Rob. I can't wait to read about the two of you meeting in person. And thanks to you Northie for sharing this wonderful story!
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    I see lots of possibilities for how this will move forward. Your characters are interesting. I look forward to finding out more about their pasts. Thanks.
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    CDMX • VI

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in CDMX • VI

    As I have said many times, it is great to spend some time with CJ, Owen, and their friend and family (and the occasional "bad guy"). I have never had much interest in visiting Mexico City. I may have to change my mind. It's that travel agent coming out in you that brings out the wanderlust in me. 😉 I am curious to read more about CJ's computers in schools project. Thanks.
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    Start with a divided family, add an inheritance, and watch the greed and insanity. I have seen the insanity over an inheritance before. This was well written and conveyed the hurt feelings and anger wonderfully! I really loved the ending, and the feeling of hope for some reconciliation between the sisters. I imagine Dahlia will get lots of chances to practice holding her tongue. Often the person can forgive and forget, but never their parents, siblings, and spouse!
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    This was a fun story to read! I liked the way the 911 team handled the call. I especially liked the promise of new friends for the boys and their caregivers! Thanks.
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    Chapter 69

    JeffreyL commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 69

    I binged about ten chapters and got caught up. Essel's story is as good as ever. In fact I think you've ramped up the drama! No wonder Garjah's people have been reluctant to make contact. Looking forward to more! Thanks.
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    CDMX • V

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in CDMX • V

    Hey Carlos! I missed the start of CJ's and Owen's latest story. Did a little bingeing today and am all caught up. It was nice to have a new story to read. Thanks. I hope you are staying healthy and safe. I am looking forward to another interaction between CJ and the Russian spy!
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    In Contact

    JeffreyL commented on northie's story chapter in In Contact

    This is too exciting! Reuniting with Rob has been a long time coming. I hope when they meet, they do reconnect. I don't expect a romance. Rob sound a bit younger than Eric, but they could become friends. Eric could use more people in his life. I think Rob's new client is the kid who trashed Eric's garden. It will be interesting to see what, if anything, comes of it. Thanks.
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    I haven't commented in some time, but I am still enjoying these characters and their story! This second installment is really living up to its potential! The doctor visit and conversations between doctor and patient were very convincing. There are always new things in medicine, and being younger, it makes sense that Dr. Jergens would have better tools and information to use. It was all very plausible, and I am delighted with Mitch's prognosis! Thanks.
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    Reactions

    JeffreyL commented on northie's story chapter in Reactions

    And in this chapter we get to touch base with Andy, Adam, Brian, and Sandra! It's like running into old friends you haven't seen in awhile. You just pick up right where you left off, like no time has passed. I love all these characters! Too bad about the hate mail, but unfortunately that is a part of life too. We can always hope the good far outweighs the bad. Thanks.
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    In Demand

    JeffreyL commented on northie's story chapter in In Demand

    After passing this by while reading the list of new stories, I suddenly realized I know these people! I am so excited to get to visit my favorite curmudgeon, Eric! I will read the next two chapters now and look forward to the rest. Thanks, Northie! This made my day.
  15. JeffreyL
    This was the perfect ending to a wonderful story! I love all the bears and wolves, and how they support each other! I really like the academy and its purpose. I look forward to more stories. Thanks.
  16. JeffreyL
    I, too, am tired of behavior I see and words I hear. Not just from leaders, but from many people. I am trying to live by the commandment "Do unto others." I want the world to be better for myself and my family, especially my grandchild. Thanks Tim, for your thought provoking words.😷🙊🙊❤
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    Sunday Poems

    JeffreyL commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Sunday Poems

    Can I just say ditto to what Reader 1810 wrote? You do have an amazing way with words, and your poetry is almost always thought provoking. 😷❤
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    I was getting further behind with this story, so I went back to chapter one and binged through this chapter in one sitting, except for a lunch break. I had forgotten how much I liked Dani and his story! Reading several chapters at once was exciting! Your writing just flowed, and I got drawn in more with each chapter! I have a bunch of questions, but I'll just say I am no longer certain who are the bad guys. I can't wait for the next chapter! Maybe Dani will totally lose his calm and flatten everyone... Thanks for sharing this wonderful story! (Think hypnotic whispers, "More. Quickly. More. Quickly.")
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    It's great to be catching up with Boone and Coy! I can't wait to hear what is new with Mitch. Thanks.
  20. JeffreyL
    Gender can be a sensitive topic for some people. Your characters were engaging, and you wrote their story with empathy and understanding. Nicely done, Wayne! I really think Brandon and Dane should plan to go camping next spring so we can all catch up on how they are doing. I expect things will be going mostly OK because they love each other so much! Thanks.
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    Chapter 7

    JeffreyL commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 7

    I just found this story today. It was nice to read several chapters back to back. I liked Roger and Jon right away. This story has a similar flavor to other stories you've written, and I can tell I will really enjoy it! Thanks.
  22. JeffreyL
    I started to read this because I am interested in reading Puppy 2. I quickly realized I had read this before. Somewhere past the middle this story no longer was familiar. I guess I got sidetracked and never finished. This has been a wonderful story! It is easy to read. The characters are engaging, and the dialog sounds realistic. It has made me more excited to read the next Puppy story! Thanks.
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    Chapter 164

    JeffreyL commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 164

    I haven't commented in some time, but I continue to read and enjoy this story! Adam's life is so full of wonderful people, fun adventures, some drama and sadness, and a big bunch of awesome students! I think his academies and college are the dream of many teachers. I don't know how long this story will continue, but you don't have to be in a rush to wrap it up! Thanks.
  24. JeffreyL
    This has been a wonderful adventure! Combined with the first story made it even more enjoyable! Your characters have all been first rate; even the bad guys! I don't think I can pick one favorite. Your writing is very smooth and readable. It made the story flow along effortlessly! I am looking forward to reading another story in this series! Thanks.
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    Epilogue

    JeffreyL commented on comicfan's story chapter in Epilogue

    I really enjoyed this story! I liked that it was lighter in nature and not heavy and dark as some fantasy can be. I am sorry it took me so long to find it. Thanks.
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