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tim's Bits and Pieces - 79. Sunday Poems

1.

and then it's done - the day

the tide's washed proof of us away

sand weed was witness to love

our secrets bound in its silence

 

2.

you there, why do you slump?

hands between your knees

when you raise your head, i see

your eyes filled with melancholy,

an eternity of pain

I don’t know you, but I know

the hurt and anguish you carry

I long to touch you

Pain shared makes us stronger

 

3.

I see myself hiking the dusty path

As the road rises away,

I stop and turn, to see you at the trailhead

Watching me — but not yet ready

to walk with me

And it breaks my heart to leave you

For I love you so, my dear friend

Nothing lasts; not friendship or love

and it’s time to say goodbye.

 

 

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Thanks for any comments or thoughts you choose to share.
Copyright © 2018 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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There is anguish, longing and love here. That I feel. What drove you to write these, I don't know, but that doesn't matter. You painted the picture, and now it's mine to see. 

Thank you for sharing them. xo

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22 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

I find myself with the need to read these again and again some more to really feel what they’re telling me. 

I will leave you with this:

How you manage to put thoughts into words like this is a marvel to me. I am in awe. 

As always, tim, nicely done.

Edit: Take care, tim. xoxo

Thank you, Reader. You take care too xoxo

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22 hours ago, JeffreyL said:

Can I just say ditto to what Reader 1810 wrote? You do have an amazing way with words, and your poetry is almost always thought provoking. 😷

Thank you, Jeffrey.  I appreciate you reading.

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22 hours ago, kbois said:

You know how to strike a chord with every poem. 

You write the truth as you see it and it is a beautiful expression of emotion. 

Thanks tim. 

Thanks very much for reading these.

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22 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

In number 1, I hear the sea, scent the tide and sense the passage of time. I liked how you appealed to my senses so easily. In number 2, I felt the touch of your hand; my heart eased. In number 3, I remain joined in spirit with you even across a wide distance. You write with such grace as I can only envy. 

Thank you, Parker. There's is no need to envy me, but thanks. xo

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22 hours ago, MacGreg said:

I come to read your poetry every time you post. That has never stopped, even though I am mostly absent here. your wordsmithing always pulls me in. This trio of poems is exceptionally radiant and rich with emotion, tim. Thanks for sharing it with us.

i appreciate You reading my work, Sir. i'm grateful. Thank You.

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18 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

There is anguish, longing and love here. That I feel. What drove you to write these, I don't know, but that doesn't matter. You painted the picture, and now it's mine to see. 

Thank you for sharing them. xo

Thank You for reading these. i'm glad You have claimed the picture You see. xo

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18 hours ago, chris191070 said:

What powerful words that convey a variety of emotions.

Thanks for reading and for your comments, chris. I appreciate it.

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I'm working backwards through your poetry, but I think I'll stop with these today and read them again several times.  Some poems I understand - some I don't - and some poets I don't understand at all.  But I understand more each time I read these three.  Thanks for sharing your thoughts this way. :) 

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5 hours ago, Backwoods Boy said:

I'm working backwards through your poetry, but I think I'll stop with these today and read them again several times.  Some poems I understand - some I don't - and some poets I don't understand at all.  But I understand more each time I read these three.  Thanks for sharing your thoughts this way. :) 

lots of poets i don't understand either ... i don't usually try to figure what they are meaning but more what i feel and understand for myself.  If that helps at all. Thanks for reading and your comments.

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