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It sounds really good Renee.

I need to remember to have a box of tissues nearby. You brought me to tears again tim. Loved the chapter hun, and can't wait for more.

Started the book this evening around 8:00 pm. Already a 1/4 done! It's good.

I like #596. I might take a break from writing my main story, to do a flash piece.

Elves, Dragons, Magic... what more can you ask for from a High Fantasy Love story? In my opinion, this story was very good. Well written, captivating, and painted a picture that was amazing. I saw a lot of elements that reminded me of my days playing Dungeons and Dragons, and the Pathfinder RPG, that it made me want to break out my dice and character sheets. Pros: Great visuals, Great Characters, and the love story was beautiful. Cons: Some formatting issues in Chapter 4, a few missing words in all four chapters. Still, five stars. Love it.

About to start "The Way of Shadows" by Brent Weeks.

I stand by what I've said in the past. I love seeing you two together, and the love you two have for each shows in what you guys post and share with us. Get back home, and be there for each other. If there wasn't a few ups and downs, then life would be boring.

From the beginning, this story took on a life of its own. Right from the start, I loved the interaction. One would think that the story was a dream like you said. Zero doubt that this has hooks that could make it more than a short. Enjoyed it a lot, especially the surprise ending. Needs more to this story, as it would make an interesting long novel with the siblings. "The cold never bothered me anyways."

This was one of the best SciFi love stories, I have ever read. Gaberial and Ryle are fantastic characters, and the story compelled me to finish it in one sitting. Fantastic all around.

Lovely poems tim. I feel inadequate at times in expressing myself, but you have a way with words that I envy good sir. There is a side to GA that I love, and it's the friendship I've found with you and the others in the DIC.

An old go to for the Family: http://allrecipes.com/recipe/7479/kentucky-butter-cake/

Remember people are here for you, tim.

This is very good, and insightful Mac. I'm loving this story. Very informative.

tim. This was a very powerful opening. I loved it. It's 8:00 am for me, and someone is cutting onions in the next room. *wipes tears* Looking forward to more hun. You've got a blessed talent.

Loved them tim. Thank you for posting them.

I've seen that one before. It's one of the exceptions of a Good American Made Gay Film.

A little late, but I voted for Book 3. Though the new Fantasy one is starting off great.

I forgot to tell Molly. We made this over the weekend. There were no leftovers.

Thanks! I left some of the more embarrassing parts out. Like I accidentally sat on a scrub cactus on day 4 and had to get First Aid done.

I was 15yo, and it was with the same guy that took my virginity. It was the third night of our five days of Wilderness Emergency Preparedness. We were paired by random happenstance, give our five days of MREs, and Water Purification tablets, and dropped off out in the woods on the Scout Reservation by ourselves. Spent the first day getting to know each other, as we built our Shelter out of downed limbs, palm fronds, and lashing twine. Made a firepit, gathered a ton of wood, and built our fire which we kept going once we got it lit. Even though it was Summer and 90+ degrees(F) out. We caught each other checking out the other, and by day two we came out to each other as being Gay. No one made a move towards the other until the next night. That's when one thing led to another, and the kiss happened. It was a First Timer's kiss for me, but he was more experienced. We were outside the shelter by the fire, talking, and it just happened. Then the thunder roared, rain started to fall, and we ended up drenched in the shelter we built, stripping down out of wet clothes, and I'll let you guess what happened next. We ended up in a Long Distance Relationship for 3+ years and broke up after that. (See my Blog for more on that.) That guy is now living in D.C. and is getting married soon.

I've read a few of these, and I love tim's poems. An excellent Author Review!

The story is on hold.

After some personal debate, I've decided that this story is at its end. Thank you all for reading it.

Have I mentioned how much I hate that guy? LOL. While this narration is not 100% what happened in our RPG game, I can say in the game where the character was influenced from, that version of Doctor Thomas ended up slowly being tortured, and eventually killed by an assassin. We stumbled upon the aftermath, of him being partially skinned alive. Not sure, if I'll put that in the story. I have another end for him in mind that's not so gruesome.

Thank you, tim for reading.