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Lovely fun chapter, great seeing the photo shoot from another perspective. Brian is very good with his relationship with Toby.
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Jack is a good friend. Great short story. Opens a whole world of possibilities.
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Part 12 ( Season 1 Finale)
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Part 12 ( Season 1 Finale)
Fantastic ending to this section. Looking forward to more with these guys. -
They are getting more comfortable being together. Interesting way to find out what your partner likes….
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Beautiful short story. Very erotic. Bob was very lucky.
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Thanks for fixing that, I went to start reading this great chapter, and was like did he just post the entire rest on the book in this one chapter? A little background for the detective to learn about the group who brought him the case. It will be good to have both brothers testimony to keep their uncle in custody.
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Chapter 24 - A Different Kind of Magic
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 24 - A Different Kind of Magic
So Dorjin’s idea was to send in attack team to Nextworld? They don’t have weapons like the humans have, so could be in a lot of danger. There does seem to be a connection between the two girls. -
Action packed chapter, loved all the tension building in Desmond. Ash did the right thing holding back, making Desmond come to him. The learned the secret and escaped. Now to use that against the enemy.
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Laura called the last person to be killed… but may or may not be the killer. So many different options there. The detective was right to tell him to stay out of it for now. The forgiveness with Will’s father on the hospital was good. Will Mom come to the wedding?
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Interesting that the magic book is in England. More adventures to come. Jinn are like Genies, I believe, they have much power. Hopefully the book will help them.
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Jonah needs to listen to Karen and tell Will he is in love with him… loved the scene in the grocery store, telling off Irene…
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Totally mesmerized by the biker, Bob is in awe of the very masculine biker. Like where this is headed.
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Great ending. Florian has to keep reminding Toby that he loves him.
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Great short story. Fortunately the guys were not jealous of their partners.
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The family is growing up. The plans for the corporation age going well. Marc finds two of the youngest in bed oh his shuttle. Maybe they are bonding? Or just having fun, either way, dinner should be interesting. They don’t have anything to be embarrassed about. They have excellent role models in their parents.
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They are growing closer. I loved the waking up scene. He was not ready for the straightforward Egaro willing to show him how to be a good lover…. Leo does not do spicy food well.
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Chapter 4: The Cage
VBlew commented on BrokenBoundariesGayErotica's story chapter in Chapter 4: The Cage
The domination, and the subordination in this, the anticipation are amazingly written. I do wonder if Blake is going to be able to still function at a high enough level to maintain his job, all of his attention seems focused on serving Sean. Seem almost debilitating. The cage restraint is very interesting, custom made. This is not Sean’s first foray into having a boy… -
This camouflage seems like a really goo idea. Will be interesting to see if the others can find the ship when they want to return…
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Act II - Empty Chairs At Empty Tables
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - Empty Chairs At Empty Tables
Ray waking up without his mat, goes looking for him… only to find out the witches have him. Renato steps in to save Ray from whatever Mother was planning on extracting from him. Very sad chapter. Ray is not a warrior at this point to go save Gabriel, so mother is sent with a warning… hopefully she succeeds. -
Zdain, is too stuck in his guilty feelings to consider that Josel would like more than friendship. Danae is going to stir things up. Wonder if she will tell Josel they are related?
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Fun start, quick paced. Looking forward to the rest.
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Glad for the update, seems like they will all be converging on the same place. Very good to follow the Fairy’s advice.
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That phone theft was a bad thing, but maybe there is something there that they can use as a defense? Victor is a bad guy, thinking he deserves to be seen by his only friend, that he bullied into being his friend.
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Nice background for the formation of the house. In the future it has magic wards. So something else seems to happen with this. The Aunt was a seer, but religious, and has lost that sight…
