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Wow what a chapter. The tension, the psychological thriller aspect. Looking forward to so much more. Kind of reminds me a bit of Sherlock and Moriarty.
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Delightful start, looking to this story. Hopefully he ends up with someone much better than Charles.
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Braden finally grew a pair and proposed.
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How does Rourke keep sending Telegrams about events that have just happened? Is he not far away?
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Beautiful chapter. Everything is coming together.
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Another amazing chapter. I hope Dennis is OK and can at least go with to the Wrestling on Sunday. That whole CPS situation was something. Monica needs to be fixed so she doesn’t have any more children, and really she deserves to have the 3 youngest taken away… Imani understands the situation from her own experience, hopefully they will survive, Shaun and the grandparents meeting CPS may actually be a good thing. Shaun was very clever with Bobby. Maybe they will never have to work together again. Hopefully the video gets to the boss, and Bobby is disciplined. On to the weekend.
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Len kissed Jody, for the first time, during their second time. They really connected over this…. Poppers would really relax that body for the reception of a large tool…
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Very interesting start, all of these related people. “Friends”
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Great story… bad communication. Trust but verify… they lost some good years, but we’re finally reconnected.
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Jake seems to have been very lucky. This could be the death around both Jake and Killian that Judy was feeling. Now to face the firing squad…. Lots of questions and anxiety…. Being at the scene of a triple murder is something new for Killian. The interaction with the young gay cop was interesting. Maybe Killian can introduce him to some others in the area…
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No hockey in Australia… these guys deserve a break. And for Alex and Brian, some alone time after healing up. Great plan to go to school together. Steve and Kenny with sights on MIT, where will Alex and Brian be going? I can’t see them far from each other.
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Dalian is better off being away from his toxic mother, but the hurt is there. He has a family with Creek and Forest. And at least Creeks parents are trying to be supportive.
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I agree with someone swapping out the pills on Andrew, and telling Will about them. Gagnon needs to go. All the traitors need to go. Fortunately the didn’t get to West. Will brave stance with this motion will have massive repercussions… I’m betting it passes, without external interference… then they can start making some real progress against the enemy.
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Excellent beginning. Loving the characters. Looking forward to where this relationship goes.
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Chapter 12 - All Hell Breaks Loose
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - All Hell Breaks Loose
Kris likes Dean, but what about Ethan? This could all come back on him if his work crush gets jealous and sabotages his possible new job. Hate to think like that, but it’s a possible outcome…. Leah’s doubts are not unfounded, unfortunately. Will she confront Dean when they meet again? To what end? Will Dean be able to stay true to who he is or hide back in the closet? -
Great chapter, the young lovers reunited. The bail hearing going as planned. A new witness, and further allegations to come for some crooked cops and a kinky commissioner… now to keep them all safe.
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Excellent chapter, minor scuffle on the dock. Kenny us save from killing. The boys have a quick reunion and are off on the plane…. Looking forward to the epilogue. And the next books.
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That comment about the time had me go back and look at the clock on the last few chapters. They are 98 days, and this one is 99 days… so either this happened before he was drugged, or the clock is off? Andrew needs to know he is loved by Will…. The fight with Jarod was just not himself… so it has to be the drugs. Will can’t quit now. There is too much at stake. I don’t think that action would relieve them of the Father’s actions wanting to destroy this family.
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Wow Steve was excellent at playing to the AI’s task… loved the Robin Hood action. 3 Trillion can do some good in the world. Wolf is stopped. What other good things can they use this very powerful AI for? Will Steve be able to retain access remotely? Looking forward to the reunion, Alex is going to need some recovery time.
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Damn, that drug is doing a job on Andrew, it’s not quite doing what the enemy expects, but how long lasting are the effects. What is it going to do to his marriage? Can Will compensate for it? Will is the king on the battlefield now, not the one living peacefully in the castle. Can he step up to that level of commitment? He has not backed down from fighting before, when necessary. Tommy pulls Jacob in so that they both are aware of their feelings, and have a first kiss.
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The end of the evening was amazing. Their growing connection. I do have a question about the dinner invitation, I thought that they all met at the art supply store that Kahiau works at? Maybe Eric thinks he doesn’t know about their background, but the store owner certainly did, so that’s why he explained his friends the way he did.
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Caleb asked for Carter, it didn’t specify which one…. Could be Andrew. I called it with the PlayStation… internet access was needed for those cameras, they’re just hopping on the backbone, hopefully they can describe where they are enough to get a rescue chopper there, and take some of that good food with them.
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Very glad Wishbone and Mason were reunited! Captain Williams needs some Orc attention…
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Good job Killian, tying the two cases together along with Micah’s article. Lots of corruption, hopefully no more ghosts involved, but knowing Killian’s past, there may be. He really needs to find someone to train him.
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The credit card tracing got them the help they needed. New equipment and good medical attention, albeit with a time limit on function… 12 hours… Kenny is now in charge of a “Technical” with a lot of firepower. They get cool toys. Steve needs to remove all of Wolf’s wealth with that AI. And see about wreaking some havoc on the backers.
