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Chapter Fifteen - Julian's POV
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Fifteen - Julian's POV
Julian could just keep sending data, if that is what the company is looking for. The privacy this is very important. Did Ben sign some disclosure about the company getting all of this data, for the entire 12 months? Call Tessa. Not sure why they haven’t yet with Diane’s anger at the dinner. -
Chapter 11The Island Giveth
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 11The Island Giveth
Dang, I hope Jamie is not hurt too bad. A rock to the side of a head could be really bad. -
The wreckage is much worse than when Levi left the car. Casey, burned it up and is saying to deny it all. Of course he would not text back. Leave no trail… Levi keeps lying to his friends.. and the rumors are spreading. The talk with Father Costas was a step in a positive direction.
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Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
VBlew commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
Seemed like Kellerman had this scene with Marcus a couple chapters ago?? Andrew is being the savior that Will doesn’t even know about, and the emotional distance is difficult for both of them. Did Dylan and Will really get intimate? Or were those fake photos? Seems like the one Tanaka caught today would have been incriminating. -
Seem like a round of bad news, it doesn’t seem like either parent heard him say he was gay at dinner last night, and today his best friend decided to go back int the closet hard… finding out his dad possibly has a pregnant girlfriend is another twist. Very interesting so far. Hopefully things start to turn around for him.
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Greg was quoting all of those “Christmas” movies, but apparently has not seen any of the movies his new friends are in. I’m very curious what their real names are. Sounds like we’re going to find out soon.
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Robert, still not letting Chad into his life as a partner. Making bad decisions even with good intentions. At least they are cohabiting.
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I love how the young scouts really have outlined the whole situation. They hilariously have Lucas’s character outlined really well.
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This group of guys just step up and help the people around them. It is so awesome.
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The surviving riding in the middle of the stampede and surviving was a near miss on the life or death scale, and after a great meal have to confront the reality of their relationship. And go for broke and lay out who he really is and what truly happened in his past. Hopefully some investigation into what happened to the uncle will be found. It really was accidental. But running away and assuming a new identity are a problem. Hopefully Eric will be helpful, also accessing his trust fund, which is hopefully still intact.
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So Marco seems to remember his past lives, and is being deliberately vague about it. Christopher is just getting vague glimpses in dreams and visions. They were lovers, so it seems Strange Marco is avoiding him. And Vale seems to know about it. This recurring extra low tide, on Christopher’s 28th birthday seems to have special significance.
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Nice day on patrol, although I kept waiting for something to interrupt it.
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How did this person find the play room to hurt Kidd? Glad he got burned starting the fire. Now that they have caught one of the perps, maybe they will find the others.
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It’s very interesting to watch Marcus’ development and the subtle changes happening to him and the awareness of the people around him. Seems like he has attracted another potential suitor. And is missing Ingomar. Hopefully they will be reunited soon.
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Sad, and touching.
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There are much worse places to be banished to, than Hawaii. It is far away, and as the plantation owner’s son, managing the place should prove interesting.
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I wondered if them driving to Audi with the broken window. And did they really have permission to drive it? Seems like they organized a little bit of who the potential suspects are but nothing still popping out.
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Typical romcom comedy of errors. Hopefully they’ll actually finally get to talk at some point, but everything seems to be conspiring against them.
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Wow, one remembers everything and the other remembers nothing. But they found their way back to each other.
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The meeting was simple. The conversation intentional, the offer to walk together was easy. There was no flirting. Just something in common from the walking. Yet, there was more. Looking forward to their journey together.
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Wow, Austin’s background is harsh, no wonder he went into the military. To get away from his father. All of this will play into him being a great Alpha. Xavier wants him to stay, and they finally had sex.
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Chapter 4- Sven's Decision
VBlew commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 4- Sven's Decision
Nos had an interesting day. Someone messing with his things. Reporting Orion to the Dean. Getting closer to his mate, who is starting to believe he hasn’t been with anyone else. The departure of one of his fathers with their new mate. Great writing. -
Beautiful imagery in this chapter. They are off on their first day of travel, and everything is going well. The horses are working well together. The discussion under the wagon was interesting. Not wanting to do penetration and dealing with a messy bottom, great ideas for a device to clean out with. Gords are useful for this too, but probably not readily available where they are. They are learning about frotting by experimenting. A rain shower naked will clean them up and be refreshing too.
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Safely arrived and headed off on a journey with their friends.
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Interesting twist to the story. Levi is lying to his friends first, then buying into peer pressure, getting the car, then being with Casey’s crowd of delinquents. Why did Casey stop him drinking a beer, then let him have the hard stuff? I surmise Casey got him home, but knowing where the keys belonged, is highly suspicious. Levi needs to go talk to the priest, for some good advice.
