Poems and Short Quips - 22. Variances of Light and Dark

You set up an lovely ethereal quality, entirely consonant with the mist and fog. ‘Brittle Feet’ is a lovely phrase. 

this is quite beautiful, ghostly and gossamer.. it's like the sea.. hope given yet it's taken from us by the tides. it's very good, Sir

Beautiful Sir. A piece that sees the big picture. Not always easy, or black or white. A very thoughtful piece Sir.

Fog, shrouds, ebb flow ...this speaks of dark places, gripping sadness and a kind of resignation, that this is how things are and will remain. Yet... There is more, moments of brilliant light and love, I think. A deep and thoughtful poem.

beautiful Sir... but even thru fog and sadness, there is hope andlove, you show me that.

This... I’m glad I read this, if only for the whisper of hope it promises.