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Poems and Short Quips - 19. Spinning Wheel

you...

 

In my mind like a spinning wheel

Weaving dreams of discontent and lust

 

I cannot stop the motion

Only spin with it...

Thank you for reading.

Copyright © 2017 MacGreg; All Rights Reserved.
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5 hours ago, Caz Pedroso said:

A complete picture in only a few words. Wonderfully done, Sir. 

Thank you, caz. Short but meaningful.

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4 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

lucky 'you'    great images, Sir

I hope the lucky one agrees. Thank you, tim.

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2 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

Sir, You show that so much thought and emotion can be captured in very few words.

Thank you, jp. Excessive words are never necessary to get a point across.

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1 hour ago, MichaelS36 said:

I share everyone's opinion ... quite wonderful, Mac!

Thank you, Mike.

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5 hours ago, Defiance19 said:

Very well said, Mac.  But then I don't expect different... 

Thank you, Def. You're very kind.

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Each time I read this, the incongruity of 'dreams' and 'discontent' makes me uneasy. Tonight my emotions fell more on the dream side. Why? Because that way I can relate very well. There are some people we get so excited in anticipation on seeing again (and reconnecting on a physical level) that it can cause repetitive thoughts and sleepless nights. You have said that so well here, and in so few words too. 

 

Well done :) 

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