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    Thorn Wilde
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Thorny Poetry - 7. Your Long Back

your long back

retreating

and your eyes, frozen silver storms

burning like blue flame

piercing me, they see right through me

 

dying and sleeping and laughing and weeping

doesn’t really matter if you sink or if you swim

ever do you see me

hot and cold and greedy

my heart calls out to yours but there is no reply

and you leave me

 

your long back

retreating

and your eyes, frozen silver storms

burning like blue flame

piercing me, they see right through me

I keep discovering things I wrote years ago. This one's nearly ten years old, and did turn into a song. I know I wrote another verse, but can't seem to find it anywhere . . . Maybe I'll do a 'part 2' one day. Anyway, that guy was a dick.
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