Thorny Poetry - 5. Boy

this is very touching and emotive ... i read it and then again and closed my eyes to really feel it. i came away with tears in my eyes and a wish to just walk through the park holding your hand.  a wonderful piece  xo

2 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

this is very touching and emotive ... i read it and then again and closed my eyes to really feel it. i came away with tears in my eyes and a wish to just walk through the park holding your hand.  a wonderful piece  xo

Thank you! Your opinion really means a lot to me, as you write such beautiful things yourself.

This is an expressive piece about an inner turmoil that shouldn't have to be. I hope you find the connection you seek.

3 hours ago, MacGreg said:

This is an expressive piece about an inner turmoil that shouldn't have to be. I hope you find the connection you seek.

Thank you. ❤️ 

I thought this was very powerful. I felt the waves of the storm you sailed through. 

35 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

I thought this was very powerful. I felt the waves of the storm you sailed through. 

Thank you so much!

Some deep stuff here. I wonder who is cutting onions in the kitchen? Anyway, the piece was warming, and packed with emotion. Be that as it may, if the poem is seeking validation from someone you wish you had, or if it’s personal struggles, I hope you are navigating at clear seas now.

10 hours ago, D.K. Daniels said:

Some deep stuff here. I wonder who is cutting onions in the kitchen? Anyway, the piece was warming, and packed with emotion. Be that as it may, if the poem is seeking validation from someone you wish you had, or if it’s personal struggles, I hope you are navigating at clear seas now.

Thank you. I'm finding my way, though land's still a ways away.