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    Thorn Wilde
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Thorny Poetry - 25. The Second Guess

i write the word and

scratch it out

hit backspace

start again

 

three times, four times

begin the message anew and then

scrap it

not worth it

 

go back and edit

doesn’t read right

that wasn’t what i meant

but it’s there, in black and white and

cannot truly be unsaid

 

did they read it yet?

 

so many words unspoken

so many messages unsent

worried i’ll say the wrong thing

be misunderstood

offend

 

i write the words

hit backspace again

what happens

if i press send?

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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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each word we write is a risk .. someone may love it, another misunderstand.  you can only hope if someone has a problem, they are adult enough to talk about it.

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3 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

each word we write is a risk .. someone may love it, another misunderstand.  you can only hope if someone has a problem, they are adult enough to talk about it.

Very true. Thank you, tim.

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Like tim said, each word we write is a risk. Miscommunication happens. Sometimes, you just have to take the chance.

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14 minutes ago, MacGreg said:

Like tim said, each word we write is a risk. Miscommunication happens. Sometimes, you just have to take the chance.

I know. Trying to get better at that... Thanks, Mac.

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9 hours ago, Thorn Wilde said:

I know. Trying to get better at that... Thanks, Mac.

well, you know a few adults around here...not me.. but there are some.. LOL  :)  :hug:

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4 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

well, you know a few adults around here...not me.. but there are some.. LOL  :)  :hug:

Love you, dude. :heart: :hug: 

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