Thorny Poetry - 13. To a Stranger

Wow. You make me feel the intensity of the stare that looks right through you, and the stirring of the interior self that causes. Terrific. 

3 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Wow. You make me feel the intensity of the stare that looks right through you, and the stirring of the interior self that causes. Terrific. 

Thank you. ❤️ 

Nice poem.

I particularly like the lines:

i don’t know you

but you know me

I know it's probably unintentional (just a byproduct of the way you wrote the entire piece), but the way you leave the "i" lower case makes me read it a certain way.

5 minutes ago, Wayne Gray said:

Nice poem.

 

I particularly like the lines:

 

i don’t know you

but you know me

 

I know it's probably unintentional (just a byproduct of the way you wrote the entire piece), but the way you leave the "i" lower case makes me read it a certain way.

I've bee writing my poems like that for a while, all lower case. I think it looks nice, more than anything. That said, I get what you mean. Thanks for commenting!