Timmy's Terrible Prompt Stories by TimothyM

[Timothy M.]

Not sure why y'all fear the GA overlords so much. Incest is fine as long as it doesn't involve children. And almost anything else goes unless it involves animals or dead people!

 

Well, define children: In Denmark the age of consent is 15, so per definition sex is OK if they are older than that, except if the under-18 is in some sort of unequal relationship (eg teacher-pupil) with the adult. Oh and parent/children stuff is no, no, of course, (I think it may be illegal even for adults).

 

However, my stories mainly fall on the fact that they are obviously porn, since the whole story line is meant to lead to sex. In order to make them palatable for GA, I would have to expand the non-sexual part considerable, and to be honest, they aren't worth it. I've only got one story originally written in Danish, which I'm considering expanding for GA, but that's a long way off in the future.

 

Anyway, I just got the next prompt chapter back with two suggestions for expansion that hit right on those two ideas I had decided to forego, so now I need to get back to Nelson and Eric.

[Carlos Hazday]

You done yet? you done yet?

I need my teenager fix! (And then I want some more Hunky Dane!)

[Timothy M.]

You done yet? you done yet?

I need my teenager fix! (And then I want some more Hunky Dane!)

 

Nope, sorry, not time to look at it. The past two days I've been working 12-14 hours per day, same tomorrow. But I'm hopng for the weekend...

And you've gotten all the hunky Dane I have !

[Carlos Hazday]

Nope, sorry, not time to look at it. The past two days I've been working 12-14 hours per day, same tomorrow. But I'm hopng for the weekend...

And you've gotten all the hunky Dane I have !

 

 

I was wondering where you were. Carlsbergs are on me tonight!

[Timothy M.]

You done yet? you done yet?

 

Yes, finally: Prompt 278 “Please, I can explain.”

 

and two Rob chapters coming up soon.

[Headstall]

Another great chapter as Eric and Nelson move their relationship along. I love the curve balls you keep throwing in. Rob wasn't in this one but his presence was felt as his advice to Nelson got the ball rolling...and Eric got some action because of it. Gotta love the big guy..cheers...G

[Timothy M.]

As promised another Rob chapter

 

Prompt 336 “Oh God. This isn’t what it looks like!”

[Irritable1]

I think I'm outing myself as a bad parent here: I don't know if I'd ground him for as long, and if the other parents gave me crap about it, I'd go off on them about allowing alcohol to be served to a minor in their home!  MAJOR OFFENSE. But then I suppose Rob must learn not to commit battery---it's just that no one seems to be taking it very seriously...

[Timothy M.]

LOL Irri - if only you knew how difficult it is for me to remember that the drinking age in US is 21. In Denmark we think nothing of sixteen-year-olds having a beer or two, IF it happens at private parties with parental supervision. By 18 everyone can drink in public.
This was the compromise: they went to Chris' home (and no parents were there) to have a couple of beers each before either going out (or ordering pizza). Rob was a designated driver, so he couldn't have any beers. No drunken brawling here, but a genuine anger at the stupid bigots.

And the whole grounding part is foreign to me too, but it's used so often in US stories, I thought I'd better include it.

I did think about grounding him for just a week, but that felt silly too. However, I wouldn't be surprised if Rob was let off very quickly, once the matter was forgotten.

[Irritable1]

Well, see, fighting is a suspension offense. Which usually means you're off the team. But this happened off campus and I take it no cops were called. Which means I think no official notice unless a parent gets involved in which case the alcohol would come into play. Parental scandal and blackmail all round! Edit: You know what, thinking it over, yeah, his parents are taking the right approach by cracking down. The consequences of fighting at Rob's age are just too severe. It's not as though he was actually defending Eric from a physical attack. 

Edited December 11, 2014 by Irritable1

[Timothy M.]

Good point Irri. I can use that if necessary, since they were at Chris' house AND Ryan had obviously guzzled more than two beers.

[Carlos Hazday]

Just want to pop in for a minute and apologize for not pestering the crowd recently. Been reading the Anthology entries the past few days so I'm behind in other stuff. I'll catch up with Rob's story this weekend and then will come argue with Irri once again, I miss it!

[Timothy M.]

Been reading the Anthology entries the past few days so I'm behind in other stuff.

 

Not to worry, Carlos, I knew my timing was bad with all the Anthology stories coming out. But I'd promised to post soon, so...

 

Anyway, I've managed to read several Anthology stories, including yours, but I have to go back and review. I enjoyed it, so I have to think about what to say.

[Timothy M.]

And the second Rob chapter as promised.

 

Prompt 364 “That is the last time I am telling you anything!”

 

I wonder if you can guess what the reply will be to the last sentence (First line of next prompt) ?

I'm almost done with it, so should go off for beta reading soon. But I'll wait and see what Team Rob thinks of this one.

[Carlos Hazday]

I think I'm outing myself as a bad parent here: I don't know if I'd ground him for as long, and if the other parents gave me crap about it, I'd go off on them about allowing alcohol to be served to a minor in their home!  MAJOR OFFENSE. But then I suppose Rob must learn not to commit battery---it's just that no one seems to be taking it very seriously...

 

You have to be shitting me? Seriously Irri? Not sure what world you think we're living in but teenagers drinking is going to happen no matter what parents want. Just say no is idiotic when it comes to booze or sex. Kids would be better served if their parents spoke honestly and openly about both subjects and taught them responsibility. I'd rather they know when to say when than expect them to just say no. (Personal experience-I sort of fell into the role of confidant for my nieces after my brother and his wife had done the initial conversations. They knew they couldn't be hypocrites and ask the girls not to do stuff they had done themselves. I never got details about sex but I did about drugs and alcohol. Never preached in return, just described potential bad outcomes with examples from friend of mine or their father. One bad drunken incident over three years and the oldest one is now a freshman in college after graduating with a 4.0)

 

And battery? Hell one punch was not enough, I hope he left Chris all bloody. Turning the other cheek and talking things out is all bullshit fairy tale crap when it comes to bullies and homophobes. Why hasn't Nelson been picked on? Because he beat the crap out of a bully. You want to be a homophobic, hateful prick, fine with me. Just keep it to yourself. The month is definitely too long and Dad better diminish it. Hell he should be giving Rob an increase in his allowance for coming to the defense of his brother. Violence doesn't solve everything but it sure as fuck comes in handy now and then

[Kitt]

When Wings was in 5th grade ( eldest of the grammar school set around here) a bully was picking on one of the special needs students. Wings told him to bugger off and when he shoved her she lost it and decked him. While I did the "Yes sir it will not happen again" routine while handling the suspension paperwork, I also took my daughter out for lunch and a mother/daughter fun day on the day she was suspended. I was proud of the way she handled the bully, and while I understand that the school had to suspend her for a day for a first offense fighting,( the bully got a week for the combined offenses of putting his hands on my girl and bullying the SN student) I was NOT going to add to the punishment!

 

And Carlos is right - "Just say NO" is a great slogan, but seldom works in the teen world. My brother and sister-in-law was trying that route when her son was 15. I caught holy hell when I found out the kids were, shall I say...enjoying private company...and took him out to buy his first box of condoms. I talked to him frankly about how condoms were even more important to prevent STD's than to prevent pregnancy, and said while waiting till you were sure someone really cares was best, I was not naive enough to think that the boy would think with the head on his shoulders when the time came! I handled things the same way with my own daughter. LOL you should have seen the look on her daddy's face when I put condoms in her purse on Prom Night!

[Aditus]

I have to admit I don't get the concept. If Rob's father thinks ' the punch was justified, he wants to be able to say I've been dealt with if anyone calls to complains' then he grounded him for the neighbors? And a month???

[Carlos Hazday]

When Wings was in 5th grade ( eldest of the grammar school set around here) a bully was picking on one of the special needs students. Wings told him to bugger off and when he shoved her she lost it and decked him. While I did the "Yes sir it will not happen again" routine while handling the suspension paperwork, I also took my daughter out for lunch and a mother/daughter fun day on the day she was suspended. I was proud of the way she handled the bully, and while I understand that the school had to suspend her for a day for a first offense fighting,( the bully got a week for the combined offenses of putting his hands on my girl and bullying the SN student) I was NOT going to add to the punishment!

 

And Carlos is right - "Just say NO" is a great slogan, but seldom works in the teen world. My brother and sister-in-law was trying that route when her son was 15. I caught holy hell when I found out the kids were, shall I say...enjoying private company...and took him out to buy his first box of condoms. I talked to him frankly about how condoms were even more important to prevent STD's than to prevent pregnancy, and said while waiting till you were sure someone really cares was best, I was not naive enough to think that the boy would think with the head on his shoulders when the time came! I handled things the same way with my own daughter. LOL you should have seen the look on her daddy's face when I put condoms in her purse on Prom Night!

 

 

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I have to admit I don't get the concept. If Rob's father thinks ' the punch was justified, he wants to be able to say I've been dealt with if anyone calls to complains' then he grounded him for the neighbors? And a month???

 

 

Adi, I have a feeling Dad will backtrack in the next chapter... RIGHT TIMMY?

[Irritable1]

I think you've missed my point, Carlos. What I was thinking originally was that if Rob and Eric's parents got flack about being lenient with Rob for hitting, then they could turn that on the other parents for allowing alcohol to be served. Depending on where you are in the States, that can be brought home to the parents too. 

 

I'm not getting into a thing about whether it's ok to hit people ONLY for the way they talk. It's too dangerous, and there are too many other options, for me to recommend that to my own kids. When we read a fictional narrative, obviously we know Rob was telling the truth, or you can stack the deck by having a teacher overhear and reprimand kids for a separate conversation earlier in the day or something. In real life, with four angry teens, two of them bleeding, three of them drunk, US laws what they are (alcohol, zero tolerance in schools, and regional variation on guns), it's anyone's guess how the police reports could turn out.

 

Edit: Obviously, if someone is being physically harassed then you get in there and intervene and let the chips fall where they may... But this scene wasn't set up like that, although we don't know what was said. Maybe a threat was made?

Edited December 13, 2014 by Irritable1

[Timothy M.]

Now I know how Adi feels when we argue in the RRS forum.

What fun it is to have readers get all exited about my story.

 

Adi, I have a feeling Dad will backtrack in the next chapter... RIGHT TIMMY?

 

Carlos, did you read post 134 ? I'll quote myself just in case:

 

However, I wouldn't be surprised if Rob was let off very quickly, once the matter was forgotten.

 

[Aditus]

Now I know how Adi feels when we argue in the RRS forum.

What fun it is to have readers get all exited about my story.

 

Totally cool, right?

[Carlos Hazday]

So Irri, are you saying that words don't hurt so they do not deserve a physical response?

 

I respectfully say STEERPOO! I realize it's not realistic or in most instances possible but, if the first time a kid was called a fag, a fudgepacker or any other such name they were able to turn around and throw a punch that breaks the nose of the offending asshole, that kid would probably not be bothered again. If he did it twice they would definitely not be bothered again. I had one fight in fifth grade because someone called me names. It was after school in te parking lot. It ended when I had the kid and his older brother who came to his defense each under one arm and kept banging their heads until one of the priests ordered me to stop. Guess what, I NEVER had another fight and I was NEVER called names again, even though I still was a fat, four-eyed, bookworm.

 

What's the big deal with getting suspended? Screw the suspension, I'm with Kitt, take the kid out for a nice lunch and take him to the beach the days he's suspended.

 

And as for alcohol I'll bow to your request and not get into it but just a reminder that laws are not always right. And just because the majority supports them it still does not make them proper.

We have some of the most backward substance rules in the world and we have some of the highest abuse rates of those substances. Coincidence? I think not!

[Carlos Hazday]

By the way, I'm sitting here laughing because I just sent a chapter to Mann in which there's a somewhat similar scene taking place between my boy, CJ and a homophobic biker. It's chapter 10 in the story so it won't post until the end of February but keep this discussion in mind.

 

C

[Timothy M.]

And as for alcohol I'll bow to your request and not get into it but just a reminder that laws are not always right. And just because the majority supports them it still does not make them proper.

We have some of the most backward substance rules in the world and we have some of the highest abuse rates of those substances. Coincidence? I think not!

 

The thing is we have had some of the most lax substance (alcohol) rules in the world and even worse a lot of peer pressure for teens and young people to drink at parties. So we have seen some pretty bad examples of drunken behavior - and worse: being drunk leads to doing things you regret, mainly having sex and getting in a fight.

 

But I still think it's better to introduce your kids to beer and wine at home and under controlled circumstances (like parental supervised parties) when they are teens (eg 15-18), and to talk to them about how to judge when they've had enough, and that if you only weigh 115 pounds then don't try to outdrink a guy who weighs 145 pounds.

 

Edit: but I did like Irri's suggestion that if Chris' parents tried to make trouble about Rob punching their son, Rob's parents could play the alcohol card: "Your son invited people home to drink and you weren't there to keep an eye on things." That should shut them up pretty quick.

Edited December 13, 2014 by Timothy M.

[Carlos Hazday]

My dad gave me my first drink of scotch when I was 12, enough to wet my lips. I've never had a drinking problem and I never raided my parents liquor cabinet. They just didn't make an issue about it. I started getting into bars and buying drinks when I was 16--I looked older and drinking age was 18. All my parents said was that if I had the sluighest doubt to call them, don't drive. We would go get my car back the next morning. No questions asked.