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    Reunion

    Poor Jessica, Sakis as a sex education teacher…
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    Trepassing

    I think Richard will find his inner rebel and Mr Jane hasn’t a clue as to what’s coming…
  3. Just another lovely chapter, loving the pace and developments
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    Chapter 30

    Thank you for this….loved it! Simply classic!! Beside him, Lucas stepped into the light, wearing the stolen, oversized white lab coat, his hair a disaster of dirt, leaves, and static electricity, offering his mother a weak, highly apologetic grin. "Hey, Mom," Lucas chirped nervously. "So, funny story about the Jamboree. With troop 442 returning hopefully somewhere in all the madness, Declan gets laid….
  5. My story has words with more than three syllables…..
  6. Kinda like what’s his name that gave Hugo the watch….
  7. There are many threads for an author to persue here, hint...hint...hint...and possibly more chapters with Thokk and Henry...just sayin..
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    Fast Cars

    And we all know that not every spoiled little rich boy has extreme lengths, more often than not, they are belonging to the un-endowed club... As to the fast cars belonging to Bastien's circle, every prince and king had a retinue of Knights and their gallant steeds...
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    Chapter 25

    Renn engenders no sympathy from me; he made his bed...
  10. You say that now......
  11. Coming back to this a bit late, chores are taking some time; they are growing exponentially., and just for you @Summerabbacat, signs of an early fall are everywhere.... Common sense isn't a lost art here in the States, it is simply drowned out by the salacious, the insane, and the loud, strident voices of victimhood...as an example, our sleepy little town as a tiny Dunkin' Donuts drive-through that became the center of attention as a result of a posting on, Myface, Spacefave, or Yourassbook....what ever it is called these days. A person of indeterminate age was the only car in line at the window waiting for her order when management asked her to move her car up; something about her radio program/music was upsetting the customers inside. Well, she proved her lineage and direct connection to the tribe of stupids, you know the ones who wear those bright red baseball hats that proudly confirm tribal membership with the Morons Are Goberning America. The misspelling is deliberate...don't want to get in trouble, ya know!. An entire afternoon was devoted to asking the person of indeterminate age how that particular offence compared to high gas prices or the cost of groceries, to name a few. We haven't heard back from her since.... Football season is nearly upon us, there will be other things to be ticked off about shortly....just sayin....
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    Chapter 18

    Interesting thought, much to think about with this, the possibilities are endless....
  13. Very enjoyable, and now someone should turn the tables on Smith....
  14. I am surprised Felix didn't suffer from Spontaneous Combustion.... Although the scientific support for spontaneous human combustion was weaker than Dickens stated, it was a widely discussed phenomenon in his time.
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    Chapter 11

    Not so much a cliffhanger, but a wait-and-see hanger....
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    Chapter 29

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    Chapter 28

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    Chapter 25

    Renn is suffering his just deserts, sadly only to come to the realization that he was used, that the god he thought would protect him isn't answering his prayers as of yet. I can't remember in what chapter did the knife do its work. How Zal nd Ragart escape after killing, I hope, the faceless should be interesting, and Renn bleeds out on the dyeworks floor... So fitting... How would it happen? What kind of magic would it require? And nothing to guarantee it except trust in Wryyt's treacherous promises. Thinking about it tore at his heart. Mutilated... only half a man. Not a man at all. With a single slash of a knife, his entire identity had been taken from him.
  19. The Ledger of the Howling Void...Myr The Ledger...astone2292 Wrong Window...drsawzall Subtle Signs...Kileoli Coffee with Supervision...Topher Lyndon Sweet Sour Paradox Logic...GaryL Just the Facts, Man...Lee Wilson Murder At 9th and Tom...Chris191070 No Official Reason...leshwar Undeliverable...Kbois Gemma...Cassie Peeping Tom...Thirdly The Ivory Fig Ceremony...mikiesboy Emptying the Library...BentedWreath Unexpected Discovery...Bill W And...I am very proud to say I hadn't a frigging clue and don't expect to have one right...
  20. Thank you for this
  21. @Topher Lydon, what is it they say about Jeeps....just empty every pocket...
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    Veridien Boys

    @LeeSA Herr Becker may have "other' shortcomings as well.... Ha-ha, I just love this...
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    Chapter 7

    And I have to remember the moments, infrequent as they were, that brought a smile and joy to my life. Caring for them made me a better person in the long run. I joke that I got my children while they were in their 60s. What the heck, I had a station wagon, two dogs, and a cat that thought he was a lion, but that's a story for another day. A group of friends and I will travel yearly to see our football team play a game in a different city. One year, my sister offered to watch Mom while I went. The morning of the game, I got a call from her, telling me Mom had fallen down her cellar stairs, and the hospital would be calling me for permission to treat her. Long story short, she had broken her shoulder, and after surgery to repair it, she would need a month or so in rehab. Before coming home, I had arranged for adult day care, and my job could exist around her schedule. I would bring her in and bring her home. One morning she was a bit late dressing herself and coming out for breakfast. I walked into her bedroom to check on her. Her back was towards me, and it looked like she was struggling with her blouse. Asking if everything was ok, she turned to me, and her bra was half on/off, as was her blouse. That morning, after getting an eyeful, I discovered that I could help Mom get dressed while standing behind her...
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    Chapter 18

    If it has to happen, pray it ends as this one did... "What happened?" "We grew old." Christopher's smile faded. "Both of us?" "Yes." "Together?" "Yes." Christopher looked back towards the sky. "That sounds nice." "It was." "How did it end?" Marco was quiet for a moment. "Peacefully.
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    Chapter 7

    Huh...first on Pg 5!!!!
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