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Love the interaction between the guys and Sky’s suggestion that they go from a bottom relationship to a more balanced vers relationship. Brant joked about it, but did not really say how he personally felt about that. They quickly got rid of the woman intimacy coordinator. They want it to be more natural feeling. Seems like they’re filming porn, but with the most intimate aspects ceding cut out… or they could do an R rated version and an XXX version.
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Sev is still warring with himself about his orders to kill anyone who got in the way of his mission, his own bond with Caelo will make that impossible to do that to Caelo, but he’s still considering Ember…. And Emberknows something is wrong with him.
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Fenn has suffered so much his whole life, from the beginning being treated like a slave, until Zain found him, even then he didn’t have much belief in himself, which is how he was so easily manipulated by Daryan. I’m glad they finally stopped lying and told him Ain was alive and they were going to rescue him. He will likely be very important in the dark tunnel to get them to the other end.
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Ben is slowly learning that he likes intimacy, with Riley leading the way. Riley was awesome detecting the threat at the Gala, and averting them from possibly hurting Ben.
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This is interesting just happened to run into each other. Could Xavier be a shifter and not know it?
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Locked Desires and Sweet Revenge
VBlew commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Locked Desires and Sweet Revenge
Turnabout is fair play, Anna got a taste of her own hateful behavior. Fernando did good. -
Ember was very useful in the fight, like he always is, people tend to underestimate him. His identifying the controller elk saved them all. We knew something was going to happen with Sev and Caelo, did not expect the bond though. Now they need that third party frequency changer more than ever.
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Hopefully he tells Graeme about taking the drug and how it made him feel. They don’t need that kind of secrecy tearing their friendship apart.
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This is a very sad chapter, that must have been a huge kind of prey bird to attack a large child like that. Very sad for everyone. Then the memories of death that Malik experienced in his past were pretty horrible. At least he is helping by preparing food. Seems like they are building a pyre outside.
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I loved how Lenix jumped bodies into Simon thinking that would get him out of the Marriage… really seems like Ricardo has not thought through what he needs in a marriage…. What happened to Charlie. I though he was going to sneak in and get them out?
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Thokk is really attracted to the younger blacksmith. And that bothers him. It’s not unusual in their culture apparently, but he just doesn’t find any of these women good enough.
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The zip lines sound like a lot of fun.
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Brant still trying to be cautious, even after getting hard kissing Sky. They need that testing to be completed soon…
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The bond is getting stronger. Sev is outed to Trillion. Still the denial that Zareth is his father. Ember and Trillion need to discuss the frequency modulation of their bond to throw off the effect of the bond breakers. Hopefully that person shows up soon.
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Petre is very angry with Fenn for hurting his friend Ain. If the punch earlier was not enough, he is going to torment him now with the idea Ain is dead… just to test his truthfulness. Hopefully they don’t make it too long. A depressed Fenn will not be able to help them very much.
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The place could be like Lourdes, without the Virgin Mary. But would it heal without someone like Cianán to activate the water? What was in the vial did heal Aiden. Wonder what the analysis is going to reveal. And then there is the existing mythology around the place already.
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Prince Trillion acting like the prince he wants Ember to admire.
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Chapter 27: After All These Years
VBlew commented on RichardWrites's story chapter in Chapter 27: After All These Years
Great ending to this story. Seems Alex got what he deserved for being a c—-. Love that Oliver bumped into Cody on the day of his job interview. -
A Two Man Job, Part Three of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in A Two Man Job, Part Three of Three
Amazing story, an part three really capped it off. The coming out was a non-event. The parents were amazing. The rift about the apartment was resolved when Rami finally thought through, Dan was disappointed, but did not force the issue, seems like talking about it more before signing the lease would have been less costly, but sometimes you need expensive lessons. They are in it for the long haul now. Possibly gentrifying their neighborhood… -
This is sounding a lot like Trillion’s parents trials, lost their supplies, but kept going. So they will catch up to Trillion and Sev and have some very strong conversations…. They are still missing the 5th person in the song, who will be the bond disrupting force.
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I’m with @drpaladin I think they left by another door. Typical drug dealer, free sample then the victim is hooked and will do anything for a fix…
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Chapter 5 - Challenges
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Challenges
That was a big surprise, boom you’re taking over the project…. And staying until it’s done. That may be good for their relationship for now. More communication. Occasional visits, and Evan is still in school, so he needs to focus on that too. -
So, Ricky was the person behind the door at Joyner’s store. And he had convinced Alexander to be the one to come back to the site after hours to get the artifacts to sell. Bridget was an accidental shooting. Still did Ricky have others involved who would have killed the professor. We do now know it was two different killers.
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Success, failure & a challenge
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Success, failure & a challenge
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So glad Petre changed their mind. Also maybe they can make an antidote for the green potion. And once he’s off the influence, remove his control collar and bracelet. Maybe they could get that green potion to the queen and control her?
