LitLover Posted November 9, 2016 Posted November 9, 2016 The final regular chapter of Unforgivable has now been posted. I wanted to thank everyone for their support and encouragement, and I hope you enjoy the epilogue 1
Drew Espinosa Posted November 9, 2016 Author Posted November 9, 2016 Hey Lit, I'll be getting back to reviews soon, though it wont be all today, I don't want you to have to respond to some 20 reviews on top of all the reviews for the latest chapter. 1
Lux Apollo Posted November 10, 2016 Posted November 10, 2016 (edited) I said kind of jokingly in the review that Jason should litigate Luc... but then again, it was also sexual assault! A crime! Yeah, anyway, it's not really in the character of Jason and Corey to do something like litigation, it seems, but who knows how they will feel about Luc the morning after once their desperate emotions calm... Edited November 10, 2016 by Lux Apollo 4
LitLover Posted November 10, 2016 Posted November 10, 2016 I said kind of jokingly in the review that Jason should litigate Luc... but then again, it was also sexual assault! A crime! Yeah, anyway, it's not really in the character of Jason and Corey to do something like litigation, it seems, but who knows how they will feel about Luc the morning after once their desperate emotions calm... He could go after Luc for sexual assault, but at this point I think Jason just wants to relegate the man to his past and not think of him again. 5
Site Moderator Popular Post Reader1810 Posted November 10, 2016 Site Moderator Popular Post Posted November 10, 2016 (edited) He could go after Luc for sexual assault, but at this point I think Jason just wants to relegate the man to his past and not think of him again. Quite right, litigation would take too much of his precious free time. Time better spent with Corey. Dang, I almost missed this! Post #5000 and I spend it talking about two lovely young men. Perfect. Edited November 10, 2016 by Reader1810 7
Timothy M. Posted November 10, 2016 Posted November 10, 2016 Quite right, litigation would take too much of his precious free time. Time better spent with Corey. Dang, I almost missed this! Post #5000 and I spend it talking about two lovely young men. Perfect. Congrats on 5000 posts - next goal: 5555 And I agree about Jason and Corey. 2
Headstall Posted November 10, 2016 Posted November 10, 2016 He could go after Luc for sexual assault, but at this point I think Jason just wants to relegate the man to his past and not think of him again. I think it would likely be considered a frivolous suit in the courts... now if he'd left bruises... maybe... 1
LitLover Posted November 10, 2016 Posted November 10, 2016 I think it would likely be considered a frivolous suit in the courts... now if he'd left bruises... maybe... It would be... and calling the cops would probably only get an eye roll and sarcasm 1
Lux Apollo Posted November 11, 2016 Posted November 11, 2016 I think it would likely be considered a frivolous suit in the courts... now if he'd left bruises... maybe... It would be... and calling the cops would probably only get an eye roll and sarcasm Uh... I was just kidding around, guys. 3
spike382 Posted November 11, 2016 Posted November 11, 2016 So I'm pretty sad this story is ending. I've been following this one religiously since the beginning. 4
Headstall Posted November 11, 2016 Posted November 11, 2016 So I'm pretty sad this story is ending. I've been following this one religiously since the beginning. Me too, but it was a very satisfying read, and I feel so proud of my talented friend. She now has two terrific, well-presented novels under her belt, and we can't forget the great Christmas story The Baker's Helper . 4
LitLover Posted November 13, 2016 Posted November 13, 2016 Aww thanks, guys I'm just trying to decide when to post the epilogue, With the anthology stories posted there is a lot for people to read now, but I'm going out of town Wednesday evening and to Cuba on Thursday, so I'm not sure if I should post early, or not.
Bucket1 Posted November 13, 2016 Posted November 13, 2016 Early, definitely early Feed the hungry birds 3
Headstall Posted November 13, 2016 Posted November 13, 2016 Aww thanks, guys I'm just trying to decide when to post the epilogue, With the anthology stories posted there is a lot for people to read now, but I'm going out of town Wednesday evening and to Cuba on Thursday, so I'm not sure if I should post early, or not. Ahem... I got it ready so you could post early......................... just kidding... post it whenever you want... you make a good point about all there is to read... 3
LitLover Posted November 13, 2016 Posted November 13, 2016 Early, definitely early Feed the hungry birds lol thank you for the vote, B. Ahem... I got it ready so you could post early......................... just kidding... post it whenever you want... you make a good point about all there is to read... i do worry about it getting "lost" in all of the wonderful stories that were posted for the anthology. On the other hand... I'm impatient. haha 4
Headstall Posted November 13, 2016 Posted November 13, 2016 lol thank you for the vote, B. i do worry about it getting "lost" in all of the wonderful stories that were posted for the anthology. On the other hand... I'm impatient. haha Go for it, then! Readers will love it... and B needs to get his mind off revisions and such.... 2
LitLover Posted November 13, 2016 Posted November 13, 2016 Go for it, then! Readers will love it... and B needs to get his mind off revisions and such.... Okay, I caved. The epilogue has now been posted. Enjoy! 3
Site Moderator Reader1810 Posted November 13, 2016 Site Moderator Posted November 13, 2016 (edited) Okay, I caved. The epilogue has now been posted. Enjoy! Just finished reading the epilogue. I won't say much so I don't let loose any spoilers, but it was really really good Lit. That's two major stories that have scored a home run. I hope you're going to try for a hat trick.... Edited November 13, 2016 by Reader1810 4
Drew Espinosa Posted November 13, 2016 Author Posted November 13, 2016 (edited) Loved it! Oh and Lit: About Jason's thoughts on Drew and his daughter Izzy; I can totally see why he'd think Drew would be overprotective. As a young man, Drew was quite the ladies man, so he'll see himself in the boys that dare show interest in his daughter. Edited November 13, 2016 by Drew Espinosa 3
Defiance19 Posted November 13, 2016 Posted November 13, 2016 Okay, I caved. The epilogue has now been posted. Enjoy! LOVED IT!!!! 1
Bucket1 Posted November 13, 2016 Posted November 13, 2016 Nicely done. One of the most satisfying epilogues ever. It felt right. A good place to end this part of their story. I stand by my review, this was a great one chapter story with a very long prologue. 3
LitLover Posted November 14, 2016 Posted November 14, 2016 Loved it! Oh and Lit: About Jason's thoughts on Drew and his daughter Izzy; I can totally see why he'd think Drew would be overprotective. As a young man, Drew was quite the ladies man, so he'll see himself in the boys that dare show interest in his daughter. lol that's exactly what I was thinking about when I wrote this chapter. haha and thank you everyone 2
Site Moderator Reader1810 Posted November 14, 2016 Site Moderator Posted November 14, 2016 Book two??? I like the way you think Dugh. Book two is a splendid idea for a story project for Lit. 2
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