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Hello! For the past few days, I've been trying to use the "Full Users List" accessible from the link on the main Forum page. It's returning a results page, that is completely blank. I've cleared my cookies, and it's still returning no users. Currently using Firefox 54.0.1 (32-bit), and Windows 10. Both fully up to date.
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A great little story on the eternal fight between the forces of darkness, and teddy bears everywhere. My Teddy Bear rates this story with 10 stars, but have to settle with just five.
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The story overall was good. Interesting enough to keep me going to the end of it. Lots of medical termenology, and a look into the world of internship for doctors.
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Which is why I said good in bed. As an Aries, if he's an Aries too, then I don't need to focus on him.
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I'm less on the "I'm an Aries therefore, my future is this," and more "As an Aries, I can expect them to be fiery, impulsive, and great in bed. Your mileage may vary."
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I only use it to get an idea of what someone's basic personality is. It's surprising how much People act like their Zodiac Signs, even when they don't believe in Astrology. I, myself, am an Aries in both my Sun and Moon signs. My best friend is a Taurus in his Sun and a Scorpio in his Moon. That fits him perfectly, by the way.
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Two words... Gut. Punch. I heard almost those exact same words Miriam used, the day my Father's family disowned me for being Gay. Minus the whole, divorce, and leave your husband part, but the abominations, get yourself cured or die... yeah. Excellent chapter tim. Loved it overall, and happy with the way Louis handled her.
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This story is a Rollercoaster of emotions. From being stun, anxiety, anger, and then relief. It runs the full gambit. It does have a happy ending, and one that was twisted. Loved it.
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This story warmed my heart and brought a tear to my eye. I love the stories, within the story, and the ending brought a smile to my face.
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This story itself is good and interesting. Was an enjoyable read. The three primary characters grow and evolve over the course of the story. There are some interesting themes in it as well. The reason why I rated it four stars, is because of the technical issues. Formatting, grammar, spelling changes of the several words a few times, missing words and other issues were distracting from the over all flow.
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Thank you, Myr for your's and the Staff's hard work here on GA. I'm looking forward to the new changes that are coming, and the info you provided was insightful.
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I liked this rendition of Little Red Riding Hood, a lot. It was fun, an interesting twist on the old fable, and still had its core message. Don't talk to Strangers. Stay on the Path. Keep going Forward.
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A love story that was blended in a SciFi-Fantasy mash up. In my humble opinion, it was a perfect blending of the two story types. Long enough to be a complete story, but makes the reader wonder if a sequel is in the works.
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A very fun Christmas story, about Santa's son. An enjoyable read.
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Individually, this story is a fantastic look at a future where those with Psionics are found, and trained from an early age. It shows the plight of a young teen, who learns his psionic trade and then heads off into a deep undercover assignment. So deep that < redacted >. As mentioned in a different review, I believe this is one of three stories written by Myr, which seems to be in the same universe. I suggest reading them all.
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This is the first of three of Myr's stories, that I'm assuming are in the same story universe. The others being: Psionic Corp - No Return, and A Good Day to be WET. Individually, this story is an excellent SciFi short, that gives the reader a glimpse into the life of a young child soldier in a futuristic world. Questions remain, to entice the reader to want more from this short story. My only con: It's short.
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The plight of young Tristan is one that many can follow. To me, it showed a few phases of his life. Fear of being alone, being rebellious, and finally tragedy at the hand of the one he loved. A great read.
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April's Fool
Brayon reviewed Valkyrie's story in 2017 - Spring - Unintended Consequences & Jagged Edges
This is a story of redemption. One that is intriguing, and grabs hold of your heartstrings and really gives them a good tug. Have tissues ready.-
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This, like most of Myr's shorts, leaves me wanting more. I love this story and the characters in it. I would love to see more of this world as well.
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I can not stress enough, how much this story connected with me. I've never been in the situation that either of the main characters have been in, but I connected with them easily. It was a very touching story, and part of a greater project of anthologies.
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My only complaint was it ended, right as it began. Otherwise, it was a well written short story.
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The historical nature of this story, made it pop for me. It flowed well, and seamlessly. Painted a vivid picture, and I almost felt like I was onboard the ship.
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This was a fun little story that was part of a larger project in an anthology. I recommend it and found the main character very interesting. Would love to see more of Gabriel.
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You didn't tear my heart out this week, tim. But, you had a smile on my face the whole time. Loved the chapter hun. The house was perfect, with the description, and the layout for someone in a wheelchair. I could easily visualize the rooms you described, and the farm itself. I can see Don getting a salmon ladder apparatus, working out in the barn turned home gym. A slab someplace with a basketball hoop, so he can play some wheelchair basketball. It's perfect. Now... who's this chick, and why is she intruding on the boys. *readies a baseball bat to do some knee capping*
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More good prompts. I'm still looking at last weeks.
