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  1. VBlew

    Chapter 19

    That is a very interesting ending/ new beginning. We are all in a quantum field creating our own reality, just most are unaware.
  2. Another tear jerking beginning to what portends to be an epic story. Glad to have you back with a new story.
  3. VBlew

    Chapter 1

    Lovely story of first love, coming back around later in life.
  4. Great chapter, now Otis may not get caught up with the human trafficking that Hudson is investigating, and Hudson is going to be teaching him about dating. While trying to not get involved, let’s see how that turns out. Not so sure about the advice from Missy. Seems like she’s just trying to protect him, but that’s coming from a woman’s perspective.
  5. VBlew

    Chapter 17

    Going back in time, prior to all of the shifting. Is this where we find out what happens to his mother?
  6. VBlew

    Chapter 10

    Seem harsh for JJ I be punished so, but maybe it will bring them together. JJ mustn’t have been a real jerk to Travis in the past.
  7. Great ending to a wonderful story.
  8. VBlew

    Chapter 31

    Vanus opens up to his childhood trauma and is still loved by Bazzelthorpe! now maybe he can deal with the threat better.
  9. I find this topic of the white lion an interesting thread in the story.
  10. Welcome back. Great chapter. So much going on, I’m wondering what she scheming traitors did to have David lose his memory of Ben… and what is Ben planning to do with them all. Jim is so twisted all up, will he try to kill his brother?
  11. Great chapter. Will Talon be wearing white for the wedding?
  12. VBlew

    Chapter 29

    The stage is set, they have now. Both admitted how the frail about each other. The key of the lighter is leading them further on in the case.
  13. VBlew

    Conversations

    Good part of making up. Funny, they have now both been with girls “ all the way” but aren’t ready to take their relationship there? Maybe the gift from dad will help them out.
  14. VBlew

    Chapter 10

    Great chapter, good news is that Jacob now knows there are no rules against being friends with his friends.
  15. VBlew

    The Meantime.

    Glad you’re back. This chapter has answered some questions and raised some more. What is the Eagle’s purpose? Will they all accept the light? I’m guessing yes, as they have formed a bond. Are Novo’s dead companions real or imaginary? Looking forward to more.
  16. Good for Caleb seeking answers. And not a coincidence that he connected with this wise priest and family friend! Now to make amends.
  17. Great Chapter, everyone got to let go of some emotional baggage, and accept the love of their brothers.
  18. Wow. I was so upset with what happened in the last chapter, this rebound sex was off the charts. Now both boys need to apologize and make up, hopefully. Alcohol and drama do lead people to bad decisions, unfortunately.
  19. I love their back and forth banter. They are getting to know a little more about each other.
  20. VBlew

    Chapter 11

    Great ending to a lovely story.
  21. VBlew

    Chapter 27

    Wow, the guys decided to go in the tunnel. Brad gets a surprise.
  22. Otis is quite naive, and Hudson’s act being undercover is messing with them being friendly with each other. Perseverance will be the key here. Hopefully nothing happens to Otis being Hudson’s neighbor, as part of the trafficking going on.
  23. VBlew

    ...Keep Breathing

    This chapter has so much loss. Now we get a glimpse of the pain that Albert has had. And now he has someone new to love him.
  24. Some more progress on what’s causing the memory loss in the men.
  25. VBlew

    Disp Ch 6

    Surprised that Julia too over running the company instead of Joshua’s birth father. This story did start with a falling out, but I thought is was with his father, who is a large shareholder of the Corp.
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