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The conversations with the parents went well. The scene at the gay bar was interesting, if you run into someone you know, then it is likely they are gay too, or very accepting.
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Chapter 12 - Shadows and Light
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Shadows and Light
True love supports you where you are. Manny is doing this for Robby, they will make it through together. -
Another great breakfast and conversation. I’m thinking that someone is making assumptions about the other’s sexuality without talking about it with them….. it may not be what he thinks.
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It seems Alexis being guided by something to find these additional artifacts, hopefully it will remain a positive force.
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Drew seems like he is attracted to Mickey, and really wanted to take care of him. Mickey got some feelings, but wasn’t sure how to interpret them. Looking forward to more on this developing relationship.
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Interesting beginning, both guys wanting to have the other one be safe. Looking forward to the story.
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Interesting that the station chief was going to check on the detectives skills and instead was able to record the bad cops pulling info from Charlie about their crime boss…. Then the FBI shows up… The boys have a good protector in Roger.
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Marc is doing well with his calculations on the exchange with Ernesto, and the additional time mining in this area may yield enough to get his ship in good condition. The relationship Sasha evolves. Marc is a good guy and up front with what he wants, sometimes the other person is not ready for his kind of loving. Who is this mysterious other guy?..
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Matt now has Jakob, who wants to have a relationship with him…. Oscar doesn’t even know what he missed out on. More revealed about the new students, Ralph is put in his place.
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Chapter 9 - Balancing Act
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Balancing Act
It’s nice to see these guys growing together, discussing their issues, and working things out. Manny will at some point need to introduce Robby into the conversation with his parents. The deception with Cindy is just prolonging this, they already accepted him… -
Amazing chapter, so much just in a couple of days. The messages, then communications with Earth. Surprised they spoke with Brazil before communication with Ark V. But there was a threat that they possibly needed to know about. Hopefully it was just dementia… It’s good to see the animals responding nicely to the humans.
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Interesting ending, the murderer got away with the prize. Looking forward to more with these characters, especially Sampson and Troy.
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This is interesting, Ben finally has the courage to tell Justin what he wants. And they both have some feelings. But it would not be good for either of their relationships to have an affair.
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Beautiful ending, even if sad about Gil, in the PostScript. It is a testament to friends helping friends heal from a broken heart.
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Maybe the firm could open an office in Wyoming for Michael? Love that they both realized their affection for each other. Then spent the day in pleasure your partner mode.
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Interesting cruise, and many ideas on what to do better with the artificial reefs they will be making. Lovely way to ask to get married.
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Hopefully he won’t have to wait too long for an emissary to get his return notice to Rym. In the meantime it looks like he has a welcoming place to reside in Brookside.
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Great ending to this mystery story. It was a rough ride. An example of what abuse in a family can lead to. Brilliant writing. Looking forward to more of your writing.
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The parents are being great supporters for both guys.
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Chapter 6 - Close Encounters
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Close Encounters
An olive branch for peace between Cindy and “Manny”. Baby steps. -
The Family That Plays Together
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in The Family That Plays Together
Funny times waking up. What a happy, loving group. -
Oh the plot thickens. The uncle was not just a pedophile messing with his nephew, the police have lots of other evidence now, and he was working for the mob…. Although having him silenced in custody wouldn’t be a bad ending, it wouldn’t help them keep other boys safe….
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Chapter 5 - Fixing Stupid
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Fixing Stupid
Finally a slap strong enough to get him out of his funk. Both Robby and Mason are a little at fault in their relationship. Innuendo is not good enough in a relationship, that has uncommunicated expectations all over it and only leads to hurt, which is what we see in this chapter. Finally they are able to have frank discussions and are healing their relationship. Hopefully Mason did not do too badly that he will lose his scholarship…. -
Great chapter, Troy and Sampson’s tryst was revealed, but led people to believe it was part of the story and not reality… I’m still no closer to sticking a suspect. I’m sure the clues are all there, just not grasping it yet. There are multiple people who could have motive.
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I like how Marc is able to negotiate, treat people fairly, and use his knowledge to help improve the results in his mining, and it looks like i5 will pay off in more improvements to his ship. The fun he is having with Sasha seems good for just a friend with benefits. Looking forward to the sparks flying when he meets his true mate…
