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So the coach is interested, and after they’re no longer students, tha woul relieve him of an authority position…. Open for some fun… but he is married, right?
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There Is Always an Easy Way Out
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in There Is Always an Easy Way Out
Great chapter, but I do have to wonder what this missing brother is going to be like. Seems like Bella didn’t want him there as much as she didn’t like Lyn, maybe vying for Brad’s attention? -
We learned from Seth’s POV that the thumb drive was his.. will he tell Adam about that later on after they reconnect? Adam had a miserable life, but had two great sons from this failed marriage.
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Interesting chapter, Zeke waking up in strange surroundings. Magical storytelling pictographs?? Looking forward to the history lesson.
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Venetia returns & Gray talks
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Venetia returns & Gray talks
The reading/show went well. Loved the after party. Graham and Matt finally get naked in a bed… wonderful chapter, even with the witch making an appearance. -
Seems like Josh may be tied to Cerberus somehow… very interesting chapter, he is also recovering at greater than human speed…was he a special project?
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The Things We Can Never Take Back
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Things We Can Never Take Back
Hearst needs to work quickly. He won’t be bunny boy for much longer. Maybe showing his face and a sincere apology would do them both good. -
Epilogue - Dorjin's Spell
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Epilogue - Dorjin's Spell
The brutal ending of the invaders who killed so many good Earthians. What happens on NextWorld? They will have the knowledge of the humans and possibly still have magic? This was an amazing adventurous story. -
Yes… Kieran finally put the clues together and found the traitor. The trials are complete and Rory has strength again, their daughter is protected. Now on to the right for their kingdoms. Was sad to hear that the prior king, Garran’s love was tortured and killed.
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I thought I was in a completely different story, until it started to come together. The biometric key was something Josh was trying to save when he crawled out of the car. So many questions.
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No longer a virgin. They still are just beginning their sexual exploration. Hot scene.
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So in this new time, he’s captured with a very interesting kink suit, led to the chief, and a very interesting interrogation 😉 Was this marking from his boss on earth? That is connecting him to this god.
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Chapter 39 - Reunion and Loss
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 39 - Reunion and Loss
They rescued the last remaining at a huge sacrifice. Now for the rest to go through the portal to Nextworld hopefully bringing the remaining parts of the ship and island with them. So sad. -
Wow, he had to travel back in time, and age regressed as well. Then apparently is going to have time to learn to use magic. It appears Zeke was hidden from this world for a reason. And really may not be as straight as Luke believes he is.
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Adam, being brought up in such a conservative community couldn’t come out… and knowing what he does about himself, can he have a good marriage? I know many do, but it just seems disingenuous.
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Mike certainly enjoyed that. Rick is being really dominant in this situation. Randy’s turn. Is Rick saving himself for Mike to come in him?
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[Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
This was certainly eye opening, you see people how they present themselves, when their reality is quite different. Great exploration of Lyn’s background. -
Chapter 21: Will Gael leave or give love a chance?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 21: Will Gael leave or give love a chance?
It was all going so well all philosophical about love an relationships, then Wham, the evil monster is back… Gael just needs to kill him and get it over with. -
They have done what they can to save the magical beings Othri can feel. I agree with the others I hope the island and the ship can get to nextworld.
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This guy s exactly what I thought happened to Alan’s head. He freaked out about being more on the gay side of Bi than the Hetro side and had to prove something to himself… now that he has and has admitted it. Maybe he will be romantic with Cal. The kissing was something new for him during sex. And he admitted he wanted more from their relationship than just friends with benefits.
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Anxious start at the new school for Nick. He has an attractive and quiet, interesting roommate. Hopefully he makes some other friends too.
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Interesting world our hero is thrust into. Zeke is the King, even though he’s never been here before? Or was he hiding out on Earth? Then the evil Fornondag is trying to Mary Zelenskyy, and Luke is supposed to have powers… looking forward to more of this tale.
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This doesn’t seem like Alan’s second time bottoming. He was offended last time and now he’s begging for it. Something has definitely changed. Was he trying to woo Cal back or just preserve their relationship, which seems headed for a breakup, especially if Cal wants a boyfriend relationship with Jordan. And Cal needs to be open about his past, and current relationship with Alan so there are no hurt feelings.
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Pembrooke is a menace and not honorable, unlike Ryder who was nothing but honorable. Hopefully the bite does not mean anything, or there is a cure for whatever the bite did to him, and Ryder will recover with Danny’s care. We knew that something was off with Cassandra’s message to Ryder, some ulterior motive, but does it mean the elimination of Ryder’s pack? This cliffhanger leave me wanting the next chapter.
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Act III - You'll Never Walk Alone
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - You'll Never Walk Alone
Ray is going to find his mate!
