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Daddydavek

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  1. Daddydavek

    Chapter 1

    Glad that you liked it. I've never stopped writing, but I am my own worst critic and sometimes I work a story to death...
  2. Daddydavek

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I agree, time can get away from us and we need to keep up with our friends, especially if there has been a falling out...
  3. Daddydavek

    Chapter 1

    Tyler had a middle class upbringing in suburbia. He had been a Boy Scout; went to church every Sunday and embodied almost stereotypical middle class American values. Tyler was upset and found he was out of his comfort zone. He’d been hit-on by his best friend Isaac. Worse, he’d panicked and run and jumped into his Jeep and sped away. They met in kindergarten and found their birthdays were just three days apart. They went to school together all through elementary, middle and high school. The
  4. A short story about best friends.
  5. Daddydavek

    Chapter 12

    An additional high with a Granger fix! It seems that the old admiral is as hidebound and clueless as previously depicted and Granger has had about enough. More Please!
  6. Daddydavek

    Chapter 59

    Well, my happy 4-20 greeting seems to have worked! Even if the chapter forgot the part where the guys light up.... The attack on Goodland still seems surreal and now that they have arrived back in CA, I wonder what the next move of the cartel will be. Of course I am clueless and can't help but wonder what Mark will spring on us next.... More please....and soon too!
  7. Daddydavek

    Chapter 47

    I sincerely hope that Dennis' father had nothing to do with the demise of Jones. As far as the judge who let Jones out on bail so quickly, maybe he needs investigating...
  8. A true compromise is an agreement whereby both parties get much of what they wanted, but not everything....Something many people seem to have forgotten how to make happen. DDK
  9. Daddydavek

    ATGB I

    A very fast read, yet over 6000 words. The writing flows well and conveys so well. I'm guessing some will be put off by CJ's interaction with Karl, but I found it consistent. I think it ends up a bonus that Ceasar separates from E&Y and becomes more involved in family investments. The wedding planning sounds about normal. Starts out intimate and uncomplicated and just grows. Finally, the pre-nup, still a good idea but not worth warring over.
  10. Interesting, but still waiting for the trip to begin....
  11. Drake is starting to get a clue but keeps focusing on his doubts and worry about the possibility of being burned again. Jimmy is still a gem and despite losing it a bit with Drake, I hope he keeps working on him and doesn't give up.
  12. Daddydavek

    Chapter 19

    So I suspect that Klaus will live up to his bargain and Jake will have his schooling paid for, wherever he attends. The question is, who will be the most hard-headed? Jake, believing Klaus was too hard on the one family member he has left or Klaus, who just walked away from the only man to ever really spark his passion? Truly a lose/lose situation unless someone pulls their head out of their ass.
  13. Well told chapter Dodger, but it's a bit bleak for me and hits too close to too many real life stories I've known... edit: I guess I should add that self-medication is a very common reaction to PTSD. PTSD is a stress reaction and the loss of a spouse and having minor children in the family is a major stress situation and we still don't know if perhaps there are delayed stress reactions from his time in service in addition....So yeah I've known too many stories and many don't have happy ever afters...
  14. Daddydavek

    Chapter 46

    Well what you know, there's a conspiracy to take down Daniel and one of the pawns named Dennis decided he could pull the same shit on the coach. This could get really ugly.
  15. You can't pick your relatives but Tibs sounds like a real loser asking for the proverbial "second" chance, something Robert's dad seems to have done at least once too often already. Now Adam has to think about his son, and the adjustments they both must make. Life can sure get complicated in hurry.
  16. Does that mean it's better to be a wise ass than a smart ass?
  17. Rest in Peace Moggy!
  18. A very interesting take on something that is more common than many want to admit. Sexual confusion and latency are not fake news. There are people who are born this way, meaning either really straight or really gay and there are people who fall more to the middle of Kinsey's scale and it takes time to sort it out as to whether they are straight, bi or gay. Now this does not excuse anyone for leading someone on and then dumping them. Richard's actions and the way he handled things have had a long lasting effect on Drake and apparently Richard and that means Bernadette too. The kiss just confirmed that Richard has ongoing issues and hopefully Drake will not make them his too. Unfortunately, our golden boy Jimmy is not in the chapter. It would be nice if Drake has the courage to give him a blow-by-blow account of Richard's story as that may be the thing that makes him sort himself out about how he feels about it all....and that may give Jimmy a well-deserved chance. Just hoping!
  19. Daddydavek

    Chapter 18

    Klaus is now officially beyond smitten. Jake is way beyond that. Diaz and the gangs seem bound to make life challenging in the near future. Klaus seems prepared to handle that...but what about Jake?
  20. Jamie finds Sam and is leaving on an extended trip. Will he be there when Jamie returns? Will Jamie?
  21. The back story on Duncan was deftly told. That Rob was able to be frank talking about sex with his still almost a stranger dad was surprising and Adam as a first time parent handled it well. Meeting the grand parents was interesting, but no mention of the rest of the family implied there was none....then out of the blue an estranged brother Tobit is sprung on us and for the first time in fifteen years wants to talk. And you leave us hanging
  22. Daddydavek

    Stuck

    Good job, but blaming the baby? Really? jk
  23. I think Jimmy is right to trust Richard to clear some things up. Jimmy is still a golden guy in my opinion and if Drake doesn't wake up soon and realize that Jimmy isn't playing a game, then he deserves to lose him too.
  24. Daddydavek

    Chapter 17

    Jake is either a real diamond in the rough or a master manipulator. I think Klaus has it right.
  25. Daddydavek

    Arrival

    Interesting start.
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