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Ravings of a Rabid Werewolf - Poetry by Wolf - 38. Through the Mist

Th’ morning’s thick drow obscures th’ dark loch;

Shrouding from view even th’ naurby rock.

A group gathers near, thair cuppa in hand,

To await th’ view that wull be sae grand.

 

A ghostly aberration starts tae form;

Slowly taking shape oan this cauld, grey morn.

First lines 'n' blocks 'n' finally a roof;

It tries tae bade hidden while bein' aloof.

 

Th’ fog slowly lifts lik’ a freish bride’s veil;

Giving a stunning view fur a’ tae hail.

At last, the sight we’ve a’ longed tae behold;

Eilean Donan's wonders start to unfold.

Aye, it looks lik' spelling errors, bit trust me thay aren't. Ye cannae write in bonnie Scotland wi'oot th' proper accent at least wance. Be thankful ah didnae write in Gaelic. ;)
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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On 8/7/2019 at 12:32 PM, AC Benus said:

A great use of rhyming couplets. The phonetics of it all is pitch perfect. Great job! 

It was fun using this format. Thanks you for your continued guidance as I try new things.

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On 8/7/2019 at 1:53 PM, Parker Owens said:

I liked this very much, and dinna fret. I ken wha you meant. 

Thank you, Parker :)

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On 8/7/2019 at 3:12 PM, MichaelS36 said:

I agree with my husband:  Perfect!

Thanks, Mike. :)

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On 8/7/2019 at 6:47 PM, mollyhousemouse said:

so wonderful Wolfie!
i can hear the accent in my head so clearly
thanks again for taking us on this trip with You

Thanks, Molly :)

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On 8/8/2019 at 6:03 PM, JeffreyL said:

The Scottish accent adds a nice touch to a lovely poem. Thank you. 

Thank you, Jeffrey :)  I dinnae think this would have worked on any other the others I wrote during the trip.

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My paternal grandfather was from Scotland.  He was a poet, and frequently wrote with the Scots accent, so i had no trouble at all understanding this one, and new they weren't spelling mistakes :D

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14 hours ago, Bre Czaroux said:

My paternal grandfather was from Scotland.  He was a poet, and frequently wrote with the Scots accent, so i had no trouble at all understanding this one, and new they weren't spelling mistakes :D

Thank you, Bre :)

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