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Ravings of a Rabid Werewolf - Poetry by Wolf - 25. The Sentinels

Snow capped peaks surround.

Silent sentinels watching;

Protecting the lands,

And streams flowing below them;

As wondrous awe consumes me.

 

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A familiar road –

Cattle grazing on one side

Across from horses;

Several whinny and some snort,

Welcoming you and me home.

 

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You see me tapping away,

Trying to capture my thoughts.

Glancing around I take in what I see.

Beauty surrounds on all sides

As we head to your childhood home

Yet none of natures offerings

Can compare to my wonderful boy.

I wasn't planning on writing while I'm away for Christmas, but some sights and emotions just can't be denied their dues. :) 
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This makes me think it's not just about homecoming, it's also an ode to the West. I live in western western Washington State and your poem makes me think of my home state. Thanks and happy holidays. 

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4 hours ago, Backwoods Boy said:

Quite perfect!  Enjoy your holiday.  ❤️

Thank you Backwoods :hug:

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2 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Your observations are beautiful. I’m glad you couldn’t resist...

Thank you so much, Parker :hug:

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2 hours ago, JeffreyL said:

This makes me think it's not just about homecoming, it's also an ode to the West. I live in western western Washington State and your poem makes me think of my home state. Thanks and happy holidays. 

Thank you, Jeff :hug: Those peaks in Washington State hopefully remain silent sentinels.

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I love how you naturally thought to compose in Tanka form. I think the first two are great and show how flexible this type of poem can be. Keep up the great work! 

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6 minutes ago, AC Benus said:

I love how you naturally thought to compose in Tanka form. I think the first two are great and show how flexible this type of poem can be. Keep up the great work! 

Thank you for your continual support, guidance, and encouragement @AC Benus :hug:  

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i've gotten myself confused... read these and thought i'd posted something but i see i have not!  AC is right, of course, these are wonderful.  i can feel the happiness flow out through your pen (okay keyboard, but that's not so romantic). These are gorgeous, Wolfie.. i am so glad You are happy. xo

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sometimes the words just need to come out

they don't care if you are on vacation or not

thanks for listening and letting them flow

 

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13 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

i've gotten myself confused... read these and thought i'd posted something but i see i have not!  AC is right, of course, these are wonderful.  i can feel the happiness flow out through your pen (okay keyboard, but that's not so romantic). These are gorgeous, Wolfie.. i am so glad You are happy. xo

Thank you, tim :hug: It's truly a beautiful place to be and wonderful people to be around.

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1 hour ago, mollyhousemouse said:

sometimes the words just need to come out

they don't care if you are on vacation or not

thanks for listening and letting them flow

 

You're very correct. I think being on vacation relaxes my mind so I appreciate what I'm seeing all the more.

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Just now, WolfM said:

Thank you, tim :hug: It's truly a beautiful place to be and wonderful people to be around.

You paid a price to be there, every second You have bought and paid for... just enjoy it.

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