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Ravings of a Rabid Werewolf - Poetry by Wolf - 6. Submission

The last few poems I've asked for help to polish and correct any errors, but decided to give it a shot without, so hopefully there aren't too many errors in this. It started out by writing the

The moon’s gentle glow begins its rise

As coyote in the distance howl at its full glory;

Candles of leather and cinnamon give off their scent

That’s carried on a light breeze around us.

You kneel before me and bow your head

As your hands clasp behind your back;

With a slight of your eyes you look to the side

And glimpse what you so desire.

I grasp it at both ends with steady hands

And feel the soft leather under my touch;

As I fix the strap around your strong neck

My collar finds its home on you.

 

 

 

Submissive is what you call yourself

And you refer to me as your Dom;

Yet a simple safe word from you

Will always commands my actions to end.

Who is it that is really in control

And does it even matter;

You wear my collar and my cuffs

And it is I who is at your command.

My flogger will never touch your skin

Without at least an approving nod;

This dance we do, I submit to you

As I dominate my willing sub.

 

 

 

I’ve taken you to that special place

That seems to live between worlds;

The point where pain becomes pleasure

And desire becomes fulfillment.

I take in the beauty of your glowing skin

With the light red stripes across your back;

The evidence of your release just makes me smile

While I let you free from your bonds.

We switch from the strokes of the leather strap

To cuddling under the stars;

As I brush the stray hairs from your face

While you fall asleep in my arms.

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4 hours ago, mogwhy said:

you brought the scene to life with your words. well done

Thank you Mogwhy :)

3 hours ago, chris191070 said:

Really good, brought the scene to life

Thanks Chris ;)

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2 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

You're full of suprises Wolf.. shall i call you Sir?

Thanks tim :)  It's fun to surprise people.  There's a fun sense of satisfaction that my D/s poem is chapter 6 and brings my poetry word count up to 666 :devil:

23 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

A wonderful description of D/s. Greetings, WolfM, always nice to meet a fellow Dom. 

Thank you Michael.  A privilege to meet you here.

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19 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

Absolutely feckin beautiful Wolfie. Such a sexy side to you shown with respect and honesty.

Thank you JP ;)  I'll admit, I thought of you and tim as soon as I hit publish.

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7 minutes ago, WolfM said:

Thank you JP ;)  I'll admit, I thought of you and tim as soon as I hit publish.

We've talked about this before. Safe to call you sir now?

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You are really growing in your ability and confidence. Your poem is an interesting look at the roles in a dominant/submissive relationship. I especially enjoyed the tenderness in the last few lines. My only criticism is just a grammatical correction. In the middle stanza, I believe the line "And it is I who is at your command" should be "And it is I who am at your command." Thanks Wolf for another good poem. Keep up the good work!

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I have always believed that the sub has the control. They control the actions, pace, and intensity. Three words: go, slow, stop (but not those exact words) control every move and action the Dom takes. However, once the sub submits and gives the go, they are at the Dom's mercy unless one of the other two words are said. That's why my control words have always been either in another language or really random off the wall words that don't normally come up during sex...like kumquat or pastrami. 

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On 8/10/2017 at 8:31 PM, BlindAmbition said:

We've talked about this before. Safe to call you sir now?

I'm going to just grin and leave it there, boy ;)

23 hours ago, JeffreyL said:

You are really growing in your ability and confidence. Your poem is an interesting look at the roles in a dominant/submissive relationship. I especially enjoyed the tenderness in the last few lines. My only criticism is just a grammatical correction. In the middle stanza, I believe the line "And it is I who is at your command" should be "And it is I who am at your command." Thanks Wolf for another good poem. Keep up the good work!

Thanks Jeff.  My confidence, yes, my ability... we'll see :)

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12 hours ago, JayT said:

I have always believed that the sub has the control. They control the actions, pace, and intensity. Three words: go, slow, stop (but not those exact words) control every move and action the Dom takes. However, once the sub submits and gives the go, they are at the Dom's mercy unless one of the other two words are said. That's why my control words have always been either in another language or really random off the wall words that don't normally come up during sex...like kumquat or pastrami. 

Thanks JayT :)  That was actually my thought when I started writing this.  It was just going to be the center portion talking about how the sub is the one controlling me.  His slow and safe word are commands to me, his limits are discussed before anything starts, I try to push him to his limit and bring his the pleasure he craves in whatever form that is (and yes I get my own in the process).  When I wrote the other two, it just seemed right to combine them, though I did consider posting each one on it's own.

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1 minute ago, WolfM said:

Thanks JayT :)  That was actually my thought when I started writing this.  It was just going to be the center portion talking about how the sub is the one controlling me.  His slow and safe word are commands to me, his limits are discussed before anything starts, I try to push him to his limit and bring his the pleasure he craves in whatever form that is (and yes I get my own in the process).  When I wrote the other two, it just seemed right to combine them, though I did consider posting each one on it's own.

They work best together I honestly believe...The beggining shows that the Dom is in charge at the moment, the middle shows the hidden agreement/truth between the two...The end shows how that agreement manifests in reality. 

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3 minutes ago, JayT said:

They work best together I honestly believe...The beggining shows that the Dom is in charge at the moment, the middle shows the hidden agreement/truth between the two...The end shows how that agreement manifests in reality. 

That's what I finally thought as well.  From setting the mood to taking care of the subs needs after the scene is finished.

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38 minutes ago, WolfM said:

Thanks JayT :)  That was actually my thought when I started writing this.  It was just going to be the center portion talking about how the sub is the one controlling me.  His slow and safe word are commands to me, his limits are discussed before anything starts, I try to push him to his limit and bring his the pleasure he craves in whatever form that is (and yes I get my own in the process).  When I wrote the other two, it just seemed right to combine them, though I did consider posting each one on it's own.

Sir,

 You honor our lifestyle with love, honesty and care. Especially at end when you show the subs aftercare 

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what a wonderful picture you paint with your words, WolfM

any sub would be lucky indeed to have such a Dom

 

again, thanks for sharing this with us

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2 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

Sir,

 You honor our lifestyle with love, honesty and care. Especially at end when you show the subs aftercare 

Aftercare is one of the best parts, especially with his head wresting on my chest.

1 hour ago, mollyhousemouse said:

what a wonderful picture you paint with your words, WolfM

any sub would be lucky indeed to have such a Dom

 

again, thanks for sharing this with us

Thank you Molly :)

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You paint a picture so fully and vividly, I can see it before my eyes. It lingers in my mind. And you make clear that the power relationship you describe is twofold. It is finely balanced, yet each must be for the other exactly what the other needs, exactly as their spirits demand. Beautifully done. 

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On 9/21/2017 at 7:15 PM, Parker Owens said:

You paint a picture so fully and vividly, I can see it before my eyes. It lingers in my mind. And you make clear that the power relationship you describe is twofold. It is finely balanced, yet each must be for the other exactly what the other needs, exactly as their spirits demand. Beautifully done. 

Thank you Parker :hug:The power relationship was the biggest point I wanted to convey with this.  I may be the Dom, but at times my sub is the one controlling me and when we work together it is great fun for us both.

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Reading more and learning new things.  This helps me understand a type of relationship that I struggle with philosophically. :) 

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On 10/16/2019 at 3:37 PM, Backwoods Boy said:

Reading more and learning new things.  This helps me understand a type of relationship that I struggle with philosophically. :) 

I think it's something a lot of people have philosophical issues with. Many don't understand or don't wish to. I do talk about using a leather strap on him in this. The general response is, "How could you hit someone who's tied up?" The short answer is I don't ever hit him. He takes pleasure from the strap or other implement and it's applied in a safe and caring manner. There is a comfort to both of us in assuming control of another or surrendering it. Like any other relationship, treating each other with care, respect, and love is what's important. :hug:

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3 hours ago, WolfM said:

I think it's something a lot of people have philosophical issues with. Many don't understand or don't wish to. I do talk about using a leather strap on him in this. The general response is, "How could you hit someone who's tied up?" The short answer is I don't ever hit him. He takes pleasure from the strap or other implement and it's applied in a safe and caring manner. There is a comfort to both of us in assuming control of another or surrendering it. Like any other relationship, treating each other with care, respect, and love is what's important. :hug:

I would be one who would wish to understand, and your poem was more helpful than some careful explanations have been.  The power of poetry reveals itself again.  :) 

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This one brings back many fond memories of many wonderful experiences over the years. I'm old now - too old and frail to play the way I used to. The first time I ever watched a live flogging, I wondered how anyone could get off on letting themselves be beat upon. But as I watched, I realized that the Dom was working his ass off to give the sub exactly what he wanted and needed.  I was fascinated and began to explore. As I said - fond memories. Thank you.

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On 4/2/2022 at 5:19 PM, Lt.Mac said:

This one brings back many fond memories of many wonderful experiences over the years. I'm old now - too old and frail to play the way I used to. The first time I ever watched a live flogging, I wondered how anyone could get off on letting themselves be beat upon. But as I watched, I realized that the Dom was working his ass off to give the sub exactly what he wanted and needed.  I was fascinated and began to explore. As I said - fond memories. Thank you.

Thank you Lt.Mac. It's not an activity I'm overly fond of since it's too close to negative experiences I've had, but my husband enjoys it from time to time and I'll do most anything for him. I worked with people to learn how to safely and properly administer the flogger. When it's done just right, and I see the pleasure he feels, it's worth it.

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