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    Dragon II

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in Dragon II

    Thanks, Starrynight22. These little prompts get posted sporadically, but there is a Wanderer II that is in development.
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    Great minds think alike. I was thinking of doing a Topic Tuesday on the subject as well. I will defer to you though, Comsie. I've done a RetCon on my the Half-Elven Warlock story. After discussing it with a local friend (not the ones from my Topic Tuesday: Beware of Advice), I realized I had some big plot holes, and everything that was published got revamped and re-edited. For online, and serial posted stories, like what you and I post a lot, I see RetCons as par for the course. They help in the creative process. Most Role-Playing companies, and Comicbook companies, judiciously use RetConing in order to control the direction of new stories. I see it as a Vital Tool, in our toolbox as serial posters.
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    All Your Ducks

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in All Your Ducks

    Damn it... someone is cutting onions... Excellent work as always, tim. I love how you started and ended with the diary entry.
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    Almost ready for the editors. There are some parts, I'm trying to make plausible.
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    Chapter 3 has been reposted with new Edits.
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    Five for Friday

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Five for Friday

    Excellent as always my friend.
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    I was planning on trying the Overnight Oats, after reading tim's blog, and we just haven't been to the store yet to get the ingredients. But, it's on the list for when we go.
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    Chapter 1

    Brayon commented on Sam Wyer's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I loved these characters, and I'm glad to see that you decided to expand their world. The writing flowed well, the dialogue was good. Excellent all around.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    Thanks, Agent D (International Spy). I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for reading and for the feedback.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    Thanks for reading, Deville. I'll revisit them later on sometime.
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    The Last Two Days

    Brayon commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The Last Two Days

    Excellent poems, tim. April 29th's was a nice reflection. Very thoughtful after the event of last week. April 30's, however, I see it differently from the other commenters. It reminds me of relationships. Notably, an old relationship, that may have resparked, and you're giving it another go... until to you find the spectors from the past still there, and call it off again. Hoping for a new relationship with someone more trustworthy.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    No offense taken, but it took me a moment to get what you said. LOL Reading comments when you first wake up. Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    Thanks for reading, and for the feedback, Dolores. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    Thanks, Caz! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    Thanks, miss molly. I will defiantly revisit this genre in the future.
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    A fun fantasy adventure. I bet Azar is a Divine Soul Sorcerer! Loved it.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    Thanks, Renee. I really appreciate the feedback, and I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to write. I think I may need to do another steampunk piece in the future.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    Thanks, Puppilull. I'm just getting into that genre and had just read Dreamspinner Press' Steampunk anthology when I got the idiom. I had to go that route. LOL. Yes, it was very fortunate for Lord Tillerson to get into the position he did with the King. When the opportunity arises, sometimes, you have to go for it.
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    I liked your take on the idiom and the interesting tidbit on saltwater fish.
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    Excellent story!
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    Great Story, Agent D! I loved it.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    Thanks for reading, Comicfan. The other story was part of the Forbidden Love Newsletter game that Cia did for Valentine's Day. I had a lot of people ask for a follow up on it, but that story ended with no way to continue. So, I felt this was a good way to link the two, but at the same time, the first one isn't really needed.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    Thanks for reading and for the feedback, jp. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    Thanks, Mac! Steampunk was the first thing that popped into my head, and it felt right. I appreciate the feedback.
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    The Escape

    Brayon commented on Brayon's story chapter in The Escape

    Thanks, Reader1810. People wanted more of Edwin and Owen, but their story was done. This way, they can inspire others.
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