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Salvation - 16. Chapter 16

I smiled as we walked back to the office. “I think you are going to like this case.”

“Yes, it’s just what I needed to take my mind off my other problems. We need everything you can find on this company. Also, check and see if there were any lawsuits against them.”

Judy smiled; investigative work was right up her alley.

I went to the newspaper office that covered the story of my lost son and his killer. I wanted a copy of their coverage. As it turned out, I made copies of several days of content. I had the name of the man who killed him, but not the child’s name. I could use some of this as a background for my speech at the UN.

Peter arrived on time, riding home, “Sir, they started to dig out the pool today. I told them to take the extra dirt to the far corner of the property. They said they would smooth it out and seed it when they are done. It's going to be a large pool.”

“We need to watch that the boys don’t fall into the hole. If the dirt is going to be smoothed out, maybe that would be a good place for the boys to start a garden.”

I smiled as we drove home. One thing leads to another, and before you know it, those young boys are now men. I need to talk to Jon and finalize his college costs, sort out a place for him to stay, and set an allowance.

In a way, this is a milestone and a happy one at that. Although I hate to lose the boys but what better place to lose them. He may not realize it, but he will be setting the pattern for all of the boys that will choose to follow him. Why does life give you bittersweet chocolate?

“Sir, you seem lost in thought?”

“I was thinking of Jon and him leaving us. It’s hard to accept he’ll be gone, but yet it’s also happy to know he’ll be going to college and starting a life of his own.”

“I take it he hasn’t spoken to you yet.”

“About?”

“He asked me if I’d consider driving him to college so he could stay home.”

“He wants to stay at home? I’d think he would look with excitement to be somewhat on his own.”

“No, I think he’s afraid of being on his own.”

“I’d love for him to stay at home, but sooner or later, he must make the break."

“True, but rather than all at once, maybe a little at a time, he needs confidence in himself.”

“I wonder if he’d like a car, he could drive himself to school.”

“If it’s all right with you, I’d like to drive him to school. We talk a lot, he’s a very smart, and I enjoy our talks. I think he looks at me as an older brother.”

I looked at Peter. Yes, I could see the older brother. If that’s how Jon looks at him, then I’m glad. Peter would be a solid friend and could provide some guidance to Jon.

“Peter, you have never married.”

“No, before my driving schedule was erratic. I’d make a date only to have to cancel. Now it’s different and in confidence, there is a young lady that works in town, we have been seeing each other.”

“Really!! You have to bring her to dinner at the house. You know there’s a clause in your agreement that states I must approve of any girl you date.”

He looked at me in fear.

“Peter, I’m kidding, but I’d like to meet her. I’m happy for you.” I wonder how I’ll feel when the boys start dating.

Pulling into the driveway, I noticed several men installing a fence across the front of the property. It didn’t take long for Sal to get started on the fence. I wonder if he would come and work for me. I need to ask Alex about him.

There was my welcoming committee, who runs and jumps on me, Charlie and Vasily. “Hi Dad”

“Hi boys” The other boys gather around, and I knew something was up. “What’s happening, boys?”

“Dad, come and look outside.”

The pool hole was completed, and there were steel bars stacked on the ground. There were piles of stones, as well. The contractors were moving fast.

“Dad, when are they going to be finished?”

“I’m not sure. I need to ask the contractor for a schedule.”

The boys were happy. I felt good. It was about time there were smiles on their face instead of fear in their eyes.

I changed into casual clothes, of course, I had company.

“Boys, let’s go and get something to drink and see what Gram is cooking for dinner.”

I had two boys holding my hands as we walked to the kitchen. I got hugs from the boys as we met them. Walking into the kitchen, guess who was sitting at the bar eating.

“Alex, I think I should move a bed in here for you.”

“Hi, Carleton, I guess you noticed that Sal has started putting up the security fence.”

“Yes, he moves fast. Who are the contractors?”

“A firm recommended by my dad. Sal is familiar with them. He said the embassies use them because of the sophisticated security systems. He said you’ll know when a breeze blows against your fence.”

“I think that’s a little exaggeration, but I understand the intent. Has he said anything to you about going to work for me?”

“You can ask himself, he’s right behind you.”

I turned, he was so close I jumped. “I’m sorry I startled you.”

“I saw the men working on the fence. You really move fast.”

“I didn’t expect to move this fast, but I was told they wanted it done before your talk at the UN.”

“Are they expecting trouble, Alex? What haven’t you told me?”

“They aren’t expecting any trouble, but why take the chance. You are very important to my father. I think he thinks he has adopted you. Carleton, you don’t fully understand the impact you have had on powerful men in Europe.”

I just looked into their eyes, and before I could say anything, two boys tugged on my hands. I looked at the smiling faces, thinking I don’t care what impact I may have had on those individuals. I care what impact I have on these boys.

I sat down on a stool, and soon I had two boys on my lap, smiling at me as Maria set a coffee in front of me and chocolate milk in front of them. The smiles, as the boys squirmed into a comfortable position on my bony knees, is what matters the most.

“Hey Dad”

“Hi, Mathew, what’s up.

“Dad, can we put up a basketball hoop.”

“Sure, I’ll get Peter to help you. You are going to need the hoop.”

“They are going to need a solid floor as well. You can’t play on dirt.”

“I’ll get the contractors that are building the pool on it.”

“I’ll take care of it, Carleton.”

“Thanks Sal, but do you know about basketball. That sport isn’t played much in Europe.”

“No, but I have been watching it on the television. I have an idea, and I can use Peter I’m sure he knows about it.”

“You know I would’ve thought that they would want a soccer field. That’s a popular sport in Europe.”

As Maria refilled our cups, “That’s becoming a popular sport here as well.”

The boys drifted in, and I had to go and see the conservatory, and the orchard. This was getting to be a daily routine. Nothing changed day to day, but it’s time I spend with them that counts. With 30 plus boys, individual time with each, except at bedtime, is a premium. I never realized how much of a premium until I heard the boys talking about sitting next to me when we have dinner.

I needed to start paying attention to the boys, each one, and not as a group.

That evening after dinner, I went to my office and created a list, the boy’s name, and age. I needed to plan something with each boy. I listed activities that I could share, dining out, sport games, movies, places of interest, shopping. I needed more, of course, who did I turn to, Judy and Peter.

I ended up with a list of 12 different activities, including museums and art galleries. Some I could do with several of the boys, like the twins, but I needed to make sure I did something alone with each one.

I have edited this chapter and removed the statement concerning dogs since I hadn't included how the boys got the dogs. my bad

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Great chapter, yes it does seem that there is an it of a gap ,but an awesome chapter,, time definitely moves on 

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23 minutes ago, mrbossmant said:

Is it just me or is there a part missing ? 

There is no part missing, What do you think is missing, maybe I can clear it upon for you

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I wasn't thinking a part was missing but what I was going to say is the I didn't know it was 30 boys.I assumed Alex had been bringing them.Well next chapter explain how all this happened the dogs also.Also are the new rooms finished?As far as Carleton getting to know each boy individually he's not only a dad but sort of like a 24/7 school teacher

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13 minutes ago, Buz said:

I must admit, I did check the prev chapter to make sure myself :) 

Also, he said he went to check on the dogs. They have dogs? Introduction to the Dogs please.

 

I am sorry, I didn't find anything about dogs in this chapter. It was mentioned that the boys wanted a dog, but in my review Carleton hasn't got a dog yet

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16 minutes ago, Buz said:

I must admit, I did check the prev chapter to make sure myself :) 

Also, he said he went to check on the dogs. They have dogs? Introduction to the Dogs please.

 

I didn't find anything about checking on the dogs. At least in my review I didn't see anything about dogs except in an earlier chapter the boys asked about a dog.

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7 minutes ago, CLJobe said:

I am sorry, I didn't find anything about dogs in this chapter. It was mentioned that the boys wanted a dog, but in my review Carleton hasn't got a dog yet

Yeah I looked through it again and no mention of dogs.Although funny I was skimming fast through the words and for a brief second I thought I saw the word Dogs lol.I bet that's what happened to @Buz

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4 minutes ago, weinerdog said:

I wasn't thinking a part was missing but what I was going to say is the I didn't know it was 30 boys.I assumed Alex had been bringing them.Well next chapter explain how all this happened the dogs also.Also are the new rooms finished?As far as Carleton getting to know each boy individually he's not only a dad but sort of like a 24/7 school teacher

In one of the earlier chapters. Alex mentioned about having more boys, that was what led Carleton looking for more bedrooms, i.e. attic

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Mr Jobe i've found this chapter a bit random. Things just don't match with the previous chapter, as who is Jon ? Sal? Alex is in Carleton's house?

Your messing with my head.😂

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48 minutes ago, CLJobe said:

In one of the earlier chapters. Alex mentioned about having more boys, that was what led Carleton looking for more bedrooms, i.e. attic

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The boys drifted in, and I had to go and see the dogs, the conservatory, and the orchard. This was getting to be a daily routine.

Also who is Sal ?

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Thought that as well, especially when the dogs were mentioned.

Good story though and such prolific output.

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Great chapter. But very confusing, seems quite a time jump. We see him going to bed in London and then find out nothing about weather he rescued any boys. Then we have a swimming pool and 30 boys.

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26 minutes ago, chris191070 said:

Great chapter. But very confusing, seems quite a time jump. We see him going to bed in London and then find out nothing about weather he rescued any boys. Then we have a swimming pool and 30 boys.

Weird chapter.

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2 hours ago, weinerdog said:

Yeah I looked through it again and no mention of dogs.Although funny I was skimming fast through the words and for a brief second I thought I saw the word Dogs lol.I bet that's what happened to @Buz

The boys drifted in, and I had to go and see the dogs, the conservatory, and the orchard. This was getting to be a daily routine. 

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Okay I as well an totally missing something. Last chapter was of him Europe, having a meeting talking about exchange rate. No mention of it being over. This chapter starts. With pool work, 30 boys, dogs, not mention of the rooms being finished in attic or how he came about other boys. If I'm correct as of last chapter he only had 12 boys. I thing there's more than one chapter missing here. 

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13 minutes ago, James B. said:

The boys drifted in, and I had to go and see the dogs, the conservatory, and the orchard. This was getting to be a daily routine. 

 

6 minutes ago, James B. said:

Okay I as well an totally missing something. Last chapter was of him Europe, having a meeting talking about exchange rate. No mention of it being over. This chapter starts. With pool work, 30 boys, dogs, not mention of the rooms being finished in attic or how he came about other boys. If I'm correct as of last chapter he only had 12 boys. I thing there's more than one chapter missing here. 

Finally found it thank you.As far as the 30 boys I assumed Alex was  bringing them but you're right Mr Jobe fertile mind might be going faster then his  pen

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13 hours ago, weinerdog said:

I wasn't thinking a part was missing but what I was going to say is the I didn't know it was 30 boys.I assumed Alex had been bringing them.Well next chapter explain how all this happened the dogs also.Also are the new rooms finished?As far as Carleton getting to know each boy individually he's not only a dad but sort of like a 24/7 school teacher

Carleton makes an effort to give his attention to each boy. Wouldn't surprise me to see him  build a school

 

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9 hours ago, weinerdog said:

 

Finally found it thank you.As far as the 30 boys I assumed Alex was  bringing them but you're right Mr Jobe fertile mind might be going faster then his  pen

That is a possibility All will be cleared, read on.

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Gentlemen: I must apologize for this chapter. The inclusion of dogs was an error on my part. I write about two-three  chapters ahead, and evidently I mixed up some of my future chapters. I have edited this chapter and if you check it, you'll find that the statement concerning the dogs, has been edited. My bad

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In a word, CONTINUITY.

There Is a gap between chapter 15 and 16 that requires fixing, or an explanation. But we also have to remember these are Carleton's recollections written in his 'book' (diary) and perhaps with age he's having a brain fart.

However, the editor in me would suggest something to fill the gap like this: 

   "I can't be it's been 5 years since my last big meeting in London. The one that made me a lot more money and allowed me to bring home new sons.

     Since my first son came to live with me,  I've gone from 1 to 12 boys, gained some pet dogs, and had a massive renovation to the house to where I now have 30 boys living here. Some are graduating high school and are getting ready to go off to college. But in my quiet moments, my memory always goes back to my first lost son"

It fills the gap and sets the stage for future chapters until we eventually come back to the future with our new owner and Steven talking about carrying on 'The Trust'.

'Ed',

 

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9 minutes ago, Anton_Cloche said:

In a word, CONTINUITY.

There Is a gap between chapter 15 and 16 that requires fixing, or an explanation. But we also have to remember these are Carleton's recollections written in his 'book' (diary) and perhaps with age he's having a brain fart.

However, the editor in me would suggest something to fill the gap like this: 

   "I can't be it's been 5 years since my last big meeting in London. The one that made me a lot more money and allowed me to bring home new sons.

     Since my first son came to live with me,  I've gone from 1 to 12 boys, gained some pet dogs, and had a massive renovation to the house to where I now have 30 boys living here. Some are graduating high school and are getting ready to go off to college. But in my quiet moments, my memory always goes back to my first lost son"

It fills the gap and sets the stage for future chapters until we eventually come back to the future with our new owner and Steven talking about carrying on 'The Trust'.

'Ed',

 

You will have to bear with this old man. Your suggestion would take me to the last section of this story which would leave out some interesting interactions;. 

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